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In fact, the subject matter is quite good, and the writing is very attractive at the beginning, but in the past two months, there have been a bit too many descriptions of the female n. The female protagonist is actually very charming, and it is okay to slap the fans in the face, but if there are too many females who are dragged into the lower ranks, it will seem a bit cheap. The female protagonist is not comparable to ordinary people. If you really want to set off the female protagonist, the love rivals can be more diverse, and there is no need for everyone to be pretentious and use tricks. Come on

It's good to watch, but when will the rumors be clarified... It's very uncomfortable to watch 😣 It feels good and uncomfortable at the same time. The VIP ticket guy didn't slap that lemon in the face at the front. I hope there will be a pure and refreshing article without ink in the back.

It is a very nice book, but of course there are still some minor problems. I will talk about them in two parts: planting and weeding. The emotional scenes and male protagonists are both delicious 😋 I usually don't like athletes, but if you say that the family husband is a tennis player, it is very delicious 😋 There are also the dark crawling genius dream boy, the fake and arrogant really cute e-sports guy, and the enthusiastic vr game genius puppy boy are also delicious... And the puppy boy seems to be married by a serious boss. Although he has not appeared yet, but I look forward to it. The uncomfortable part is that I feel a little aggrieved that the heroine has been rumored but has not been slapped in the face. It has been so many chapters and there is no explanation... But the proportion is not particularly large... I hope the heroine can be slapped in the face as soon as possible. It is clear that the heroine is not at fault, but it is still too unpleasant to pay 8 million liquidated damages.

It looks good, but the part with Xiang is a bit uncomfortable. If Xiang opens his mouth and takes the initiative to ask, or takes the initiative to inquire about the situation, he will not recognize it for so long. But! ! ! The kiss smells so good hehe [shy]

How can I put it, overall it's okay, but I feel that the plot of "Slap in the Face" is not very superior, and it always feels a little strange, but the interaction and emotional lines between the heroine and the male protagonists are very smooth, and the emotional atmosphere is well written. I recommend [Blow Kiss]

It's so beautiful, but the writing is too new. It would be great if it had a normal ending. It's not enough to watch! ! ! Each male protagonist's life is very different and three-dimensional. I'm curious if the heroine can include them all in the harem! ! !

The rhythm of the plot is well controlled, there is no messy plot, the setting is imaginary but very reasonable, the motivations of each character's behavior can be explained, the characters are three-dimensional, the details are well prepared, and the writing is delicate and not perfunctory, which is quite good.

It's actually quite good-looking. It's not a vulgar system-based story about getting rich. The setting of the female protagonist's men is also very good. I really like the athlete male protagonist~ The only problematic points are two that you can skip if you don't mind. The first one is that the heroine has been looked down upon when she buys a car or a house after she returns home (she already has money at this time, and the heroine spent a long time in the process of buying it before she was satisfied). The second point is that one of the male protagonists is a singer, who operates the lottery winning places for the heroine backstage, and also transfers the gifts given by fans to the heroine, etc. Although there is no definite relationship, it is actually the same behavior towards sisters-in-law, and those who are chasing entertainment can also skip it [crying]

It looks really good so far, and I like the tone. Every male protagonist is very good to the female protagonist. However, when the new male protagonist appears, the author will spend a lot of ink describing it. It will probably last more than ten chapters. The other male protagonists will not appear for a long time (maybe some will appear once or twice to make their presence felt). When the relationship between the new male protagonist and the female protagonist is stable, there will be the same number of scenes, and everyone will enter a fair stage of competition and competition. , I don't care about the new male protagonist having too many scenes in a short period of time. After all, if the writing is not deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, how can he compete with the old characters? Moreover, the author has not ignored that the old characters will add new settings and interactions to the first few male protagonists. The old characters will become more interesting as they get better, and the new characters will become more interesting as they come out. Everyone has a bright future (applause). Finally, I support all the male protagonists and female protagonists to be together at the same time. I think it will be fun to form a big family.

Can the author write some normal female characters? The male characters are all excellent and lovable. There are so many types. If the female characters are decent, they are not excellent. If they are villains, they just love female characters. I really have no choice. I have delicious rice on one side and daddy on the other. What should I do?

Ignoring some minor flaws, it's still good-looking, at least 9 points. The first anchor with a favorability score of 100 in the early stage was a bit exaggerated. He didn't get any benefits, and even offered an expensive takeaway meal. The score rose to 100 purely because he knew you had money. It was ridiculously fast, and it was so outrageous that it was divorced from reality. The writing becomes more and more detailed and more readable later on, especially the Qi Ye section. I read all the updates in one breath.

I really like it. It feels like it's not the usual mindless and cool novel. The family is very warm, and the relationship with the male protagonists is not illogical. It feels very attractive. I read it in one go. Big boost to the author! ! !

More than 80% of the content is quite interesting. There are many interesting people and things. I caught up with the updates in one go and look forward to future developments. However, some of the plots of forced slaps in the face are too stiff, awkward, and draggy. The reason for the low rating may be these things. I hope it can be cleaner in the future.

Damn it, it's so good. It's not a loss if I invest in it. I haven't been able to read novels recently. I almost give up after reading half a book. Damn, I've been reading this one. . It's so cool. Both the heroine and the male protagonist are so happy. . I like J Shen and Xiao Xiang😋Qiye I also like them. Damn, every male protagonist's character is different! It's super unique and the heroine's family are also very nice. It's a very happy family. QAQ highly recommends...

