Ultraman Orb: Starting with Winning Over a Genderbent Jugglus Juggler

The look and feel is quite good so far, the writing is quite fluent, and there are not many stupid mistakes that many new authors make. It's not like the five-star review with the most likes and comments that talks nonsense, like Kahn's. I personally have seen more than 50 and 60 pieces so far, but I haven't seen anything as disgusting as the one by Tiga. Rational viewing and rational understanding. Finally, I would like to make some suggestions, it is best to have a single female protagonist. Or if there is no female protagonist, don't write multiple female protagonists. This is quite a loss in the Ultraman genre. From a visual inspection, if you continue to write and more people read it, there will still be no problem with 8.0, And it will be around 7.0 At the end. Yes, that's right, that's how it's written, keep writing it, it should be a single heroine and a yandere. There is already a confession in Chapter 41, where does Heidi Jia come from? 😡That's right, that's how I write about a boy. Seeing this scene was not in vain as I read more than 30 chapters with fear. If you haven't come in to see it, come in and see, I am Shennong, I have already eaten it, where did the Heidijia come from? If there is the same picture of Heidi, I will die, Lao Feng

It's okay, the protagonist hasn't done anything too extreme yet, I look forward to the follow-up (I personally hope to be worthy of Jagula)

The author wrote it very well. If Hong Kai and Jia Gula could open their hearts like this in the play, there wouldn't be so many misunderstandings. It's a pity that the two of them are very nervous. This book also perfectly presents the complex emotions between Hong Kai and Jia Gula as partners who have been fighting side by side, best friends who have been with each other for thousands of years, and enemies of light and shadow. I hope the author can give them a good ending.

I want to see pure love, no harem allowed 🙂

Very good, come on, author. It can be compared with the works of Emperor Kahn.

Very good and in line with my bad taste 😏 This book is very good. When I read Ultraman Orb, I felt a sense of regret for the two of them. They obviously cared about each other very much. They were once so good friends, but because of their different ideas, they went on opposite paths. It was really heartbreaking. But in this book, the relationship has been improved very well, especially in Chapter 47 with Jakura's confession. This is how he expresses his embarrassing emotions. He is a very kind person." , What "I don't want you to leave", what "I never want to say goodbye"... This is in this article that Jakura mistakenly believes that Kai is going to die and exposes his hidden feelings to the sun. I personally think this is very consistent with Jakura's feelings for Hong Kai in the play. Therefore, this book is worth reading. I borrowed a sentence from Gu Wo's movie to compile it. No book review can replace the original book. A good novel is worth experiencing the complete plot.

It looks good. I'll just be in love with Jagula from now on.

This is the first time I saw Hong Kai and Jia Gula's CP article, and the review is that it is very beautiful.

The writing is excellent, and the setting is changed directly instead of changing the gender. Both Jagula and Belial were born female, tsk tsk. It has something to do with the tone of the enemy. The heroine is Jakura, and the tsundere queen is well written. The character of the male protagonist is a little problematic. You should be serious when you should be serious. Readers will like a fun-loving person but not a male protagonist who is out of tune... I prefer daily novels. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet ~ worth following.

It must be a single heroine. If I dare to write multiple heroines, there will be a small author with seven-star reviews.