(Multiple heroines + chasing husbands + daily life + ghosts)
"Everyone, if nothing else happens, I will probably die."
"Why?"
"Just now, a woman in a red wedding dress chased me so fiercely that she was my wife."
"Isn't this bad?"
"Your grandma is so tall! She chased me while holding her own head!"
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Reader comments
I've read Chapter 130, and overall it's pretty good [thoughts]. The first volume has a suspenseful line in which the male protagonist investigates the case. The logic is generally reasonable, and the female protagonist has a lot of pitfalls. I feel like I could write several volumes. In the Tomato Harem article, I personally think it is worth reading. There are basically no big surprises, but it would be better to add a few details.
First, the male protagonist's cultivation speed is indeed very fast, but how can he defeat the fifth realm with his second-level cultivation? Does the male protagonist have any weird physique? Didn't quite understand it.
Secondly, did Min Yueqing hit the male protagonist on the head randomly when he smashed the hydrangea? [Thinking] Ding really doesn't care about her wealth and beauty when she sees the male protagonist? If it were purely random, it would feel a bit too deliberate. Also, Lu Youyi said at the beginning that the male protagonist was special so he was following him. I didn't understand why even after reading Chapter 130.
The third question is why the male protagonist didn't leave Min Yueqing, whom he met once without any feelings. This may be the reason why some comments said that the male protagonist is a dog licker [thinking]. If you don't have feelings, you can cultivate them later. My sister-in-law is my dear. Can you start with my sister-in-law and write more about how I conquered my sister-in-law when we first met? My sister-in-law is already young and has lost so many female protagonists [crying]
The book is very nice. Just don't write about plots of dog-blood and knife-man in the future, and don't have too many harems. People will almost lose their memory. Although having too many harems is a good thing, it should be appropriate. Also, if you can update it faster, please update it faster, it's not enough [Chigua]
I've finished reading 154 chapters so far. Although it's a male video, it's not a fun read and I'm still a bit frustrated.
The first most poisonous point
Initially, I originally wanted to watch the male protagonist and his fiancée reconcile and divorce. After all, the heroine left directly on the wedding day, which was very aggrieved to the hero no matter what. When the heroine first came back, she was thinking about getting together and breaking up. She hadn't seen each other for three years and didn't love her at all. But in the latest chapter, she actually reconciled [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] She fell in love the moment she came back. How did she reconcile? ? ? ? Naturally, it is the male protagonist who makes selfless contributions and does not expect anything in return, so that he can completely soften the heart of the female protagonist.
The second most poisonous point
The male protagonist's immediate boss is also the female protagonist. But this guy is still a classic plot, the heroine has a nominal fiancé. The end of the first volume is also filled with domineering quotes from this fiancé, "Youyou, this time, I will definitely take you home... To complete our unfinished wedding." [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] I can imagine the following plot with my feet. The warm male protagonist is trying to steal the bride.
Generally speaking, the male protagonist has an unlikable personality and belongs to the dog-licking (warm-hearted) type. But I still like some characters, such as the sister-in-law, the medical fairy, and the two ghost wives. All I can say is that the only thing I'm interested in is the plot of a female protagonist who is not a human being. You might still be looking forward to it.
It's a good book with a good plot, but there are too many women and I can't remember (). I don't know if it's to avoid lightning or something. There are not many male characters [face covering], which leads to some female NPCs being named and soon becoming similar. In this case, it's better not to be named.
I read another book by the author a long time ago, but I didn't read it for a while. Now I'm reading a novel and I saw a novel that I like, and I didn't notice that it was written by the same person. It's a pity that the other one only updated the last five or six chapters that I saw and then discontinued it. Author, I am very optimistic about you. Come on.
I think it's okay, the subject matter is very new compared to most books nowadays. The characters are portrayed in detail, especially the heroine [laughs], but the realm of cultivation is a bit vague, so I'll give it five stars for the author.
There are also a lot of pitfalls in the relationship between the characters. I don't know if they can be filled in later.
@, Will the author named Liu Yaoyao appear again in the future?
@WRITING Brother author, I'll slip away first, your pace is a bit slow. I'll come back and watch it when it's finished one day. Leave a book review first and mark it.
Not bad, five-star support
I feel pretty good after reading a few chapters
Not much to say, nice looking
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Very pretty, not bad
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It looks good at the moment, seedlings, wait and see with five stars first
Now that I've seen it, I think it's pretty good, my mind is open, and my writing is pretty good.
Good.
Can.
Good.
Can see.
Interesting.
It's very beautifully written and has a lot of words. Why is it that no one can do it?
It was so tepid that I worried that the author would run away [laughs]. It seemed like there were too many female protagonists, and I can't even remember them.
