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Beg! Star! Dome! Iron! Road!
Is there any book about Star Dome Railway? Although it's hard to be stabbed in the back, the plot is still very good. I want to read it! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*
I Want to Read a Star Dome Railway Fanfic! ! ! !
Written with thought
What's Going on with Bengtie Lately? Nine Out of Ten Fanfics Have Been Scrapped, and One Is Unfinished.
I want to read a book like "Star Iron: Only after my death did Liu Ying understand love (Flowing Firefly)". Ah Qing is better😭😭😭
Looking for Quality Fandom from Bengtie! ! !
Broken Iron! ! !
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railway: My Life Star God, Training All Living Beings". There is no (male) female protagonist, no harem, no ambiguity @, three views are correct
Bengtie, Ompharos, Good Book (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
I would like to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: The Inscription of Salvation Beginning with Omphalos".
The Protagonist Sacrifices Himself
I want to read a book similar to "Honkai: Becoming a Faded Goblin". If you want to see a story where the protagonist is a villain but is ready to sacrifice himself to save the world in the end, it doesn't matter if it's original or fanfiction, as long as it meets the requirements
Does Beng Tie Have Qiong as the Male Lead?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: This guy is so arrogant". A movie like "Star Railway: This guy is so arrogant" with Qiong as the male protagonist and no time travel or system.
There Is No Magic Left in the Collapse of Iron. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue.
I want to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: Chapter 51 Spinning Elbow Attack Nanook". Get some Bengtie books
We Bengtie Are Also Lonely and Have No Good Articles at All\(`δ')/
Beng Tiewen, the male protagonist does not want a harem! ! ! !
Looking for Star Railway, a Really Good Book
Saphire, Sefaria, Fengyun, Butterfly, Senatos
Want to watch something similar to "National Destiny: Me?" My name is Ya Die Oh" book.
Is There Any Pioneer Qiong (Male Protagonist)?
I want to watch something similar to "Zhou Shen: The little raccoon has beaten gods!" Book. Is there any Pioneer Qiong (male protagonist), no CP, any variety comics or whatever?
Alicia, Ahhhhhh
Ellie, my Ellie ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh~
Isn't There Anything You Can Watch About Bengtie?
I want to read a book similar to "Beng Tie: I'm a Fool in Mask, Players Are Chasing Me and Going Mad".
Do You Have the Heroine Xi Lian?
I want to push my own, because I don't plan to sign a contract, so I can only push it like this...
I'm Looking for a Novel Where the Main Character Is Qiong. I've Read Most of Them by Xing.
Are There Any Books in Which Xi Lian Is the Heroine? Xi Lian in the Plot Is Too Miserable
I want to see content similar to "Golden Courtyard, Arisilien always likes to cling to me". I want Xilian! I want Xilian! I want Xilian! ! !
Collapse of Iron, the Protagonist Is Qiong
Is There Any Book About Traveling Through Time into Qiong or the Main Character Is Qiong?
Recently I have been reading books about Star Iron, and many of them have female protagonists. Although they are very interesting, they always feel a bit repetitive and boring after reading too much. So I just wanted to read something a little different and write a book with a male protagonist. Please recommend it.
Want to See Baby Xi Lian
Is There Any Mihoyo's I'm Here, the Male Protagonist All Qiong All Kong All Qiyana All
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: This guy is so arrogant". Is there any MiHoYo I'm here male protagonist all Qiong all Kong all Kiana all San can ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭Blockhouse





























































































Changle Tianjun, please be sure to write an unprecedented romantic ending for this story [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]
Cp is so sweet, it made me twist like a maggot on the bed.
So sweet! The author must keep writing! ! ! Just rely on your book to heal the trauma of roast chicken.
