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1. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the emotions are delicate and real, and you will have a long aftertaste after reading it. Although the story is short, it is full of tension, with just the right foreshadowing and twists. It is a high-quality short story. 2. The text is clean and crisp, the narrative rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and the characters' inner descriptions are delicate and moving. There is no deliberate sensationalism, but there is power hidden in the plainness, making people unable to help but think about it again and again after reading it. 3. The concept is exquisite and the intention is profound, using simple stories to tell the complex human nature. The atmosphere is well created, the emotions are progressive, and the blank space at the end is thought-provoking. It is worth

It's okay. It's almost a better Douluo fan novel.

It's okay, but there aren't enough details. The emotional scenes are not well written. Keep up the good work! [Laugh]

Not bad, good, tastes great

Okay, okay, it's my type

The book is really beautiful, but some details are not clear enough. In the end, the author must keep writing [Like] [Like] [Like]

It can look good, come on, come on

Good-looking (♥∀♥), in line with my taste

Excellent Douluo product, not too poisonous

Give a rating to encourage me [Thinking]

Give me Bibi Dong and the protagonist a little more scenes

Can it be finished?

Not bad, not bad. It tastes great. The rice bowl is delicious.

The plot is good, but the author said that he doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. This is a bit regretful, but other aspects are still worth watching.

It's very interesting to watch, and the narration is also very good with multiple female protagonists. Everyone is welcome to come and take a look

A fanfic of good quality can be regarded as the best in the world. I wonder if the author can add one more update. Two updates is too little.

Come on! Keep writing. This subject matter is still very new. There are not many Douluo fans in Tomato. Your overall writing is okay. Come on.

Come on, it completely meets my vision of time travel fans. If all the Ming Realm is moved out, will there be three thousand worlds in the future?

A very good fanfic, if you like rice bowls, you can read it if you have multiple female protagonists, mainly from the perspective of Wuhundian