[The Score Will Rise Once It’s Up] Two Male Leads + Transmigrate into a Book + Master and Disciple + Redemption + Darkening and Coercive Love
Yu Feng transmigrated into a book, and the System told him to follow the plot: bully Yue Liu, a beauty burdened with the fate of becoming a human cultivation vessel.
But the pretty boy was so sweet and soft. Whenever someone bullied him, he could only run over with red-rimmed eyes and seek protection. “Immortal Venerable, I’m so scared. I can only depend on you. Could you please save me?”
Yu Feng’s heart softened. He saved and protected him, took him as a disciple, shielded him from calamities, and even defied the will of Heaven for his sake.
It wasn’t until he exploited a bug to complete his mission that he accidentally learned the truth:
That poor little thing was actually the biggest villain in the book, and he had already awakened the power to destroy heaven and earth. His supposed dependence had all been an act.
Even Yu Feng’s love was an illusion created by Yue Liu’s magic.
Yu Feng left in a fury and returned to the modern world.
But he was pulled back to the cultivation world ten years later.
The little crybaby of the past had become a great demon who had slaughtered his way through both the immortal and demonic realms.
His silver hair made him look like a demon. He lifted Yu Feng’s chin with a fingertip and smiled with wicked charm:
“Master, you said that as long as I behaved, you would come back.”
“You lied to me. This time, I’ll build a cage for you. Do you still like it?”
The kid he raised has gone dark!
[Reader’s Guide]
1. Seductive, obsessive beauty who lures his prey × gentle, warm-hearted master who loves to quip
2. The gong is incredibly, incredibly beautiful. He starts out as a fragile little white flower, then turns into a black-sesame-filled sweet dumpling. Later, he can destroy heaven and earth and bewitch anyone with his wicked charm. His body is kept at a boy’s age in the early story, but he will return to normal.
3. The gong and shou are each other’s only partners, and it has a happy ending. There are lots of scenes of the gong trying to seduce the shou. The gong is adored by everyone early on, and the shou later. No preference between the two.
Good-looking, Shou is a thoughtful, independent person with a bottom line. This is probably why his charm and Gong like him. He didn't bully Gong just to get points for completing the tasks given by the system. This is a normal person. The apprentice's sense of yandere is well written, and he is about to go to the crematorium, so excited. [Love], looking forward to a big update.
Good to watch^ω^ At the beginning of the plot, Feng Bao was saving Yue Liu, and then Yue Liu fell in love with Feng Bao in the middle. But after Feng Bao made it clear that he liked girls, and as soon as he found Yue Liu's mistress, Yue Liu turned black, and became very unfriendly after turning black. For example, if they do that kind of thing, they do it too often, and they start doing it before they have recovered, which makes Feng Bao suffer mentally and physically. I hope it can be better in the future. When I torture Yue Liu, it really depends on what he does later. I feel that he has a bit of the element of repaying kindness with revenge.
The first dozen or so chapters felt a bit weird, but the more you read, the more you read, and now it is gradually becoming more compact. I really like the way Master and Yue Liu get along with each other. The author of Two Good Babies [Blowing Kisses] must update it!
The battles, strategies, etc. In the traditional plot are very simple and sloppy, and they do not fill the loopholes. However, this is the weakness of the love story between two men, and it should be weakened. The most important thing is the development and change of the two men's emotions. The author's writing skills are sophisticated, and the emotions in the writing are real, vivid and touching, which is particularly beautiful. Personal preference be. It advocates the core emotional theme of "scars will only heal with time, but they will never be erased". This is indeed not a good thing. You can't wash away the essentially bad things you did after turning black. I was very surprised that the woman from Jinxia Valley died. You can still wash away Chu Chu after killing her. In my opinion, you can't wash away it. You didn't do any essentially bad things.
After reading the first twenty chapters, I think the author's writing style is very good and the characters are rich. But I couldn't stand it anymore. I felt so miserable. The more I watched, the more panicked I became. I felt sorry for everyone. The protagonist, Song Ji, the junior sisters and junior brothers... They were all good babies. Those in the Blood Lotus Sect deserved death, and I feel sad for these people who died. Maybe it's because my imagination is so good that when describing their deaths, I really kept having these images in my mind. I can't get over my mental hurdle, my eyes are watering and my mouth is watering. As for the psychological committee member, I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe 😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭I can't breathe😭You win, you win, brother, you have completely won this time. You have defeated my psychological defense. I have completely broken my defense. In front of you, I am just a wild dog caught in the heavy rain. When I saw a brown thing on the roadside, I thought it was poop, so I ate it happily, but it turned out that it was chocolate and I could only die with my mouth full of sweetness. The author's writing is very good, and the text is also very beautiful. However, my personality is too sensitive, and my heart aches, so I will leave first.
It's very beautiful, I don't know why it was removed from the shelves! Tomato, don't take advantage of it
So cool! Yu Feng, people are fickle and can change their wives.
Jujujujuju looks great, the writing is online, the characterization is very good, and the car speed is fast. I just love this one, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, my blood boiled when I watched it in the middle of the night, it is so attractive, full marks, the author, come on, come on, come on! I'm really looking forward to the next plot
OMG, the inner shock of reading this little girl can only be described as OMG. The text is really well written, whether it is the treatment of the character's personality or the setting of the plot, etc., It does not feel awkward when reading (the character's character is well chosen, and the protagonist's background is well set so that it does not feel abrupt. You can really see the character's personality and the personality you want to express in front of outsiders from the character's speech, expression, psychology, actions, etc., It is not obtrusive or disconnected at all). Just one word, wonderful.
Why was it removed from the shelves? I enjoyed watching it. Is it for some reason?