Immortal Martial Arts: Starting After My Talent Was Stolen

Fight, fight, fight, kill, kill, feel good, feel good, very good article. I have read too many stories that look like big female protagonists. In fact, except for the female protagonist, there are basically no stories about strong women. No matter how strong they are, strong women have to be concubines for men. There are also female NPCs who will become concubines once they fail to win a fight. There are also novels that have been severely criticized, and there are also novels where the heroine stares lewdly, or the heroine stares lewdly at others, but this book has none of these vulgar plots, and there is no sexist opposition in it. The strong women in it are almost the same as the strong men. It is a very good novel, and it doesn't give me shit.

I have read about a hundred chapters so far. The writing is pretty good and the plot is smooth and smooth. There are no big surprises. The two heroines, Qingmei Qingmei, grew up together and have never been separated. The friendship is naturally very deep. Both heroines are extremely talented in their respective fields and are considered top talents among their peers. Sometimes I feel that giving the heroine one talent is too generous, but overall it is readable. Some minor questions and suggestions: The author sometimes makes typographical errors and writes the wrong realm or the realm is unclear. The number of spiritual coins used by the heroine to refine weapons, purchase spiritual materials, and sell spiritual weapons can be explained more clearly, but sometimes people are confused. Sometimes sentences may not make sense due to missing words or typos. The author didn't label it as a double heroine, and I almost missed it if I hadn't read the introduction. Finally, what everyone cares about is that among the two women, we still hope that there will be more women in high positions and with decision-making power, and that the female-to-male ratio will be higher. The two female protagonists currently have more female friends among their peers, but almost all the powerful elders who appear are male. The two female protagonists became male mentors. On the way to training, they met two elders who were eager to become disciples and showed love and affection. They were also men. At home, their fathers were stronger and more talented. (In fact, there could be other reasons for being rejected by the family, but they just insisted on being with someone the family disdained.) ; The female Pavilion Master Ye encountered during the Qing Niu Crisis would be suppressed by her teacher. The female Pavilion Master who took action when Ye Halai took revenge in the Lingyun Arena had a stronger male palace master above him. There was always a stronger male master above the strong female. It was really puzzling and depressing. I just don't know if the current commander of the Black Cloud Cavalry and the legendary emperor of Great Xia will be set as men. I really hope they can be set as women. I don't know if they will appear in the subsequent plot updates. I believe that when everyone can learn martial arts equally, women will not perform worse than men, and there will not be fewer people in high positions. In fact, if the mentor/guide characters of the two heroines were female, they would be more lovable to the female audience. I can only say that it is a bit regrettable from a personal point of view. Regardless of whether it is a dual female theme, in female videos, I still want to see characters who establish more bonds of friendship with the female protagonists who are both women.

It looks good, the writing is good, and there are no bugs in the plot. It is an orthodox fantasy upgrade flow. Logically speaking, the traffic of this book should not be so sluggish. Some articles written by AI can be rated high, but I don't know why this book has too little traffic 🤦

The logic is fine, the protagonist has a good personality and doesn't drag on. It's very easy to read, it's my favorite style, and it's not annoying at all. Originally, I read novels to relax, but many novels are very depressing. I don't know why, but after reading them, they only make me angrier. I feel that the main reason for the low rating is because the title was not chosen well. The mainstream is immortality and fantasy, and the keywords cannot be related when searching. The second thing is that the label was not set well. It would be great to have a double heroine. It's beautiful. I really hope the author can finish it well. You must persist. This is your first work.

It's pretty good, but sometimes I feel a little uncomfortable. Maybe this is the difference between male and female videos. When watching male videos, I just want to see the male protagonist being suppressed severely. The female protagonist can't do it. I can't stand it even if the female protagonist suppresses it. Author, did you tell me that the master will kill me behind this rock?

The best book I have read recently. The heroine is a genius among geniuses and is always evolving. Most of the strong characters in the book are women. Every time an unexpected strong character appears who is a woman, I am surprised. It is a super cool article.

How many chapters does the author want to write to finish it? I think it is very interesting and I can't wait to finish reading it. The other heroine is Chang Le. Can you give her some fighting power? Her strength should not be too different from A Yu's. I hope they can grow together and look forward to their future.

It's beautiful, why are there so few people? After watching it for a while, I can only say that it's okay. It's too bland and boring to watch. It's not attractive enough to keep watching. In summary, the content is too boring.

Very authentic upgrade flow. I like it.

It's good-looking, the heroine is mature and steady, and the writing is cool.