Heartbroken

I read two extreme works in one day, one with a score of 9.3, But after reading the beginning and the end, I was really speechless. The violent writing left me completely unmoved and even speechless. The score of this book is just over 8 points, but I shed tears while reading it. A kind of sadomasochism that goes deep into the bone marrow. The more you watch it, the more you realize that there is a kind of love called destiny and a kind of love that makes the soul fly away. Too cruel! The writing is gorgeous, but every word is so precise that one can't help but read it over and over again...

Very good, there is no sadistic foreshadowing, the opening chapter is about the crematorium. While torturing the scum and reminiscing, the whole truth is slowly revealed. The writing is romantic and beautiful, full of gorgeous rhetoric and rhythm of oriental aesthetics. It took a 5-hour train trip to read it in one sitting, and it was very satisfying. Of the two endings, I ignored the be one, and I feel that the he one is better. After all, the scumbag is not really a scumbag, he also loves to the extreme, and it is a pity for Shou to lose someone who loves him so much. After all Shou has gone through, he deserves the best love. And he feels more like an open ending, not serious, and retains a glimmer of hope, which is good.

Summary: The author's writing skills are amazing, with deep foreshadowing and steady closing force, and the narrative rhythm is well controlled. Every choice of the characters in the novel is reasonable but unexpected. It uses silent imagery to give readers a sense of pain, without the need for lengthy paragraphs of sensationalism, because every word is full of blood, allowing readers to read it with all their entrails. The dust has settled and the pen has stopped closing the net. ★The following contains spoilers Unserious version of OS: This is the first time I read an article about Wenzhen being suffocated by the ashes in a crematorium... Ber? Can it really be cremated so completely? I have been under the master's control for many years. I consider myself ruthless and have a very strong heart. I am so strong that I always thought that the crematorium stories were all about selling people over others. They were just tortured at the front and gently coaxed at the back. If they were really tortured at the crematorium, it would only be satisfying and not heartbreaking. What the hell! I watched it all night and cried like a dog! One hour and four minutes left me heartbroken! ! It's so cruel... Why does Gong make me feel so distressed? ! ! It seems to have a dual ending, but actually? BE's mother opened the door for BE - BE is home~ Thoughts on the serious version: The author opens the chapter with a reunion scene after a hundred years of tragedy. The pride that Shark Demon Ayi once had turned into blood and mud after his scales were pulled out. Master Wuchen's belated tenderness after a hundred years seemed to be more piercing than the ice in the past, forcing the dying Shark Demon into a desperate situation. The seemingly abrupt fragments of flesh and blood and flashback memory fragments in the previous article are scattered between the lines like puzzle pieces—— It wasn't until we followed the shark demon Ayi and discovered the skeleton in the coffin that we were shocked to realize that every piece of debris was accurately returning to its place. This kind of writing method of "the grass snake has a gray line, and the pulse is thousands of miles deep" is not a cliché of torture for the sake of torture, but because when the ax falls in the end, the reader and the protagonist have nowhere to escape. The cruelty of the past has a sad footnote - the origin of the hatred and the difficulties behind it are all spread out on the scroll, and everyone can see the true nature of the matter - the fate of this pair of fateful mandarin ducks should have come naturally, because of the unjust hatred, it turned into a mountain ax to cut each other's deep love into a sin that has tortured for hundreds of years, and there is no chance to look back. The author seems to have given two paths at the end of the story, but in fact they lead to the same destination but nowhere in sight. It really makes people sigh, and I can't extricate myself from the melancholy for a long time...

No! Here's what he said! ，

After reading it, I still stand by BE. It's good to forget about all the suffering I've endured. The road to immortality will be smooth from now on. Gong also paid the price for his mistakes. The price may have been heavy, but not all compensations must be accepted. There is still a lost child standing between them, how can we completely let go of the past? Although the author does not have very gorgeous words, he can make readers very involved and quite sad.

The author's writing style is really great, the writing is delicate, the descriptions are vivid, and there is a poetic warmth in every word. I feel that at least 30,000 of the 38,000 words can be underlined and taken notes! ! ! ! ! ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

Five stars because of the good writing, and one star off because of Reconciliation in the Crematorium of Death. This is forgiveness under guilt, not forgiveness obtained by pursuing love and repenting. But the writing is really good, that is, Crematorium 0.01, 99.9% Of it is torture.

Very sad, very sad, ancient fairy tale style sad, absolutely amazing, I love sad stories

When I saw the name, I knew it was definitely a story about abuse, and I was prepared to test my mental endurance. But I still cried after reading it. It was clear that the two loved each other deeply, but the ending was like this. I watched both endings, and I felt that the second one was not he, but it was just oe, which was better. It was obvious that I was starting to have a good impression. Such a good hand was played so poorly. It was awkward, and I obviously liked it, but it made me suffer so miserably. When I saw the introduction, I thought it was another scumbag and a cheap supporting role, but after reading it, I really felt empty. Dragon Prince, White Shark, Demon Qiu, Junior Brother is really good to me, especially Junior Brother, he is really a gentleman. I really can't hate Gong. I love reading He. I will feel heartbroken for their ending, but I can't think of a better ending. After all, there are several lives between them. The author's writing is very good. The words are very smooth and I can read it. My brain is messed up. I feel that I have problems with my expression. Sisters, just take a look. It would be great if it can be of some help.