It's really good-looking, and each male protagonist's character is very unique. I hope the female protagonist feels whitewashed🥹 It feels like most of the supporting female characters except the heroine are villains, which feels a bit like a female rivalry. But I really like the heroine's character, and the emotional scenes are also well written.

The heroine is not just a silly sweetheart who wakes up to make money after being betrayed. She is neither romantically inclined nor deliberately effeminate, and has a sense of propriety in doing things. Each male protagonist also has his or her own characteristics. The contrasting cuteness of the violent e-sports master, the delicacy of the gentle champion, and the freshness of the younger brother are all not tools. The logic is also very online, the system rules are clear, the rebate mechanism and favorability upgrades are not abrupt, the writing is smooth and natural, and there is no sense of suspension in mindless and cool writing, making it very comfortable to read.

It's a very good article, and the male protagonists have distinct personalities. The fact that the entertainment industry was hacked until 100 chapters was clarified does not affect the overall enjoyment of the article. After all, a lot of space is devoted to describing the relationship between the female protagonist and the various male protagonists. As for getting along with the family and spending money for the male protagonists to get cool rebates, the result of the long chapter without clarification is that the female protagonist has to cover up tightly when going out. There are few anti-fans or vicious male and female partners who jump in front of the female protagonist. At most, they are crickets behind the screen.

I just read the chapter about the early 200s. It's too slow to deal with the scumbag men and bitches. The male number N, Qi Ye, feels so long. I want to see other different types of men. Come on, author.

Yes, the emotional descriptions of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are particularly delicate. However, there are a lot of plots about female competition, and the routines are similar. It makes people a little tired watching it. It is relatively useless in the early stage, and then the story is refreshing and refreshing. The plot is a bit delayed, but it doesn't matter. The writing is above average, I think it's fair.

Don't be influenced by the comments when reading the book. I almost missed it. Although I was worried before reading the first 120 chapters why it was not clarified, the author has a good grasp of the plot, and the personalities of the male protagonists are also very clear. I look forward to more updates!

Overall, it's okay. The female protagonist and several male protagonists are quite charming, the story is quite interesting, and the reading process is quite comfortable. However, I feel that the writing style needs to be more refined, and there is a bit too much female competition. I hope to reduce some of the female competition plots and create characters through more exciting stories.

Nice! Very pretty! Our heroine is all in! Every one is great! ! ! Except for the twin brothers (I am a bit of a thunderous brother, and almost caused our heroine to lose money, but it was okay, and it was still good later) I was still thinking about what to do with that house, but I didn't expect the author to announce the end of chapter 12! Woohoo, I can't bear to part with it, it ended so suddenly [crying] I wonder if there will be a sequel

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It's beautiful and beautiful. The characters of each male protagonist are particularly three-dimensional. The delicate emotional descriptions make this book stand out from most books that are just for "slap in the face" and "refreshment" ~ Qi Ye's characters are really getting better and better [Sending Hearts]

The score is too low and unscientific. Very nice, I give it five stars. The writing is very good, everyone's character is full and unique, the interaction with the heroine is very sweet, the ending is a bit fast, it would be better to add some extra stories about life and children after living together. The heroine Jiang Yueling Lu Xingzhou is a tennis player, Ling Ling's neighbor, steady and good at cooking. Jiang Jinchuan, the wild king of e-sports, is relatively introverted. He Yanming is lively and cute, a chatterbox, and has a good memory. Xiang Chuhan, top student, younger brother's classmate, has been secretly in love with Lingling for 7 years Qi Ye, a top-notch singer, has a similar personality to He Yanming He Yansheng Boss Ba, He Yanming's twin brother, reserved and steady

The characters are really vivid. It's been a long time since I've come across a long novel that made me read. It's just that the early explanation is too late and it's a bit annoying. Just swipe twice and read directly. It's a really enjoyable article. Really vivid people, very funny and not so aggrieved. I couldn't bear to quit. I feel that they are really living people. It's like if I don't quit the novel, they will still exist in my life. It's really, really, really vivid. . I can't bear to part with it so much😭😭 I like it so much, it's my withdrawal reaction. . I'm not happy.

It's a super, super good book. I read the latest update in one go. I just don't understand why the rating is so low. It can't be because of some slap-in-the-face plots in the early stage. This slap-in-the-face really only occupies a small part, and it's also an indispensable part, so be sure to read it carefully, it will get better and better! ! ! The author is really good at organizing language, and some of his ideas are very creative, especially some small metaphors. Some of the angles are very strange, but if you think about it, it fits the situation at that time, and the content is super, super, super sweet. I kept laughing when I read the article, so readers are not at a loss. The author must work hard and write more [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Why is the writing so good? It's so good that I don't want to sleep. Blueberry is the first writing writer I follow. After reading it for a little bit, I came to comment. I also want to have a systematic dream. This is so good.

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The characters are very three-dimensional, each male god has distinct personality traits, the heroine's transformation is also natural, the logic is not confusing, the writing is smooth and delicate, it is very comfortable to read, and the plot rhythm is well controlled. I quite like this type of book.