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As a Pokémon fan and arcana fan, Kanata traveled through time and space to the Pokémon world. At the beginning, he picked up an egg in the ruins. He originally thought that he would get a super rare Pokémon or a quasi-god at the beginning, but he didn't expect that the egg actually hatched. Six years later, after hatching, it turned out to be the monster "Gomora" among Ultraman. Recalling the ruins where the egg was picked up again, Kanata put Gomora into the Poké Ball and embarked on a journey to find the truth about the ruins and become an alternative Pokémon master.
Reader comments
I don't know if there will be King Red in the future. If there is, you can refer to it.
Pokémon: King Red Pokémon: EX King Red (MEGA)
Attribute: grid + rock Attribute: grid + fire
Characteristics: Breaking the rules Characteristics: Iron Fist
HP: 120 HP:120
Physical attack: 160 Physical attack: 180
Physical defense: 130 Physical defense: 150
Special attack: 30 Special attack: 30
Special Defense: 130 Special Defense: 150
Speed:80 Speed:120
Total: 650 Total: 750
Personally, I think this book is very novel in terms of setting and protagonist, and the name is not general. Although the plot is compact, there are highlights, and there are many typos. Maybe the author was too anxious to write. It is a fact that the writing is terrible, but everything must have a process. It is good to be able to write like this in the first time. However, the pace is a bit too fast, and the character is not established. I don't know what you think. Do you think the character of the protagonist needs to be established slowly? A good article, especially a novel, must establish the character at the beginning, otherwise it will be difficult to write later and readers will not be able to read it. The most important thing is to use too many jokes, just enough, otherwise it will be disgusting. Anyway, I think it is not good, and the cultivation of elves is very perfunctory, and the conquered elves are not cultivated very much. There is no level in the skill table. This is out of the urban literary tradition, but the readers do not know how it grows. How does it grow? You must at least write it clearly, and as a time traveler, even if your memory is affected, guess how many chapters it will take for a bird (Litola)? There are many, many questions that I don't know if you have read them yourself. The reason why I come here is not because I think your writing is good, but because I, as a fan, should support writers with ideas like you. And I also like the Pokémon IP, but author, you have to seize the opportunity yourself. After laying the groundwork for so long, shouldn't you take it seriously instead of giving up on yourself and perfunctory you? Anyway, I still support you. Come on, author, I hope this novel will be better.
The book is good, why does Gomora not have super vibration wave, ex form, and ferocious form?
It's so beautiful. Will EX Gomora appear? Is it normal evolution or super evolution?
I feel that the reason why the violent Gomora appears is because the protagonist is injured, or is facing life-threatening danger, and Gomora becomes popular.
I feel like the pace is a bit fast and I could use more content.
Not bad, the writing is also pretty good. It's just that it's a little slower
According to your plot, I feel that the next monster should be King Airei.
Will the protagonist become Leonix in the future? Although it says at the beginning that the protagonist is not Leonix, I am still curious and want to ask.
I don't know if there will be King Red in the future. If there is, you can refer to it. Pokémon: King Red Pokémon: EX King Red (MEGA) Attribute: grid + rock Attribute: grid + fire Characteristics: Breaking the rules Characteristics: Iron Fist HP: 120 HP:120 Physical attack: 160 Physical attack: 180 Physical defense: 130 Physical defense: 150 Special attack: 30 Special attack: 30 Special Defense: 130 Special Defense: 150 Speed:80 Speed:120 Total: 650 Total: 750
Personally, I think this book is very novel in terms of setting and protagonist, and the name is not general. Although the plot is compact, there are highlights, and there are many typos. Maybe the author was too anxious to write. It is a fact that the writing is terrible, but everything must have a process. It is good to be able to write like this in the first time. However, the pace is a bit too fast, and the character is not established. I don't know what you think. Do you think the character of the protagonist needs to be established slowly? A good article, especially a novel, must establish the character at the beginning, otherwise it will be difficult to write later and readers will not be able to read it. The most important thing is to use too many jokes, just enough, otherwise it will be disgusting. Anyway, I think it is not good, and the cultivation of elves is very perfunctory, and the conquered elves are not cultivated very much. There is no level in the skill table. This is out of the urban literary tradition, but the readers do not know how it grows. How does it grow? You must at least write it clearly, and as a time traveler, even if your memory is affected, guess how many chapters it will take for a bird (Litola)? There are many, many questions that I don't know if you have read them yourself. The reason why I come here is not because I think your writing is good, but because I, as a fan, should support writers with ideas like you. And I also like the Pokémon IP, but author, you have to seize the opportunity yourself. After laying the groundwork for so long, shouldn't you take it seriously instead of giving up on yourself and perfunctory you? Anyway, I still support you. Come on, author, I hope this novel will be better.
The book is good, why does Gomora not have super vibration wave, ex form, and ferocious form?
It's so beautiful. Will EX Gomora appear? Is it normal evolution or super evolution? I feel that the reason why the violent Gomora appears is because the protagonist is injured, or is facing life-threatening danger, and Gomora becomes popular.
I feel like the pace is a bit fast and I could use more content.
Not bad, the writing is also pretty good. It's just that it's a little slower
According to your plot, I feel that the next monster should be King Airei.
Will the protagonist become Leonix in the future? Although it says at the beginning that the protagonist is not Leonix, I am still curious and want to ask.
Personally I think it's okay