Too Bad************

Come on, it's so damn interesting, I can finally see the yellow tomatoes [smile][smile][smile] I especially like to watch the male protagonist "whip" the female protagonist. It feels quite novel. I can sit at the same table with the manic man next door. Now I am here If you look at it, there is no need to run away with a single female protagonist, and I hope to stick to a single female protagonist, and don't learn to be a harem novel. The author also remembers to take it easy and don't kill my Uncle Liu Huang, then I have to ask you [snickering] [smirking] [smirking]

This is a peerless book, it's so unbelievable, even worse than Kuaishou No. 22.

Very good-looking children, it is like Liu Beiwen, but there are too few chapters, and the pace may be a bit slow, but it is really good to read. I suggest you to keep it or keep it, and read it when it is time to read it. Don't let this book die.

It's quite good-looking. The theme of male yandere + cultivating immortality is novel. I don't say how good the writing is, but it is definitely solid. I look forward to the follow-up. I hope to keep updating three times a day. I can consider writing a previous work in the future. I will give it 5 stars [like] [like]

Insert an eye and see when the little moon comes back The heroine is so holy that I don't think she needs to come back.

It's good-looking, and the plot is novel. I've only seen this kind of book on that kind of website [laughs crookedly], and I have to say it's too outrageous. The male protagonist is also pure CS [face covering], he is the kind of yandere with a bit of aggression (still too perverted) The heroine is a pure virgin, but not annoying. The kind who helps as many people as possible without expecting anything in return, and even fantasizes about creating a world of peaceful coexistence. When encountering a massacre, he will find a way to help, even though his own situation is not good, he treats mortals as human beings, not ants. Because of this, he is worthy of the title of "fairy"! This is also the charm of the heroine's personality. The heroine is a very pure, kind and beautiful person. The character creation is also very good. I like the male and female protagonists very much. Also, the role of the adopted daughter is similar to the barrage in variety shows [laughing], which is quite interesting. Moreover, the characters are not annoying, and occasionally there are some jokes mixed in, which is quite interesting. If you want to read this book, you only need to accept one point, that is, the male protagonist will go crazy and torture the female protagonist from time to time, similar to whipping... This kind of method, the male protagonist more often uses this method to punish or when the madness level is full, he needs to vent. The writing is good, the look and feel is good, and it is very comfortable to watch. Also, the yandere male protagonist is possessive and controlling, which is also very interesting. Tomato is a rare male yandere

I just like to see new tricks [Like] It is not recommended for people who like to watch turtle men and lickers. This book is extremely malicious to such people [laughing and crying]

Not bad, not bad, and the male protagonist is really ruthless. I like the characters of both the male and female protagonists very much. In fact, I hate the Virgin the most, but I don't know why I really like this female protagonist. It doesn't work, it doesn't work, why is the heroine becoming more and more like a saint? She is a real saint, the kind who will hurt herself for others. . . . It's still a small fight at the beginning, but it's getting more and more serious later. The heroine is also going further and further on the path of the Holy Mother. Just like the personal computer, she is trying to be the Holy Mother. The character creation is becoming more and more weak. It can be seen that the writing has declined slightly after writing for a long time, and she is stuck in that frame. I can't stand it anymore. The heroine is the invincible Holy Mother.

The main characters in this book are all gods [face covering] The heroine Chun Chun Gyro is PUA herself, her mouth is too good for her body and she is currently awakening her attributes [Adoration] The male protagonist is a pure yandere. This is the first time I have seen the landmine man [face covering] Chun Chun S. The cause of the disease is due to the magic bone, but I feel that I will definitely become a good husband. Although this trend is indeed there, in the beginning, he whipped the female protagonist like a top. I really couldn't hold back [laughing and crying]

It's quite interesting to watch, with a crazy self-centered male protagonist, a female protagonist who comforts herself and strategies for herself no matter what happens, plus a group of righteous disciples who seem to be righteous but are actually evil, and a group of sect followers who are both good and evil. It can be called a chaotic dance of demons. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet, otherwise readers will be infected and think that they have joined some indescribable grass-stage troupe to stage an evil drama.

