(Furry Xiang, dual male protagonists) The virus is coming, and monsters are emerging one after another. What kind of adventures will the two protagonists, who turned into orcs due to their special physiques, have in this city where humans and orcs coexist? (This is my first time writing a novel, so I treat it as a hobby and try to update it every day)
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The viewing experience is okay, but sometimes when I read this novel, I feel that my perspective is seriously distorted. Maybe it's because I got dizzy while reading the novel at night? Then I felt that the plot was missing something, and I always felt that there was too little padding in the front. . . There are still problems that can be improved. I hope you can try to think more about the foreshadowing and turning points of the plot. As long as you explain it clearly without pursuing the ultimate details, you will win. At present, apart from a glance at Xiaobai's work, it is still a good love story. It is recommended to watch and record the author's growth.
The viewing experience is okay, but sometimes when I read this novel, I feel that my perspective is seriously distorted. Maybe it's because I got dizzy while reading the novel at night? Then I felt that the plot was missing something, and I always felt that there was too little padding in the front. . . There are still problems that can be improved. I hope you can try to think more about the foreshadowing and turning points of the plot. As long as you explain it clearly without pursuing the ultimate details, you will win. At present, apart from a glance at Xiaobai's work, it is still a good love story. It is recommended to watch and record the author's growth.
It's still possible, come on author.
Very nice, I like it