I give myself a five-star rating, right? [Shy] someone's diary "Today, Qing, I met a very familiar person. I seemed to have seen him before somewhere. Moreover, he seemed to know me. He even seemed to want to say something to me, but he still turned around and ran away." "Bai E is with that man. His grilled fish smells so good. I really want to rub some of it." "His name is Lin Qiong. Why do I feel like I have heard this name before, and it seems like an important person to me. Let me have a divination." "You can't divine anything. It's true, Xi Lian, Xi Lian, you used to occasionally fall asleep while learning divination." "That idiot, doesn't he know it's cold outside? He also said it's nice to lie in the wheat field and look at the stars, although it seems to be pretty." "Idiot, it's cold at night and it's windy on the second floor. Forget it, I'll carry you down and lie next to me. It's mainly because I'm afraid you'll catch a cold, not for other reasons. Wait, did you eat something spicy at night? Why does your face feel a little hot?" "Idiot, idiot, idiot, why do you have to deal with the black tide alone? Don't you know how worried I am about you? Wait, am I falling in love with him?" "Yes, I just fell in love with him." "Today I went to Ohema with Aqiong. There are many people in Ohema, and there are many weird elders, but with Aqiong by my side, I am not afraid... Aqiong is the best." "Aqiong actually destroyed the entire Senate. It's worthy of him." "I hate going to Zaoba, but I can see Aqiong during the day, so Zaoba doesn't seem so annoying anymore." "No, I also want to see Aqiong at night. The days without Aqiong pass very slowly! Hehe, Aqiong, I'm here." "Aqiong was taken away by that beast of Lagus. I must find him and bring him home!" "I've been searching for ten years. I've almost searched all over Ompharos. Aqiong, where are you?" "Re-creation is about to take place, and among the golden descendants, only me and Bai E are left. I don't know why, but I always feel that re-creation is a lie." (Part of it cannot be seen clearly due to tear stains.) "Why? Obviously, I should be the one who wants to sacrifice my soul, Aqiong, I don't want you (blurred ink marks)" "It seems that I have been here for a long, long time. Aqiong's friend comes from outside the world. He is also very worried about Aqiong. Well, this time, I must find you and let you stay with me forever." "It turns out that Aqiong did so many things in different time and space. He really deserves to be the one." "I found Aqiong." "I knew Xia Die was not a good person, huh!" "Aqiong did something amazing again, but because he used too much strength, he fell asleep for a long time and couldn't wake up even if he screamed. So I had to hold him. Holding Aqiong is so happy, it's like holding the whole world." "Idiot, idiot, idiot!!! I told you not to force yourself!!" "I was worried that Bai E was going to face his fate alone, but A Qiong said that he would definitely rescue Bai E in the future, so I felt relieved. Because A Qiong would not lie to me!" "Hey, Aqiong, I've been waiting for this day for a long time, prepare to be eaten dry by me!" "I'm so nervous about facing the Iron Tomb. Aqiong also said he was nervous, but he said he wasn't so nervous anymore since I was by his side." "Liar!! Liar!! Liar!! I don't want this ending!!" "It turned out that Aqiong didn't lie to me, but from now on, I will never let Aqiong leave me even half a step again, hehehe."
No, you and Katniss are the same person. No more revenge on society.
"Overall review" The overall structure is tight and the logic is clear, and the main plot is reasonably advanced under the condition of seven points of sweetness. Regarding the plot that is not mentioned in the game, the author's guesses are also reasonable. The character design is more in line with the original image of the character. It combines some elements of Genshin Impact and Bengsan (such as the sweet song "M*** H***") Single heroine, not slow to show off. (Quite to my liking) It can be seen that in addition to playing abstractly, the author's level of writing normal text is still very good. Overall, it can be given a score of 9.0-9.2. -------- "Personal review" This may not be a perfect novel, and there will inevitably be some poisonous points in it, but this does not affect my rating of 5 for this novel. Because this novel is worth it. The author uses his own understanding to write a unique "romantic story" for Ompharos. Even if he does not make major innovations in the details of the plot, it still does not prevent the "pure beauty" unique to this book from shining brightly. Thanks to the author for his efforts in adding a unique and wonderful annotation to "Xilian" and "Ompharos". I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars.
May the "Eye of Dawn and Dusk" love him and grant him the freedom of the "sky" May the "ridge of rock" love him and grant him the perseverance of the "earth" May the "overflowing cup" love him and grant him the innocence of the "ocean" May the "golden cocoon" protect his body and grant him the desire for "romance" May the "seat of the world" love him and grant him the will to "lose the world" May the "Split Branch" love him and grant him the knowledge of "rationality" May the "flying coins" love him and grant him the determination to "conspiracy" May the "Spear of Divine Punishment" love him and grant him the sincerity of "dispute" May the "grey hands" protect his body and grant him the kindness of "death" May the "curtain of eternal night" love him and grant him the miracle of "years" May the "Scale of Justice" love him and bestow upon him the glory of the "Law" May the "Door of Ten Thousand Paths" love him and grant him the ideal of "Door" May the "immaculate person" love him and grant him the return of his "true self" We hereby praise the new life of Omphalos
Finished reading, very good As for the plot... The first part is quite fun and abstract, but the second part is mainly about the main plot, which is not much different from the game. I might feel a little sleepy while watching it. The ending is also very good, haha (Bengtie's worldview is particularly easy to write about saving regrets, because in other game fanfics, most of the people who want to save regrets have to rely on forces outside the world, such as systems. However, due to the particularity of the system, I believe most people don't like it very much, but Bengtie's worldview solves this problem very well - Aha! Go ahead and say it to my Happy Star God! - Praise!) This book is okay, worth reading. There is nothing more to say. Finally, I wish the author continues to work hard, and I wish all the Blazers to draw cards correctly and win three golds in a row.
