“I just beat a game and deleted my character. Surely I don’t deserve this?!”
The supernatural descended, and the game became reality.
Zhang Ziyu was horrified to discover that all the written-description girlfriends he’d abandoned in the game had broken through the dimensional barrier and come looking for him!
Even more shocking, his exes had either become powerful figures in the real world or forbidden supernatural beings.
The yandere campus belle he’d started a relationship with and then abandoned blocked his doorway with a smile. “Darling, you can’t run away this time. Stay here forever.”
The devilish drill instructor he’d stood up sneered, bullwhip in hand. “Trainee Zhang, today’s impact-resistance test is S-rank difficulty!”
The aloof club president he’d neglected held an ice sword capable of freezing the whole city. “Explain this lipstick mark on your neck. Whose is it?”
Zhang Ziyu looked at himself: combat strength of a complete pushover, with his only talents being [Charm 100] and a silver tongue.
Facing an S-rank harem standoff at his door, Zhang Ziyu trembled:
“Stop fighting! You don’t have to fight over me! You’re going to tear the whole house apart!”
Armed with the [Foresight System], Zhang Ziyu had to find the one path to survival among countless guaranteed-death outcomes.
“I wanted to be a good guy, but all my exes turned out to be demon gods.”
It's okay, but the fat man who pushed the plot set a lucky value of 1 for him. It's very unreasonable for the male protagonist to get very close to him even though he knew it. According to people's instinct to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, they should stay away from him instead of following him to contact all kinds of dangerous things and using him to promote the plot. I can understand it, but either you write a tool person, or don't let him have so many ideas of his own?
The protagonist's IQ is still a little above the line, the supporting character's IQ is about zero, and he was punched in the wall by a ghost. A phone call was made to the protagonist who can only detect skills. Why not call someone else? Can't you call someone with strong skills for help? I really don't understand.
If the old girl didn't write S-level at the beginning, why would she become the peak A-level later?
All I can say is that the slutty ex-girlfriend and the iron-clad fat guy, this protagonist really needs to give my fat brother a thumbs up 😄😄
Dear author, your work has the appearance of a masterpiece. If you practice it in general, it will be perfect. I think you have the appearance of a masterpiece of 9.5 Or above. I will give you a clear path. I will keep reading. If you add a few more chapters every day, it will be even more perfect.
It's really good. The protagonist and the fat man are indeed brothers.
The highlight of the novel is the Shura field and the portrayal of female characters, but the shortcomings are also the Shura field and the female characters. Yandere is only sick but not coquettish. The female characters in the neutral and chaotic camp all turn into yanderes when they see a female character next to the male protagonist. This makes many plots logically confusing and has a strong sense of fragmentation. And some plot advancements are too wordless, and the male protagonist's situation is not described in detail. It feels like everything is done by the male protagonist himself. The plot advancement basically relies on the male protagonist committing suicide intentionally or unintentionally, and showing off his strength. The third point is that the story is too cliche. That nightmare, why write about worrying about your son? Well, you are already SSS, so you can't write about it to fight against the nightmare, but this thing is better at hiding, leaving a back-up or something, it is better than letting a person with potential higher than yourself run away when you want to see your son. Mainly, this thing also has a grudge against the son of the character you protect. The connection is indeed a bit not smooth enough.
Read it without thinking, it's a very interesting and refreshing article. It's very frustrating at the beginning, but it gradually starts to feel better at the end.
I really like this book, but there are too few of them, far from enough.
It's pretty good. The plot is very compact and the early stage is well written. I'm looking forward to the later plot.