[Plot-Driven] [Decisive and Merciless] [Multiple Heroines] [Master of Face-Slapping]
“Tap! Tap! Tap!”
In a damp, shadowy dungeon, Ji Wuming, who had just transmigrated, listened to the light footsteps approaching. He glanced at the System panel loading before him and closed his eyes in bliss.
‘Oh, those sweet, sweet footsteps! Is my life as a wish-fulfillment novel’s protagonist finally about to begin?’
Little did he know, it was Death knocking at the door.
“Brother Kaiyang!”
The girl smiled like a flower.
“Now be a good boy and die!”
The girl looked like a demon.
At the moment death came for him, he suddenly realized.
“This isn’t how the script is supposed to go!”
“Where’s the System?!”
“Somebody save me!!!”
[Congratulations, you have awakened this System.]
[Your many beloved confidantes are rushing over as fast as they can...]
[This System will help you become the world’s greatest Demon Lord!]
Hearing that, Ji Wuming, who had just died once, instantly let go of all his resentment.
“Demon Lord?”
“Beloved confidantes?”
“If that’s what we’re talking about, I’m wide awake now!”
Many years later,
as he looked down upon all living beings in the Three Realms, Ji recalled those days and couldn’t help but sigh.
“Were you just messing with me the whole time?”
As a reader who has written novels, let me comment: 1. The writing is very descriptive, and I feel that my vocabulary is much richer than mine. 2. The logic of the plot is not that of a short novel. The plot is interspersed with each other, a bit like a starting point novel. It seems to have an outline and a middle outline. I don't know if there are detailed outlines, but it is definitely not the kind of writing that comes to mind. 3. In terms of plot, the setting and the character of the protagonist make the story interesting and relaxing! Furthermore, writing about conflicts or problems is not just about fighting, it requires brains, and I can't think of solutions to some problems myself. This kind of writing using your brain is more difficult to write than writing the layout and calculation, because writing the layout is dead and you just need to keep doing it, but this kind of writing is not possible. 4. Characterization, because the writing style is not serious and serious, so the characters cannot be based on realistic behavioral logic! Correspondingly, the memory points of the characters are much weaker, and naturally they cannot compare with high-scoring articles. But my personal feeling is that humor is more difficult to write than serious text. 5. Regarding the plot, the author is very good at setting the hook and it is very attractive. In general, in my opinion, this kind of article seems to be refreshing, thoughtful and hopeful, and it can definitely be rated 5 stars in Tomato!
The story is not cliché, and the more you read, the more you read it. It is interesting, interesting, and decent. There are too many confidantes, and I don't know who is the heroine [thoughts]