Comprehensive Comic: Beginning of Traveling Through Time and Space into Yutai Yigu

How can I put it, if I can give it a top rating, because I found that the author seems to particularly like to write in new lines, but I personally don't like it very much (.? It feels like it affects the reading experience a bit, but I quite like that "We are pure love" was said by Li Xiang. After all, the original work was written by Yigu, and some I think it's Yi Gu's own opinion, but when it comes to Li Xiang, the cursed little girl, I love it! And there's no part of the story where the panda asks Yi Gu what kind of girl he likes. It's delicious!

It's not a time travel, but it's actually a remake of the original comic into text. The text is really delicate, so it's not bad at all. Even if you've read the original work, it's normal to jump to two chapters from three chapters. Now there are original chapters, and I have to say that the original ones are better.

The writing is quite good, but I have some small suggestions. Author, you have to remember one thing. Internet novels are not compositions, nor are they literary works. The description of the environment and details does not need to be too detailed, otherwise it will only bore the readers. Just focus on the writing when necessary. Of course, this is just my own small opinion. The author can follow his own plan. Finally I will dedicate this book to my cooking

The style is very strong, but not to my taste. I feel that the author likes to take the trouble to bring out the psychology and memories of the characters, especially Gojo Satoru. Two sentences are a high school, and one paragraph is a summer oil hero. But overall it is okay, five stars for encouragement.

Although the introduction is written in simple language, it was only after I read it that I felt the author's writing style. It is a clear and delicate writing style that makes people unknowingly immersed in the story of Yigu and Lixiang, feeling their deep love and their despair and sadness. I really like the portrayal of Li Xiang: ill-fated, but tenacious and a beautiful existence full of vitality. These allow me to understand why Yigu fell in love with her. What I like very much about this relationship is: Lixiang is the anchor in Yigu's life, the person he relies on to relieve his anxiety, and the motivation to accompany him all the time to make him grow. Yigu is the beauty of Lixiang's miserable childhood experience, the precious candy that makes her chew repeatedly in pain, and the opportunity for her to get rid of the past, transform and move towards the future (I really like the plot of Yigu running away with Lixiang) Among them, the wishes made by the two people also made me find it very interesting. Lixiang wants Yigu's wish to come true. Although it seems like a "dedication" idea, I think she thinks so from the bottom of her heart. This is not because she takes herself lightly, but because she thinks: "His happiness is my happiness." Yigu wants to be with Lixiang forever, with a sense of eternity. It is obvious that he has already preset the future of the two of them, and looks forward to every tomorrow with Lixiang purely and lovingly. I think this may be because he thinks: "Lixiang is my happiness." The two of them are entangled with each other and rely on each other to grow up. Even if death separates them briefly, they will eventually meet again at the end. Although I talked a lot and it was so messed up that I didn't know what I was talking about, the most important thing was to express my current feelings. It's been a long time since I've experienced this kind of mood from a novel. I really like the author's writing style and look forward to your updates. I'm really eager to know more about their plots! I will continue to follow up! [Blowing kiss]

Author, how long does it take for you to start casting curse spirits and enter high school? Will Lixiang still die?

When I read it earlier, I was still thinking about how to keep following the plot. After reading it, I was so moved. The author just keeps writing like this. I will continue to follow up with updates [Sending my heart]

It's like a breath of fresh air in the incantation literature [eating melon] [like]

I personally think it's one of the few good-looking cursed-back fics on Tomato.

Ok ok ok

Still pretty

Can Naruto be written in the second world? Also, I hope it can be written a little longer.

It's good-looking, and it's a really good novel among conjuring fandoms. The characters are not out of shape, and the protagonist is not particularly unreasonably enhanced. It is quite in line with the enhancement of the original comic. There is no harsh criticism or exaggeration of the original characters. Very comfortable to watch.

The writing is smooth, but Li Xiang is still awkward. In Chapter 79, the protagonist begins to awaken his past life memories.

I don't know how to put it, but it's super pretty anyway. I hope you stick with it [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

The top work of the spell return battle in Tomato

What a delicate writing style... It has a sense of flowing water. Different from comics, the author seems to have truly described their lives...

How should I put it? There were more Huaiyu scenes in the early stage, but they were very heartwarming [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. The protagonist grew up slowly, and the story with Li Xiang was very touching. I wanted to cry while watching it.

Didn't you say 200,000 words were needed to change the name?

The writing is a little too good, is it a miracle?

Now it's hard for me to imagine how strong the Ototsuki Shinjuku will be when it develops like this.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

The last few original chapters have been surprisingly good. I hope to update them more.

The writing is good, but the updates are too slow. Please give me some encouragement from the author.

It looks good and looks like a different parallel world.

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's like watching an anime [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful, and the emotions are very fresh. The character relationships are also handled well.

Yi Gu really has a fighting IQ. His fights are easy to watch, and he has many tricks that are very exciting. The pursuit of efficiency and slave play has the highest winning rate. It is very reliable. All in all, it's fun to fight