[Crying][Crying][Crying] It tortures the readers. I feel that neither party is wrong, but from another perspective, it is Gong's fault. There is also the child who died before he was born. His ending is not like him [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying]

Finished reading! The writing is very good, not only does it feel comfortable and smooth to read, but the writing is really good that can be seen with the naked eye! It's hard to find gold in tomatoes! I wish my wife's data will get better and better!

All I can say is that although it is short, it is complete and empathetic. Except for the ending, which is a bit unexpected, it also took longer to read than a novel with more words. Sometimes I really feel that good writing is more than just words. You will actually shed tears unconsciously between the lines. It is so painful.

They are two poor little people who can't help themselves. At first, they thought they were scumbags and cursed secretly in their hearts, but I always felt that he could not help himself. Sure enough, he couldn't help but feel hurt when he saw someone, but he deserved it. Who told him not to talk too much! ! ! I feel sorry for little Yibao and A-Nian. . . . As mentioned at the end, it's all like this, spanning so many lives, why is he? After watching the BE version, I felt regretful, but I also felt that the so-called he was oe. Anyway, the scumbag Gong in parallel time and space (oh no, in my mind, it was cleared up, he just didn't have a long mouth) and Xiao Yibao are happy and safe...

It's super sadistic. Who knows what it's like to cry in bed while reading sadistic stories in the middle of the night. (╥╯╰╥)ง I really love this ancient sadistic novel.

Wow, it's so shocking and delicious… At the beginning of the chapter, he chases his wife directly to the crematorium, using the most beautiful sentences to sharpen the sharpest knife. Through the layers of frosted glass, he looks at the once high-spirited Shark Demon and Wuchen, who struggled repeatedly and nearly tore himself apart. Then he looks at Xiaoliu, who is now sick and has lost his spirit, and Wuchen, who destroyed himself and fell into Shura... It's really, really disconnected (PS: This is the best book I've ever seen written in this regard) At the beginning, I just cried for Xiaoliu, feeling Wuchen was unworthy, but later I realized that they were just two little bitter gourds... Author, you have no heart! ! ! I need him! ! !

Wow, 5 stars for this be ending. Liu Yi loves three people most in his life: his grandfather, Wuchen, and his unborn child. Unfortunately, these three people all died at the hands of Wuchen. All the hardships Liu Yi has suffered in this life were all caused by Wuchen. In my opinion, forgetting everything he suffered and ascending to immortality is the real he, at least it is the best ending for Liu Yi.

The writing is very good and the story has strict logic.

I read two books in a row. This author's book about cultivating immortals really won my heart [crying] and paid close attention to it.

I feel like it's suitable for the be ending. After all, there are several lives in between. It's okay to forget about it.

Give it to me! 😭😭😭 It's relatively short in comparison, but it's one of the best sadomasochism stories I've ever read... The writing is so good... I kept crying most of the night. . Two babies who are awkward with each other but love each other deeply...😭... Alas, the ending is so sad, but this is the charm of be...

There is nothing wrong between the two of them, but there is too much blood feud between them. At first I thought it was some ancient sadistic novel, but I didn't expect it to be quite good-looking. It just made me cry. And I was really shocked when I saw the end of it. I'll go! I didn't expect the plot to be like this. I was very disappointed when I watched the plot of be. I forgot that it was already the best ending. I just kept crying. I couldn't do it anymore. He doesn't count as he. It counts as oe at most. It gives us room for imagination. The author writes very well. This kind of concept has surpassed many bloody sadomasochism. If there is a next life, you can love each other well. It can be plain and simple.

The writing is very good. In fact, there is no need to distinguish be from he. There is no difference between he and he. He is just a piece of fantasy and there is no difference from be.

The short thirteen chapters are more thoughtful than the hundreds of chapters next to them. The plot is very delicate. Two little bitter gourds can only be said to be fate. Two people who love each other so much, I wish them a future life [shy]

Tomato has a rare writing style, and likes just the right amount of white space. The previous story is told in a smooth way, and the whole plot is connected very well.

How can the soul of the past accompany the people of today?

Wuchen brought it all on himself, I feel sorry for Ayi

I cried when I saw it, it was so cruel, woo woo woo, it was so cruel

This is a true wife-chasing crematorium. The failure in the front is the cause (although this is not encouraged), and we work very hard to remedy it later (this kind of remedy is not simply based on ourselves, but empathizes with each other, and can compensate from the perspective of the other party, rather than the "fake compensation" made in ordinary books to satisfy one's own desires)

It's this dog blood that tastes so good. It's so pretty.

I really admire the author for writing so much content in such a short space. It's a very enjoyable article, and it has such a reasonable and refreshing ending (two more!). This is really rare in short articles. Readers who can accept this setting can really read it to their heart's content!