Luo Xiaohei: Random Abilities and an Endless Fifty-Fifty Match

The writing is very good, I like it very much. To borrow a sentence I saw in the book review area before reading this book, I feel like I am watching the sequel of Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles. The following contains spoilers, please read as appropriate. Don't worry about the protagonist getting hurt due to a bad family environment and making it uncomfortable to watch. As soon as there are signs of trouble, the protagonist relies on his own ability and the help of Lu Ye and others to leave that home. The transition is very smooth and it is very comfortable to watch.

Super, super, super good-looking, I hope it's free of CP. It's the best Luo Xiaohei fanfic I've seen on Tomato so far. The main character is a girl. It's really great [almost crying] [crying] [crying]. The author's writing style is also very good and the writing is not embarrassing at all. It's a very good-looking fanfic that makes me spin. I hope there won't be a knife in the back. The heroine's family is really suffocating [crying] I feel like I've watched a few more episodes of Luo Xiaohei, the author's writing is super good!

Oh my god, you made me cry. Xiao Liang Shuang also has someone to love! Very well written! After watching it, I feel like I have watched Luo Xiaohei all over again. It is completely in line with Luo Xiaohei's world view and does not feel OOC. And capitalized language is powerful! Extremely contagious! I have never taken the paper off my nose. I suggest you read the article and feel it yourself. Don't just read what is said in the comment area. Trust your own eyes.

First of all, let me explain that these are the top three best fanfics written by Luo Xiaohei that I have read. They are more consistent with the original work, not too far away from the setting, and the setting is relatively complete. The interaction between Sanxindui is also good, and I really like the story line of the Gate of All Living Beings. The above are the advantages, but I still want to point out some things that I think are unreasonable. First of all, the characters' language and speaking habits are a bit too uniform and a bit OOC, especially Master Shikano's. Secondly, there are individual scene descriptions, maybe to promote the development of the plot. Some characters' behaviors are OOC, such as (1) Nishikiko, he is a character with extremely emotional intelligence. Except when he is angry, he will never act. The atmosphere will not be dulled, (2) Senior Sister Luye will not use the guest room as a study room. With Luye's taste and aesthetics, there will be a dedicated study room, and (3) Due to the characteristics of goblins, except in the crowd, they have to hide their abilities. Most of the time they will use their abilities to do daily needs. For example, Luye will definitely use metal to move things, not hands. This has been reflected infinitely in the movie. (4) Maybe in order to fit the setting of the TV version, the random character is too immature and a little unreasonable Above, I hope the author gets better and better!

Super pretty! The setting of the heroine is also quite interesting, with random skills and so on. The troubled parents are very annoying. I hope they won't appear again in the future. The later plot settings are also very exciting and have the flavor of the original version.

It really feels like watching Luo Xiaohei anime. 👍👍The protagonist is also a good person, original and not cliched, just like the original character. I want to follow it until the finale.

So well written! The character design is not OOC at all, and the transition of the plot is perfect. It is not the kind of Luo Xiaohei who insists on writing a heartthrob just to gain popularity after becoming popular, but the character design is also very OOC. . This book is really good, and the jokes that pop up from time to time are very relevant and funny! I like Little Ancestor the most and hope to see him appear more often! The fire type is super cool! All in all, I really like it and want to add more😭

It's super beautiful. Although the heroine has a miserable family background, she has met many people who love her. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] It's very beautiful. Come and watch it. (The author has a small wish. Can the heroine's cp be Lu Ye!!! [Shy][Shy][Shy] Begging)

A rare fan of Luo Xiaohei, with originality. The plot timing started when I first met the Gate of All Living Beings. It feels like the original work. The plot arrangement is reasonable and logical. The protagonist design is good, but there is too little. The author will update it quickly.

The book is quite nice, and the random bits are super cute ( ⩌ - ⩌ ), but the plot related to Shengnan is really uncomfortable (he was born with a healing ability, and then he was taken to the gym and cried all the time, accompanied by goblins, and his lost friends were angry at Random, and it felt like he was treated better than the protagonist) emmm Then Random generously forgave me, I can understand that my friend was angry when he lost contact, but it was Lizi who took him away. Why do you feel like apologizing is so light? Even the apologies of Zhizhi and Shenglan were saying that Taotao was impatient and bad-tempered. EM made people feel that it was natural to vent their anger on Random. Then Shenglan also complained about Random when he came online. I can understand friends favoring friends, but I also favor Random. Random is only in junior high school when I count, and Taotao and Shengnan are already high school students, which makes it difficult for people to criticize. Regarding the creation of Holy Blue, I really had a vision of the male protagonist Asasi from Japanese comics [Both parents died in the beginning, leaving a rich inheritance, breaking off relations with vampire relatives, addicted to games, and having friends Taotao and Zhizhi who cared about me very much. Suddenly, they were discovered to be innate healers while playing games. From then on, their lives took a turn, and they had a goblin master and a senior sister. The senior sister transferred to school to accompany and protect... If you add some emotional lines, it would be a bit like a harem episode in Japanese comics]