A novel routine, I can write it well, I hope I can stick to it

The violence value in the front is somewhat similar to that of Tomato's urban novel, but I am also innovative in the latter part, making it easy to write about brothers and easy to write. I have to say that the male protagonist is also very CS, and even gave his wife PTSD. Keep the pace, I also want to see the female protagonist hit the ball straight and make the male protagonist stunned.

The direction of this book is relatively new, and it has reached the latest chapter. I hope that the male protagonist will not become a licking demon, and will keep the character set at the beginning, and will not be too aggressive at the end. The female protagonist will leave a short essay and run away without being too aggressive. Moreover, if the latest trend is not on a regular platform, there is a risk of being too good. I'm going to vomit. The development of the story is completely forced by the author. It is almost impossible to develop the story line as written by the author without pulling it. Do these two women regard Wuji as a trump card that is ready at any time? Wuji is not invincible yet. He will not be entangled in anything or has nothing to do. There are no accidents at all. He is waiting for the call 24 hours a day? Wuji has the qualifications to be a master of suffering, don't say he will die before he comes, the heroine is not in the name of great love, what will happen if she dies and can't see Wuji? When a cultivator meets a powerful person, can he die if he wants to? He returned to his immortal body and passed away in Southeast Asia with gold in hand. He really regarded Wuji as invincible. Decrease wisdom

It's really good-looking, but a bit curious. When the protagonist comes out, the five stars will be changed

Great, it's the real Holy Mother, we are hopeless ( The classic female character who is bullied and the male character who only lives in memories. The title of the book can be changed to "The Adventures of Xiao Qingyue". You can add "female channel", "female hero", "single heroine", "no CP" and "dead Bai Yueguang" in the introduction.

After thinking about it for a while, I finally wrote a book review The whole book is very well written. The author has strong descriptive skills and describes many scenes in detail, especially the interaction between the male and female protagonists, which is better than most books on Tomato. I can say that I started reading this book when it just started to stop updating. I have basically been reading this book for the past few days. Now I find that the author has stopped updating, and I don't know if it will be updated again. (The author can reply if you see it.) The novel is still very particular about continuity, especially where the author stopped updating. The rhythm is tight. Anyway, I wish the author good luck in life. I saw that the author had read his previous books after the break. It can be said that it is a bit of a hit. The longest of the seven books is only 700,000 words. In fact, I feel that if this book is not TJ, it should be more than 1.5 Million words (Wu Qin is only practicing now, so he can also write about past events. There are many, Lingyun Sect has not yet entered) I can only lament that the general environment is not good, AI and Liu Shui Shuang are overflowing, there are no good works, short dramas crowd out the ecological niche of novels, and the author's income should not be optimistic, but I feel that if your book is promoted more on the platform, it would be good to change it into a comic or something like that. I personally feel that the author has followed the trend of the book "My Wife is Introverted and Can't Hold Back Love", but I think your book is more promising than his. I have read his book with more than 200 chapters. The author feels that he is still a high school student, and there are many poems from high school textbooks. There are still 75 days left for the college entrance examination. This may also be a reason for the discontinuation of updates. I will be taking the college entrance examination soon. I hope to see the author update again after the college entrance examination.

I hope there will be more training plots, not enough abuse. It feels better if the abuse comes from the heart, rather than a system task release, otherwise it will feel less like it is done to complete the task rather than from the heart.

Beautiful and beautiful, this novel is like a fantasy and magnificent maze. Once you step into it, you will be trapped in it and unable to extricate yourself. The author's words are vivid and lively, like smart elves jumping between the pages. The plot has ups and downs, like surging waves, sometimes calm and sometimes stirring up turbulent waves. The characters in the book are full of characters, as if they had stepped out of the book, with their own joys and sorrows. It is undoubtedly a shining pearl in the literary treasure house!

A normal male protagonist with a clear mind, strong strength, and a bit of a fondness for sadism. The pure virgin heroine has a love brain. She deceives herself. She hasn't recognized the reality yet, and she doesn't realize that there are many things you can ask the hero directly. After reading it, I actually had a good impression of it. It's not a story about a female protagonist who abuses the protagonist. The male protagonist respects the female protagonist and she really treats her as his wife. (I'm talking about a lot of female videos where men and women are not considered human beings, not even slaves)

Five-star praise, save your life by scoring points, author, please work hard and keep writing.

