After Becoming the Dragon-Pride Hero's Fiancée Who Broke Off the Engagement

Emmm, this is my favorite setting, so I clicked in after reading the introduction. Maybe it's because the author mostly writes from the perspective of the female protagonist, so it feels like the male protagonist's side of things isn't very clear. Of course, that may be the reason why it hasn't been written about yet. After all, it's still a new book? Maybe you want to write a story with more female protagonists? So there won't be too much going on with the male lead? (After all, it's a time-traveling book, and the original plot doesn't contain much detail?) Is there something a bit abrupt about the heroine's perspective? Maybe it would be better to lay the groundwork in advance (for example, cats, it's a bit abrupt for cats to rush into the scene after being mentioned in the previous sentence. I feel like there are more things about cats intentionally or unintentionally described in the front or at the beginning. The plot of the cat's appearance later and the cat boss monster in the back may be more natural)? This transition may be better (personal feeling). Now that I have tied it, overall, the setting is more to my liking, the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is okay, and it is still watchable (from my personal point of view). Come on, great author.

It's so confusing. I feel like nothing is explained clearly. It's confusing [what]

Don't know what you're talking about

The chase was going well, but here comes a cat demon. I feel that the heroine has no sense of boundaries. Besides, as I have clearly said, the heroine still treats people as cats and wants to touch the flower-shaped cat's tail. What a fuss.

The emotional line is good, but what about the plot? Long Aotian's world is not full of grudges. There is also that teacher and Mrs. Jin. They have appeared too many times and they act like fools. (Excluding mental illness) What Mrs. Jin did to the heroine was not explained clearly in more than 50 chapters. I just read the label, OK, it's an ancient romance, I don't speak according to the standards of fairy tales. But a grand world view is not shown. If I want to talk about a small world, treat it as if I didn't say it. Also, those who are close to the male and female protagonists are the smart ones, and the other cannon fodder are all Shacha (only personal opinion) (As for the one-star rating, the emotional line is not enough, but the plot is too uncomfortable)

One moment it says that the heroine wears a book, and the other moment the plot says that the heroine has been in the sect for several years. I don't know what I'm writing about.

Compared to Jing Han, Liang Yan is more emotionally slow [smirking] The two of them get along very well, and they are constantly exploring love. I hope that the two will fall in love and share the same heart as soon as possible, and that the heroine, the master, and the lady can lift the Taoist couple's seal of the same heart [already planted] [plus one on the bookshelf]

Although the writing is quite beautiful, the explanation at the beginning is not very clear, which makes people look confused, and the plot behind it is a bit wrong. From Mu Xiaoxiao's point of view, it is really angry and powerless, and the heroine does not feel there is any problem. I feel uncomfortable watching it, maybe I feel wrong.

I like the setting very much and it's eye-catching, but the language organization skills are a bit lacking. Many sentences are not logical and difficult to read. The settings in the article are not clear enough. In the first few chapters, one sect can have three names in a row. There is no other meaning, just objective evaluation. Come on.

I'm so good at writing. I haven't seen such a satisfying article in a long time. So delicious. I finally had a satisfying candy, woo woo woo. I must keep writing. Overall it is a bit funny, although sometimes I can't get it. But I got the emotional line, very much. I like it so much, can you just let me take a nap now, and then wake up and tell me it's over?