You must write a different ending than before [cry][cry][cry]
What I see here is not Ai Li or Ai Li's peer, but a flesh-and-blood Xi Lian. She can be angry, sad, angry, and jealous. She is a real person. She is not someone's peer, nor is she a set of data. She is who she is. By the way, when I read this book, I felt more like Xi Lian [laughing evilly]
After finishing it, I personally think this book is very good, there is nothing very poisonous, and this book is quite abstract. I almost died laughing at night (who knows the powerlessness of suppressing laughter in bed), it is very sweet, but I think it can be sweeter, but it feels a bit It's too short. I didn't expect it to end. Oh, it's so uncomfortable. I mostly jump through the pages when I read a book. I didn't skip a single word in this book. To sum up this book in one sentence, it's a shame. I hope the author can work harder in the future and create better works [Blow a kiss] [Smirk]
It looks good. The daily routine in the front may be a bit weird to drive, but the main plot in the back is awesome. Although the writing is not top-notch, the imagination is big enough. It is very suitable for soothing the soul that has been stacked with 33550336 layers of dot.
Is this a single girl or multiple girls? To be honest, apart from Xi Lian, I quite like Xia Die [laughs]
This book is quite sweet. I feel warm when I read it. You can read it when you are bored.
It's absolutely beautiful. It's a little awkward at the beginning, but I feel like I'm getting better the more I write. As a new author, my literary talent is very good, but it's a pity that I'm not very good at promoting books. I feel like it will become popular once I finish it.
I would like to give the author some suggestions. If you want to take the route of using power to reverse cause and effect, then I suggest that the protagonist take the path of existence. You mentioned in your article that star gods do not have free will, which happens to be the third article of existentialism. People have free will, so they are both star gods and humans, and they also have free will. I don't know if star gods other than nothingness and immortality will personally kill the protagonist [laughter] If you take the route of grafting cause and effect, how to fill the cause and effect in the future? You can't just come out, and you can't be Aha pretending to be Fuli. Oh, Qiong actually became Fuli, and let Aha fish for people, can
Will the protagonist's hair turn white in the future, hold a big sword and say: This time, I will press my life into the barrel of the gun, just to save one person.
The author's writing is okay in all aspects, and fortunately the heroine is Xi Lian. I feel that if it were anyone else, the few chapters I met at the beginning might have made the rating drop a bit. I can't say there are no knives, I can only say not many. Anyway, the amount of sugar is almost enough. Overall, the writing is very good. Good luck to the author.
Full marks, no need to say more. The author's writing style is nothing to say, but the first two chapters are a bit awkward, and chapters 69 and 70 are a bit curious [face covering]
A book with a preface of 3.7 Dollars must have a good ending. Also, I want to see Lin Qiong being mined by Xi Lian in the "Lin Lian" state [shy][shy][shy]
It's so beautiful. I recommend you to read the author's other works😋😋😋
It's pretty good, but to be honest, some words are not fun to say but are embarrassing to the point of explosion [laughing]
How to evaluate it? It's just hard to evaluate. It's difficult to fill in the gaps, but it's still very intriguing. The screenwriter can't give us what we want, but this author can. I'm not a very good speaker, but it's really good to watch.
The body feels warm when I look at it, and I give you good reviews!
It's super good-looking and has great content. The protagonist takes over Xi Lian's fate. It's very reasonable and sweet. However, when the protagonist feeds Demu Ge, he feeds the Xingbao out [eating melon]
Beautiful, love watching, super sweet
Come on, the Trail Blazers must break this cycle and rewrite the bad story.
In this article, we see virtual characters. In this article, we see not virtual characters, but real flesh-and-blood people. To be honest, in other Bengtie novels, the emotional descriptions feel very... Mechanical.
Come on, partner, you are my spiritual support
Around Chapter 138, you can feel that the author is a little confused, but the ending is still good [eat melon]. I hope the author will work hard and achieve better results in the next book (。••。)