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Emmm, this is my favorite setting, so I clicked in after reading the introduction. Maybe it's because the author mostly writes from the perspective of the female protagonist, so it feels like the male protagonist's side of things isn't very clear. Of course, that may be the reason why it hasn't been written about yet. After all, it's still a new book? Maybe you want to write a story with more female protagonists? So there won't be too much going on with the male lead? (After all, it's a time-traveling book, and the original plot doesn't contain much detail?) Is there something a bit abrupt about the heroine's perspective? Maybe it would be better to lay the groundwork in advance (for example, cats, it's a bit abrupt for cats to rush into the scene after being mentioned in the previous sentence. I feel like there are more things about cats intentionally or unintentionally described in the front or at the beginning. The plot of the cat's appearance later and the cat boss monster in the back may be more natural)? This transition may be better (personal feeling). Now that I have tied it, overall, the setting is more to my liking, the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is okay, and it is still watchable (from my personal point of view). Come on, great author.

I'm so good at writing. I haven't seen such a satisfying article in a long time. So delicious. I finally had a satisfying candy, woo woo woo. I must keep writing. Overall it is a bit funny, although sometimes I can't get it. But I got the emotional line, very much. I like it so much, can you just let me take a nap now, and then wake up and tell me it's over?

Looks good, feels quite interesting

Sweet and pretty, love watching it