[City + Super Power + Invincibility + Time Travel + Single Female Protagonist + Love]
Su Ye traveled to the Xuanyuan world when he was 17 years old. With his system and extremely strong talent, he spent ten years becoming the strongest person in the world. But after becoming invincible, he became bored.
Everyone in the world knows how powerful he is, which makes Su Ye feel too bored.
Fed up with being looked up to by everyone, he decided to break the plane and live again in another world.
In this way, Su Ye took his cultivation and traveled to another spiritual energy recovery world called Blue Star.
In this world, all creatures have the opportunity to awaken, and wild awakened animals continue to impact human territory.
Then Su Ye came.
Everyone: Why doesn't this guy's superpower look like a superpower at all? Are you really not a cultivator?
Reader comments
[Smile] It doesn't look very good, meow~. ≽^•⩊•^≼
First of all, the title of the book attracted me, but the specific content offset this interest in reading. Secondly, there are many roles for the single female lead, but this did not sustain my interest in reading. After reading 7 pictures, I didn't know what it was about, and I lost interest in reading.
In addition, according to my experience, in general invincible stories, if you don't fight passionately, you have to be funny, there are no jokes, there are no laughs, and there is no goal of slowly improving your cultivation (such as a three-year appointment) [face covering] I personally recommend using more jokes and creating more laughs.
The division of labor in the main plot should be clear, and it should not be too ordinary and focus more on cultivating the female protagonist. Anyway, the male protagonist is at the peak of his strength. You can focus on the development route of the heroine
Hmm... Although it's a bit bland, it's okay. It's just that the male and female protagonists have developed a little too fast [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Hey, come here after hearing the news~
The story has ups and downs, whetting the readers' appetite. The characters' IQs are online, and the plot logic is rigorous. It's worth a read👍🏻
[Smile] It doesn't look very good, meow~. ≽^•⩊•^≼ First of all, the title of the book attracted me, but the specific content offset this interest in reading. Secondly, there are many roles for the single female lead, but this did not sustain my interest in reading. After reading 7 pictures, I didn't know what it was about, and I lost interest in reading. In addition, according to my experience, in general invincible stories, if you don't fight passionately, you have to be funny, there are no jokes, there are no laughs, and there is no goal of slowly improving your cultivation (such as a three-year appointment) [face covering] I personally recommend using more jokes and creating more laughs.
The division of labor in the main plot should be clear, and it should not be too ordinary and focus more on cultivating the female protagonist. Anyway, the male protagonist is at the peak of his strength. You can focus on the development route of the heroine
Hmm... Although it's a bit bland, it's okay. It's just that the male and female protagonists have developed a little too fast [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Hey, come here after hearing the news~
The story has ups and downs, whetting the readers' appetite. The characters' IQs are online, and the plot logic is rigorous. It's worth a read👍🏻