Dan Heng**********

This book is to satisfy some of my own fantasies about Egg Yolk traveling through the Douluo Continent. There may be a small amount of OOC or some content that is inconsistent with Douluo. Please be merciful with your keyboard. And this is my first time writing a novel. Maybe the writing style is not very good and the plot is not attractive enough. Everyone is welcome to criticize in the comment area. Thank you for your support [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] If you have any good ideas about the plot, you can type them in the comment area or what the author has to say. Finally, there will be no female protagonist in this book, and there will be no censorship [heartfelt] [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Thank you for your support

It's okay, but for now, the frequent emoticons are very inconsistent and affect the perception. The first time I saw it, the story clearly had no problem with the novel, but I was forced to live a daily life like a house by the emoji. Well, the character design also tends to look like a housewife.

So far, it's okay. There aren't too many poisonous points. It would be better if the characters were more fleshed out and the fighting plot was more detailed.

I think the fifth to ninth rings are Azure Bull Python, Zi Ji, Deep Sea Demonic Whale King, Emperor Tian, ​​and Silver Dragon King respectively [Thinking]

It looks good. I finally don't have to lose my mind. There are many emojis and it's very cute. I'm also one of the few people who joined the Wuhun Palace. I have an innate soul power of 20. It's quite cool.

Where is Chongyuan Pearl? This is the real treasure of the Vidyadhara clan, and it is probably related to the immortal star god I feel like it can be set as Chong Yuan Zhu bringing Dan Heng to this world

Tire is clever and cool, and the plot is quite compact. Due to my personal preference, I was a bit distracted by the frequently appearing emojis, and there is also a slight OOC. However, most of the fanfic OOC is normal, so overall it is not bad.

It's very well written and very serious.

Beautiful and unbreakable character design

Very nice, but there are not many articles

Please update the author's book [Crying] It's hard to find Dan Heng's book

I usually don't read books like this about traveling through the Douluo Continent, but I think your book is really good. I just want to know if the author can add a few more chapters?

I would like to ask why there is so little about Douluo?

Nice! Come on, teacher [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Super super pretty

It's beautiful! It's beautiful! It's beautiful! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Beautiful (´艸｀) It's really beautiful! It just hasn't been updated yet (৹ᵒ̴̶̷᷄́ฅᵒ̴̶̷᷅৹) ♡⃝

I like the teacher's writing very much, but I hope it can be updated soon. It's not enough.

. Nice looking, but why is the tail like this?