Nine Suns Divine Physique

This is my first time writing a fantasy novel. I didn't write it well. What areas need improvement? If you have any suggestions for this book, please give it a good review and thumbs up. Thank you. I've been so busy lately that I haven't kept up with the books. I'm so sorry for reading. I'll update with a few more chapters next time. Thank you. I look forward to commenting on the book and giving it a thumbs up. Good night.