Come on, although it doesn't match the introduction, it feels good.
Let's check it carefully, that Zhang Ludan, Zhang Zhang sometimes Zhao's
I've read Chapter 130, and overall it's pretty good [thoughts]. The first volume has a suspenseful line in which the male protagonist investigates the case. The logic is generally reasonable, and the female protagonist has a lot of pitfalls. I feel like I could write several volumes. In the Tomato Harem article, I personally think it is worth reading. There are basically no big surprises, but it would be better to add a few details. First, the male protagonist's cultivation speed is indeed very fast, but how can he defeat the fifth realm with his second-level cultivation? Does the male protagonist have any weird physique? Didn't quite understand it. Secondly, did Min Yueqing hit the male protagonist on the head randomly when he smashed the hydrangea? [Thinking] Ding really doesn't care about her wealth and beauty when she sees the male protagonist? If it were purely random, it would feel a bit too deliberate. Also, Lu Youyi said at the beginning that the male protagonist was special so he was following him. I didn't understand why even after reading Chapter 130. The third question is why the male protagonist didn't leave Min Yueqing, whom he met once without any feelings. This may be the reason why some comments said that the male protagonist is a dog licker [thinking]. If you don't have feelings, you can cultivate them later. My sister-in-law is my dear. Can you start with my sister-in-law and write more about how I conquered my sister-in-law when we first met? My sister-in-law is already young and has lost so many female protagonists [crying]
The book is very nice. Just don't write about plots of dog-blood and knife-man in the future, and don't have too many harems. People will almost lose their memory. Although having too many harems is a good thing, it should be appropriate. Also, if you can update it faster, please update it faster, it's not enough [Chigua]
I've finished reading 154 chapters so far. Although it's a male video, it's not a fun read and I'm still a bit frustrated. The first most poisonous point Initially, I originally wanted to watch the male protagonist and his fiancée reconcile and divorce. After all, the heroine left directly on the wedding day, which was very aggrieved to the hero no matter what. When the heroine first came back, she was thinking about getting together and breaking up. She hadn't seen each other for three years and didn't love her at all. But in the latest chapter, she actually reconciled [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] She fell in love the moment she came back. How did she reconcile? ? ? ? Naturally, it is the male protagonist who makes selfless contributions and does not expect anything in return, so that he can completely soften the heart of the female protagonist. The second most poisonous point The male protagonist's immediate boss is also the female protagonist. But this guy is still a classic plot, the heroine has a nominal fiancé. The end of the first volume is also filled with domineering quotes from this fiancé, "Youyou, this time, I will definitely take you home... To complete our unfinished wedding." [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] I can imagine the following plot with my feet. The warm male protagonist is trying to steal the bride. Generally speaking, the male protagonist has an unlikable personality and belongs to the dog-licking (warm-hearted) type. But I still like some characters, such as the sister-in-law, the medical fairy, and the two ghost wives. All I can say is that the only thing I'm interested in is the plot of a female protagonist who is not a human being. You might still be looking forward to it.
It's a good book with a good plot, but there are too many women and I can't remember (). I don't know if it's to avoid lightning or something. There are not many male characters [face covering], which leads to some female NPCs being named and soon becoming similar. In this case, it's better not to be named.
I read another book by the author a long time ago, but I didn't read it for a while. Now I'm reading a novel and I saw a novel that I like, and I didn't notice that it was written by the same person. It's a pity that the other one only updated the last five or six chapters that I saw and then discontinued it. Author, I am very optimistic about you. Come on.
I think it's okay, the subject matter is very new compared to most books nowadays. The characters are portrayed in detail, especially the heroine [laughs], but the realm of cultivation is a bit vague, so I'll give it five stars for the author. There are also a lot of pitfalls in the relationship between the characters. I don't know if they can be filled in later.
@, Will the author named Liu Yaoyao appear again in the future? @WRITING Brother author, I'll slip away first, your pace is a bit slow. I'll come back and watch it when it's finished one day. Leave a book review first and mark it.
Not bad, five-star support
I feel pretty good after reading a few chapters
Not much to say, nice looking
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Very pretty, not bad
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It looks good at the moment, seedlings, wait and see with five stars first
Now that I've seen it, I think it's pretty good, my mind is open, and my writing is pretty good.
Good. Can. Good. Can see. Interesting.
It's very beautifully written and has a lot of words. Why is it that no one can do it? It was so tepid that I worried that the author would run away [laughs]. It seemed like there were too many female protagonists, and I can't even remember them.
Come on, although it doesn't match the introduction, it feels good.
Let's check it carefully, that Zhang Ludan, Zhang Zhang sometimes Zhao's