[System-Based] [Feel-Good] [Devaluation] [Wuxia Online Game]
Can you believe it? I got pulled into version 3.0 of Where Winds Meet, and the entire server’s combat power suddenly dropped by a factor of 10,000!
Other players can barely scratch minions, dealing 1 damage per hit. I throw a punch that deals 120,000 critical damage and slam the monster straight into a wall!
Other players’ Golden Wound Medicine barely works, restoring 0.05 health per second. One dab of my ordinary medicine restores 500 health per second, and I can heal the entire team in a group battle with one hand!
The server’s top player, Xiao Jinye, brags that his 40,000 combat power makes him invincible. But when I check his true stats, it turns out this guy only has 4 points of real combat power?
And it gets even crazier: I activate a System that lets me exchange 1:100,000 for treasure money, trade one fragment for a top-tier gold set with maxed stats, and even fool GM Lin Shutong with fake stats when she investigates me for cheating!
Then a Khitan boss with 300,000 real combat power lays siege to the city, and players across the server beg me to carry them: “Boss! Please share just a tiny bit of your combat power!”
I pull out a manual of Taijiquan. “Let’s get one thing straight: if you’re going to follow me, don’t blame your weak combat power on devaluation!
“You’re weak because you’re actually weak. It’s not the version’s fault!”
Not bad, not sloppy
The use of the environment in combat is well written! For example, the terrain of Guixu Plain and the confrontation between white light and black fog make the fighting more layered.
The writing style has a martial arts flavor, but occasionally modern words are thrown in and it makes it a bit confusing. For example, would it be better to replace "critical threshold" with "Tiangang pole number"?
The supporting role creation needs to be strengthened! Except for the protagonist and Su Yu, everyone else is like a tool man. For example, Lin Ah Rang's teammates should be given more roles.
There is no sense of violation of "forced insertion in the real world"! The foreshadowing of the reality line is all related to the main line, not an irrelevant plot that suddenly pops up.
The core setting of "fairness" is implemented well! It is not just a slogan, but it is embodied in specific rules such as spiritual pulse sharing and free basic treatment, so that readers can actually feel the changes.
The plot progress is a bit slow at times, especially in the foreshadowing chapters. You can appropriately compress the description and speed up the pace. After all, online readers have limited patience.
The fighting drama is well written, but the literary drama should also be indispensable! There should be more in-depth conversations and conceptual collisions between characters, which can make the characters more three-dimensional.
Let's start the villain's story line quickly! I am very curious about why Chen Mo became the agent and what has he experienced?
The description of the vitality of the prehistoric world is so touching. It hurts when it gets hurt, and gets angry when it protects its children, like a real mother.