HP: Chasing Light

It is a very interesting redemption article. It is also one of the few Harry fanfics that has a redemptive color and has Harry as the protagonist. At the same time, the author also added some fairy tales. This is very unique. In addition to better shaping the image of the heroine, it also enriches the content of the article (how do I do it like Chinese reading comprehension...) In some content, the sentences in the plot paragraphs are particularly well written, and each character is very consistent and vivid and three-dimensional. The life experience of the heroine is also very well created. The holes buried in the previous article will be slowly filled up and explained. I like it very much. Moreover, the heroine in this article is not the same type as the heroine seen in other articles. The heroine in this article has her own advantages but also her own shortcomings. She is a very complete and three-dimensional character. The plot line and emotional line are not completely written according to Rowling's original work, but some other content is added, and it is also very creative (again, I lament that the author's imagination is really broad and I like it very much) I look forward to the author releasing ten more chapters in his spare time one day (hhhhhh [cool]

A hp descendant generation article, the cp is Harry. The heroine and Harry are childhood sweethearts, both living on Privet Drive. Although the pace is slow in the early stage, the writing is good. The heroine illuminates Harry's childhood like a light, making Harry less pitiful. Even the monologues in Harry's diary are very well written. From the time when the heroine and Harry were together at the fourth grade dance to Voldemort, I felt the writing was a bit sloppy. The relationship between the heroine and Harry could have transitioned more naturally. The setting of traveling through time and space was quite special, but the writing about Voldemort was too streamlined and a bit boring. However, the part about Castor was quite innovative and fulfilled the previous foreshadowing.

OK, I must watch the last one. It is like watching a cute and gentle fairy tale. If I were a chatterbox, I would have to give this author 10086+ comments and reminders for updates a day. It is so interesting and interesting. The author must be hugged by me and urge for updates 9999+ times today. It is said on the Internet, but in real life, I have to chase the author for a lifetime without thinking. It's so refreshing, so comfortable, it just makes my heart feel so good. I can't describe this feeling. It's exactly the same as when I was a child and couldn't walk while reading a fairy tale book. Everyone must give this little author a big kiss. It's so cute and cute. I believe I'm not the only one to get this wonderful thing. Make a wish now. Author, hurry up and be stubborn, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

A story as warm and touching as a fairy tale. Although the author is a little hasty in the narrative, it can be seen that he is very good at portraying the emotions of the characters. The content is as warm and beautiful as the cover of this book, but with a hint of melancholy. When you taste it carefully, it seems that "Light Chaser" is always echoing in your ears, which reminds you of the youthful, peaceful, but slightly regretful high school era. . . . Hope it ends well

The plot points are quite interesting, but the narrative is too bland and seems a bit like a running account. After reading the first dozen chapters, I can probably understand what kind of protagonist and story line I want to write, but this is what experience tells me, not what the author expresses. The overall timeline and description are more biased towards the movie version. At present, the opening chapter is better than the subsequent one. Come on, come on

The writing is pretty good. This is a rare Harry CP fanfic that deserves a five-star rating. The heroine is at the level of a little angel. The character didn't find any OOC. The writing style looks very comfortable, and the style feels similar to the original work. It's also easy to get along with other people, because the relationship between Harry and the heroine hasn't developed much yet. I get along very well with George. I have a lot of trouble with Tom (but he is a tough guy because he cheated on the heroine twice) I have a good fight with my cousin It's easy to fight with Harry, it's a pity that it's 1v1 hahaha. But whoever the heroine likes will be the hero! The writing is really good! It may be a bit bland at first, but the more you look at it, the better it looks, a bit more like the original.

The heartthrob Ola and her cute marshmallow puppy are having a good time with everyone. The main text CP is Harry. Can you write more extras? I really want to see it.

It's very interesting to watch, with delicate emotions and smooth plot, and the protagonist's image is very three-dimensional and rich. I have never written a review, but after reading this book, I really wanted to write a good review to encourage and praise the author. Thank you to the author for telling us such a touching story. I'm looking forward to the author's extras and more books [Love]

After watching it, except for the fact that going back in time to change the plot of Voldemort was a bit cumbersome and unnecessary, it was quite interesting. Later, when Voldemort was reborn, I felt sad for Harry😢😢The author should open a new article about CP Lao Voldemort, it feels great. But here, I can't help but feel sorry for Harry, I feel be in another sense [almost crying]

Cp Harry, childhood sweetheart is really delicious. . . It's a pity that there are no emotional scenes in the fifth and sixth grade in this article. There is no change after they are together and before they were not together. The extra story about Harry is also very good, and the extra about Voldemort is quite scary, but some other readers may like it.

It's pretty good. The plot is more daily. I feel that the heroine's character is really well written. However, I hope to see her bad side occasionally (maybe I haven't seen it too much). For example, seeing a very strong person cry in front of you, or someone who is indifferent and showing a gentle smile to you. I don't know if I can express it clearly... In short, I like it very much! And most of the authors seem to update once a day, and I can't even finish reading hh (I've only read more than 40 chapters now) The youthful and pure feelings between boys and girls are particularly good!

Ahhhhhhh, five-star praise must be given! The author's writing style is very gentle and delicate. Baby Oriel's personality is really super good! Harry is so cute and the other characters are also well developed! It gives me a very warm feeling when I read it! So far, it looks like there's really nothing wrong with it!

It's a very beautiful and heart-warming redemption story. The logic is very smooth and the writing style is also very good. I really like this one about childhood sweethearts. The emotional lines are also very delicate. I recommend it!

A rare Harry fan who has already written the finale and is now working on a sequel. The writing is smooth, there are no major bugs in the plot, and the heroine is slightly charming (actually I don't really like this kind of charming character, but this is my personal preference. The author deserves a five-star rating)

It's so warm, and the heroine is also very cute. I hope all the members will be alive in the end [Sending my heart]

Like... I'm not very good at talking, but I really like this book ૮ﻌა

I like pure love the most [crying] [crying] pure love Sai Gao

The writing is really good. If the author hadn't been too busy in real life and the ending was too hasty, if this book had been written more carefully, it would have really become a god.

It's great. It's the first time I've encountered a fanfic that suits my taste. I'll keep following it!

It's very interesting. The original story line also moves quickly. The word count is low, and it's more original.

It's nice to read, the logic makes sense, and the author's writing style is also very good.

The writing style is very good and the writing is very touching. I hope you can continue to follow me [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Not bad, very warm

Super good, very upright views.

It's really beautiful! The author's writing is so interesting! ! ! Everyone go and see it! 👀

It's okay. Before I watched The Fourth Grade, I skipped back to read it and felt that I wasn't very interested in the plot, but it was well written.