End Times Expedition: My Warhammer 40K System

It's very well written, and it's my favorite type. I think we can add other people's levels or upgrade system, otherwise other people won't be able to survive, and the protagonist will be left alone. The devil is getting stronger and stronger and can't be expanded. And I suddenly remembered that the remaining people in the end of the world are all good people, and the problematic ones died at the beginning, so the behavior of the people in the book is much more normal.

I feel like the details in this book are well written. In addition, I feel that I can directly say that I am a living saint, take the imperial route, directly declare my identity, and describe the system as a blessing from the emperor. After all, the subspace has really arrived. At this time, people need more faith and food and clothing. If you want to develop on a macro scale, you can combine the concept of empire with the characteristics of the earth to create a characteristic imperialism.

Temporary conscript Shen Yuan. You are too kind and can't make up your mind. This is disloyal to the empire. Don't forget the significance of your selection. Spread the glory and reputation of the God Emperor in this world. You are guided by Him. This is your honor.

Thank you for writing this article. The protagonist's character is really gentle. Such a protagonist is very lovable ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツThe character of the protagonist is similar to that of the mortal Big E. It's really great, but the Electra drug in the future sons is even more serious (bushi) [laughing] Anyway, come on, your writing in the new book really has the flavor of a hammer so far, much better than those cloud hammers.

I have read a dozen Warhammer fanfics and this one is pretty good. But the combat power still has to be suppressed. The original body and the protagonist, the emperor seed, are already present in the activities on the planet. This is too much. There can be more units. Don't mention the quality too much for the time being. After regaining the country, you can go to other places abroad. Don't have too strong non-self ethnic groups. Their hearts will definitely be different. After all, it is Warhammer, the focus is on the human species, and after several years of baptism in hell, the scum abroad have long been corrupted by Chaos. Of course, it's just a personal suggestion. Please keep writing. Don't stop updating.

It feels good, but the protagonist's current combat power is a bit low. When will the protagonist be strengthened (although the yellow skin has been raised once)? When will the Astartes or the mortal auxiliary army be summoned by the protagonist with points? Which legion of Astartes will appear first?

It is indeed a relatively high-quality Warhammer novel

The quality is relatively high, and the literary talent is also good. The protagonist is a descendant of the Emperor, has the Emperor's gene seed, and has a system. Currently, there is a Sanguinius in the camp. There are no poisonous points in this update, and the plot is relatively simple. It's interesting, there's nothing that's heart-wrenching or inconsistent with the setting, making it hard to watch. In short, For the emperor! ! ! When the author writes in the future, he can add a little Hammer to the survivors or official ones. Moreover, I think the background of the world is that energy is unlimited, and the official army still uses the current equipment, which is very backward. Just delete the previous settings. Although it is a little foreshadowing for the appearance of the Gate of Hell, it would be fine without any foreshadowing. As a foreshadowing, there is a big conflict between the world background and the technological level of military equipment, which is a small poisonous point.

The length of the novel determines the length of the author

The writing is good, and I can't fault it in Tomato. Lin Lin has been reading novels for more than ten years. Warhammer-themed ones are relatively rare. The author's ideas are also good. I hope he can keep writing.