Wuthering Waves: I Became a Holographic Carti, but the Dark Tide Version

Overall, it's pretty good. I don't know if it's good or not. After all, I've never written a book or been an author, so I can't give you any good suggestions. But as a reader, I can still say a few points, such as typos. Typos are common mistakes made by every author. Just be more rigorous and correct them slowly. Then there are too many small expressions, which don't have much impact, but reading too much will cause a bit of visual fatigue. The most important thing is that it's not enough! So author, please update it quickly 😢 This novel is really well written, please give it a little more 😢 (These are all personal opinions, no malice, only good intentions)

It can be seen that the writing style is a bit green, but what I want to express is well revealed in the words, and you can feel the author's full cooking ability. Of course, we will continue to think of some ideas or make jokes here and there in the future.

Hey, support yourself, is there nothing wrong with you? (๑> <๑)

Change Bai, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and women's bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. She traveled through Mingchao and became Frudelis, and then changed the plot magically. The desire to save is difficult to calm down. The setting of Ten Thousand Queens, Lily's harem story, the emotional line is well written, and the Shura field is also very loving. Hahaha, it's worth watching.

I would like to give a good review first and make some suggestions. The author can consider it himself. The previous writing is very good. I mainly came here for the protagonist, but starting from Chapter 10, the protagonist's sense of existence is too low. I know that the author wants to lay out the setting, foreshadowing, and explain the background for readers who have never played Ming Chao. However, after understanding the setting, it seems that the hydrological component is too large, and it is still continuous for such a long length. Fan fiction is different from original work. You can make original work Write more non-protagonist perspectives, but readers know many things about the fanfiction. If you write more things that readers already know, readers will have a stronger feeling of the word count, and many people will choose to enter the book-keeping stage. This is very detrimental to new books. I personally think that the best solution is to intersperse more scenes of the protagonist, at least not without seeing the protagonist for several consecutive chapters. Even if it is just daily life, giving readers some freshness in each chapter is the best way to maintain the reading volume of the fanfic. Finally, I selfishly hope that the Drifter is a woman and the main protagonist is a woman. If the Drifter is a man, it shouldn't be given too many scenes, otherwise it will always feel weird. If it doesn't work, you can also blur the gender.

Alas, I feel like he is that kind of righteous and idealistic protagonist again. I feel disgusted every time I see this. Although the protagonist is indeed powerful enough, I still feel disgusted, and I don't know why. It's a personal reason. It's not that the author is bad. But the author is undoubtedly fat in his description. Anyway, I feel like some fan fictions are like this, it's just my personal reasons. But I still want to say that the book written by the author is undoubtedly rich. Dried plums! But I haven't seen it until now, and now it's a bit late. A little embarrassing. Seriously speaking, the fighting is well written, and the author doesn't look like a novice. After all, novices generally find fighting more difficult. But I still want to say one more thing: the author's book is undoubtedly rich. Dried plums! Well, I seem a little excited. I'll look into it later and hope there will be a book group.

The writing is very good. The writing style can be said to not read the plot when playing the game. It can also be used as a way to make up for the regrets in the plot (and the author should write more words instead of replying to the readers) (hard squeeze on the author)

Very well written, keep up the hard work~ I'm looking forward to it

The book is a good book, and there are no major problems. As for the plot, I haven't played Mingchao that much. Regarding the description of appearance, I feel that it could be streamlined. After all, after reading too much, it feels like the number of words is too low. You can also ignore some minor flaws. After all, this kind of subject matter is still a bit rare (hundred/multi-female)

Yes, I'm here to give you a rating increase. Although the early stage of the plot is a bit slow, it's better to play it steadily, otherwise you will have to fill a lot of holes 🤦 One chapter a day is not enough, so I suggest you read one chapter at 8:00 in the morning and one chapter at 8:00 in the evening 😏 @, and then don't always fail to reply to fan group messages!