Alluring City

This book is so touching. A real urban domestic slave has a high status, but is very obedient, and the superiors do not have those useless concepts of equality. The heroine is a master in the true sense. Although she is occasionally kind, she has a high sense of deservingness. I thought it was good at first, but then it became worse and worse. The heroine seemed to have masochistic tendencies. She didn't like the two good dogs, but fell in love with the least well-behaved dog. She even started to use that drug on another woman for the sake of the dog that was almost dirty. It was like a female competition scene.

This book, strictly speaking, is my first novel in my life. Many readers may have seen its original appearance - immature writing and many regrets. When it first attracted attention on the shelves, it was banned due to the sensitive subject matter and was trapped in a "little dark room" for a long time. In order to see the light of day again, I hurriedly modified it, but its original frame collapsed again. Until I finished writing the original version of the finale, I was still filled with dissatisfaction - this was not how they should have ended up. So, I decided to rewrite and reshape the entire book. This book has had a bumpy journey, but now it has finally grown into what it should be. Especially the male and female protagonists were finally written how I imagined them to be. The character Ji Ming is extremely complex. He was born into a declining family, and he was burdened with the pain of the family's overthrow. This brand of "non-family" made him always like a stranger in the Mu family system, alienated and sensitive. He is the only one who has the ability to stand shoulder to shoulder with the heroine, but he is also the most difficult character to create a soulful character. In the original version, I failed to give him the flesh and blood he deserved, which caused many people to find it awkward and disliked him. They also felt that the relationship between him and the heroine was strange. This was all because I failed to portray his original appearance. Now, he is completely different - he has become the only Ji Ming with strong muscles and bones who can stand shoulder to shoulder with the heroine in my heart. I hope you can understand him this time and understand why I want to create a role for the heroine that can work side by side.

The writing style is very delicate, and the characters' inner thoughts and backgrounds are described in detail. However, this is a cool article, and it is not suitable to focus on this. The pace is slow, the storyline is very small, and most of it is about the inner feelings. On the contrary, if the author writes literary novels, this will be very good. The inner world of the characters has flesh and blood and emotions. A slower pace can deepen the image of the characters. Most literary novels are generally short, and there are not many chapters in a book. They can be described from a few things and several stories. Good luck, author [Love]

It's really good to watch, but it's a pity that there are only more than 100 episodes. Not enough to see OK at all. The author should write more books like this. It's so good, so good, so good, so good, I can't get enough of it. Ahhhhhhhhh

A super article about xp, I wish I could meet next door. (But it's nice to be able to figure it out automatically.) It's so weird that the rating is so low. I tried to manually raise it a little bit. Please don't miss it! (ღ˘˘ღ)

It's very good-looking, and it's very satisfying to me. It's really fun. The eldest lady is in control of everything. She has money and power, and she doesn't feel wronged at all. Everyone must watch [Adoration][Adoration]! ! ! The family members are indeed very good-looking. They have greatly revised the entire book. The characters are more three-dimensional and the plot is better. However, due to tomato restrictions, some admonitions were also deleted. You can click on it and take a look, and don't be affected by some negative reviews (because most of the negative reviews are for the previous content, not the revised content now) [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Different from the modern domestic slaves I usually see, the setting of this book really shocked me, and the author wrote it well [Sending my heart]

It's a matter of personal preference. The writing is still very good, and the concept is also good. But the author seems to like to keep the description secret and hidden, and then suddenly jump out and slap him in the face... However, many of them were offended and slandered for the first time as a protagonist, but they let it go lightly, insisting on enduring it until the end... The viewing experience is a bit uncomfortable,

It's really good-looking. I feel like it's going to be a trend that abuses the body but not the mind. The characters are very stand-alone and not brainless. I sincerely recommend it. I feel like it's one of the best in this type of novel! ! !

It can be seen that it is the product of the author's self-cut leg flesh, so it can only be said that it comes down to personal preference. Although this book is not to my liking, I like this subject and hope more people will write it in the future.

It's so good. I've never seen such a good-looking modern domestic slave story. Each character is unique and complete. The plot is compact and smooth. It's hard to put down.

I suddenly felt that it was a good thing that Begonia was gone [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Mrs. Leaked.

I feel a little sour after reading it. The book is very good.

I love watching Super Invincible👀. The plot is beyond my imagination. I love it. I hope it will be updated soon. ε=ε=(＞Д＜)ノノ

Awesome. I fell in love after reading 1 chapter

A very special subject, I like it very much

I have read this article by the teacher on other platforms before, but I didn't expect it to be moved here. I will read it again [sending my heart]

It's beautiful. I like it so much. It's so cool! ! ! And the plot is interesting and not cliche. I recommend it! ! ! !

It's pretty, really

Very nice, love watching it

So pretty, so pretty

Super pretty and pretty

Beautiful, very beautiful

I really like this setting

A very good article in this series, full of details

It's so beautiful. I like this kind of thing. I like it very much. I like it very much.

The content is very coherent, the writing is also very good, I really like the plot, it is worth watching

The logic is clear and really nice. I feel like I can brush it up.

A novel that is particularly worth recommending. The characters are well drawn and the content is endlessly memorable.

It's pretty good. I like the style. It would be nice if I could add some color.