Comprehensive Comic: Cos Hoshino Ai but Becomes a Bitter Love Tree

The writing is very good. It's okay so far. You can try Ye Luoli in the next world. I feel that Princess Qing's ability is particularly suitable. I feel that Zhang Chulan is also okay under one person. Do you want to read it?

There are very few articles about Ai-chan, and even fewer of them are stable. The pace is a bit slow. Maybe I need to write a long novel? I hope the author can persevere. This laugh-out-loud girl is quite interesting. Go check it out. Do you understand? [Laugh]

Very nice! The plot is interesting, the language is beautiful, the emotions are overly natural, the plot is not procrastinating, and it is logical. It is a good book, but it is a bit too short. Just a little more! This is the request of my life!

Very nice (the book has been out of stock for a long time) (I came across a nice book) Jane: Our Lord Love started out weak, but through the game, he continued to grow and became able to control the whole world. It's very nice [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] The author must type well! [KISS][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

So far, it's quite interesting, but for the role of love, especially the self-narration of feelings, this series of fanfics are too unified, and they all fill the emptiness in the heart. However, there is no foreshadowing, or there is too little foreshadowing, so inserting a period of lack of emotion in childhood or in the past, echoing the identity of the current protagonist, will appear very deliberate, thus lowering the perception, allowing us to be forcibly separated from the role, and there is a strong "this is what the author wanted to write." This feeling, and this kind of forcing the protagonist to pursue emotions will ignore our essential enthusiasm for reading fan fiction. "What kind of sparks will the characters I like have with characters from other worldviews?" "Watch the protagonist become stronger." I hope the author can refer to my opinion. After all, the last book named Ke has been discontinued.

"The Young Lady's Diary of the Queen of the Sea" [laughter]

Very strange idea, very beautiful

It's pretty good, but it's a pity that it's a female video

It's very interesting. I like this idea very much and hope to see the rest of the story. Come on! ! ! (*๓´╰╯`๓)

Yes, the plot is pretty good

It's super beautiful. The writing, plot, and rhythm are all very good. I hope the follow-up won't be too toxic.

Big cheers for the author! So pretty! ! ! ! [Adoration]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Love is the best in the world! ! !

I think it's so pretty [Adoration]

You're so pretty, I like you [sending heart]

It looks good, come on [adoration][adoration][adoration]

You must stick to this book by the author [crying]

I feel it's okay, there aren't many red herrings, the content is rich and interesting, and it's worth watching.

I don't really like reading, but the subject matter is quite novel.

The writing is very good, not enough to read.

A very interesting book. It suits my taste. The writing is good. The only drawback is that there are too few books😭

It's very beautiful, the description of the heroine is very good, and some details are also handled very well.

It's very well written, a rare masterpiece of fan fiction!

It's beautiful [eating melon], cheers for the author