[Monsters must die] [Kill decisively] [Revenge does not take overnight]
Su Jian applied for an internship as a tombkeeper.
He is guarding a cemetery that everyone avoids.
One evening when he encountered a corpse, his family members all ran away, so Su Jian rushed up with a steel pipe.
What monster? What zombie? Die for me!
Later in the 749th round, all monsters who encountered him suffered disaster.
Just kill them if they show their heads! (Hey, I lied to you, I will kill you even if I don't show it)
[Kill the corpse-turned-female ghost and gain natural divine power]
[Kill the wild dog, kill Fushu, and gain amazing wisdom]
"Don't let Su Jian know about this mission. Since he came to 749, how long have we not contained monsters?"
"I heard you were going on a mission? Why didn't you call me?"
Reader comments
A book imitating Tai Sui Ye: Lu Ding. This book is a good book, but the description of details and the transition of scenes are not as smooth and natural as Tai Suiye's book. If it can be written more carefully and delicately, and add more unique mechanisms, I think it can be comparable to Tai Sui Ye's book.
But there are still many shortcomings
First: Skill introduction. ❶What is the use of the protagonist's skills and the black energy against the enemy? What effect does entering the enemy's body have? Not described clearly. ❷White light only mentioned that it has a soothing effect. What is the specific effect? What are the detailed skill changes and features?
Second: battle scenes and transitions. ❶The civet cat in the neighborhood. I don't quite understand the transition in the elevator. It's just that you don't know when something in the elevator is good or bad! You don't know that the protagonist is on the -99th floor. What happened to those monsters running out of the building?
Third: cheat skills. For the time being, I only found that one skill is repeated. I have marked it in the paragraph. I don't know if the author will change it. (Water avoidance technique, or water avoidance spell. The function is repeated, it is recommended to change it to another skill)
The gold content of the Tai Sui Lu Ding for dissecting corpses is still rising, hehe.
It's a bit similar to Tai Sui Lu Ding's book "Uncovering the Corpse", but I still hope the author can write in his own style.
This book looks okay, but the overall outline of the book has not changed much. It is still the same few criminal incidents.
After looking at the back, I felt that the whole book has not changed much. It is almost the same as the previous one. Only the names of people and exercises have been changed. All the events experienced by the protagonist are exactly the same [smile][smile]
Gaowu Wen, System Wen, Invincible Wen
It's a pity that it ended so hastily
Overall, I feel pretty good. I hope it doesn't collapse later.
The author writes well. You don't need to completely imitate Tai Sui's book. Come on.
Just do it recklessly
It's pretty good, no nonsense, no drag, but it's too short. So sad.
A book imitating Tai Sui Ye: Lu Ding. This book is a good book, but the description of details and the transition of scenes are not as smooth and natural as Tai Suiye's book. If it can be written more carefully and delicately, and add more unique mechanisms, I think it can be comparable to Tai Sui Ye's book. But there are still many shortcomings First: Skill introduction. ❶What is the use of the protagonist's skills and the black energy against the enemy? What effect does entering the enemy's body have? Not described clearly. ❷White light only mentioned that it has a soothing effect. What is the specific effect? What are the detailed skill changes and features? Second: battle scenes and transitions. ❶The civet cat in the neighborhood. I don't quite understand the transition in the elevator. It's just that you don't know when something in the elevator is good or bad! You don't know that the protagonist is on the -99th floor. What happened to those monsters running out of the building? Third: cheat skills. For the time being, I only found that one skill is repeated. I have marked it in the paragraph. I don't know if the author will change it. (Water avoidance technique, or water avoidance spell. The function is repeated, it is recommended to change it to another skill)
The gold content of the Tai Sui Lu Ding for dissecting corpses is still rising, hehe.
It's a bit similar to Tai Sui Lu Ding's book "Uncovering the Corpse", but I still hope the author can write in his own style.
This book looks okay, but the overall outline of the book has not changed much. It is still the same few criminal incidents. After looking at the back, I felt that the whole book has not changed much. It is almost the same as the previous one. Only the names of people and exercises have been changed. All the events experienced by the protagonist are exactly the same [smile][smile]
Gaowu Wen, System Wen, Invincible Wen It's a pity that it ended so hastily
Overall, I feel pretty good. I hope it doesn't collapse later.
The author writes well. You don't need to completely imitate Tai Sui's book. Come on.
Just do it recklessly
It's pretty good, no nonsense, no drag, but it's too short. So sad.