[Laughter and cry] [Laughter and cry] A stunning fairy named Xiao, with a moon in her name, sect Bai Yueguang, who can play the piano, has a bamboo horse, and the stunning female sword fairy master of the declining sword sect. Her apprentice was caught and was threatened [laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] I don't even know who this tribute is [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Haokang, Aikang

Beautiful, love watching. Tomato is here to see this! ! Can't eat anymore, disappointed, run away, delete

It's okay, it's about average for Tomato. The wife-beating scene at the beginning is actually just a gimmick. The essence is still a fantasy love story, and it's super sweet. It's just that the setting is too restrictive for readers. The wife-beating at the beginning eliminated many female readers. Then in the early stage, the heroine was too holy, which eliminated many male readers. Nowadays, everything is fast-paced. If you feel uncomfortable, you will leave a bad review and run away. It is probably because of this that the score is very low. In fact, if you like reading sweet stories with a single heroine, you can read this one. Both the male and female protagonists have grown up, and the two problems of the male protagonist beating his wife and the female protagonist being a saint have improved in the future. They say they are beating, but in fact they are sweet. And as a fantasy background, the entire background setting, plot rhythm, and combat are pretty good. I think there are a few problems. One is that the male and female protagonists develop too quickly. They are so sweet early on, and since it is a single female protagonist, I don't have such expectations for the subsequent development. Furthermore, the male protagonist is too strong, his system capabilities are too strong, and he is too invincible. As a result, after reading more than 100 chapters, he lost interest. Also, is this novel positioned as a male or female novel? Although the protagonist is a male, there is still a feeling that the male protagonist is a domineering demon and carelessly dotes on the female virgin fairy, which is a bit weird. Anyway, if you like fantasy backgrounds and sweet love stories with a single heroine, you can check it out.

How to use words to describe the feelings of the male and female protagonists? You can use Yang Naiwen's "The Sky Full of Stars" to express it: Hostess: When you're good, you're really nice to me, but when you're bad, you're really cruel. Anyone who has ever loved should know what it smells like. Just love as much as you can, don't make a fuss [I'm about to cry] Male Protagonist: The sky is full of stars, but they can't be as full as the moon. In my heart, there is a little bit of stubbornness for love and persistence in loving you. The sky is full of stars, but I still love the full moon the most. I am poisoned by you, and you are evil to me. There is no cure for me. I give everything for love [angry] If you don't understand the emotions of the male and female protagonists, you can listen to this song. I think it's quite appropriate [I learned it]

It's okay, a little bit heavy-handed, although there is a gap between it and the real erotic novel.

This is a pretty good novel for a certain group of people. Compared to other novels of the same type, the author's writing style is obviously better and there is no nonsense. In my opinion, it is not harmful. I have to say that the heroine is a bit of a virgin, but the character is used to serve the plot, so it doesn't matter. Finally, I have been waiting for the author for half a year. I hope the author insists on finishing this story so that we readers will not have any regrets.

It's really good to watch. The plot is not sluggish at all, refreshing and sensible. Although the heroine is a bit virginal, she is really not annoying and really likeable, and the male protagonist is really handsome. There are fights and very rich emotional lines. The update is too slow... And you, the author, are not as good as my word count, right? (But it's really good-looking)

It's great to watch. The plot is smooth and enjoyable. At first, I was a little nervous when I saw the female protagonist being beaten. But when I switched to the female protagonist I watched before, the male protagonist was almost beaten to death and fell in love with the female protagonist. I felt much better. The male protagonist's character won my heart. It was the first time I watched it from the male yandere perspective.

Some of the settings in the early stage are a bit copied, but later on it is considered a bit of my own creation and extension. It can be seen that there is still a lot of thought put into it. I will give it a 4 and keep writing.

This rating is really low, 8.8 Points are definitely there. If there are multiple female protagonists, it can be higher than 9 points. Each chapter is relatively concise, but there is no ink. Say what you want. I hate the kind of novels that are forced to grind and grind, and the whole process is very satisfying. It is a cool article.