Ultimate: Muggle? I Directly Copy the God-Level Talent

Very good, very novel idea. Perfect provides a solution for ordinary people to have no superpowers after traveling through the world of Ultimate Class One. Although it may not be useful in the real world, at least it is a way [laughing]

It's too little. If you don't like it, one star will be deducted. When will it be updated to more than 300,000 words? Okay~_~ It's better to watch less. Just now I watched the protagonist change his destiny and become a saint and demon. It was so exciting, and then he was accepted as a disciple by Freelander. I thought that the next step was to cultivate his strength and fight against the devil. But Mama Gu was bullied by a few vulgar villains with a maximum combat power of 4500. Although the protagonist took action, those vulgar villains barely even left a wound on their body. It was disgusting, extremely disgusting. I feel that I am extremely stupid. I would have read it before commenting if I had known it. I also said a few words for you about the low scores, but you really deserve the low scores.

In fact, after reading the latest one, I feel that this game is the enhanced version of the enhanced version of Freelander. After all, God and Demon are one in the ultimate world, and there is only Freelander. I hope there will be no second personality.

In fact, copying Tian Xin is not bad, at least from the bright side, the potential is explosive. If you can fully unleash all your talents, it is also possible to ride the Demon King [smile][smile][smile][smile] Or copy Jin Baosan, who has been a junior high school student for twenty years [smile][smile][smile][smile]

The writing is quite good. The only thing that is wrong is the time and space I went to. If you think it is wrong in other places, then you did not read it carefully. The plot is reasonable and the combat power has not collapsed yet. The author's early writing seemed to be about to collapse, but the scene was so grand that it was reasonably suppressed, and I feel that even the author of Ultimate 6 Combat Power can reasonably increase the combat power.

After seeing the latest chapter, I feel that it is a well-written ultimate fanfic. The disadvantage is that the protagonist's character is so good that you can guess the next chapter. It is not good for the later plot and characters to appear too early. The middle and late stages of Ultimate and the early stage are actually quite separated [facepalm]. This makes it easy to write and jump out of the scene, including the author himself adding some personal settings, which some original fans may not like due to plot reasons (such as what Aunt Gu is doing at this time), but otherwise it is good.

The author writes very well, and the plot seems very comfortable. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's pretty good. The protagonist is lonely and silently enduring. But the author is a bit sloppy. Please simplify it a bit or add more.

I think this book is good, but there are many good people out there blaming the aunt and the protagonist for their problems. 1. If the aunt was a bad person, she would have kicked the protagonist out of the house long ago. Picture what? The family is not short of money and has to spare a room for him to live in. The protagonist gets a share of all the food he buys and cooks, but he just doesn't eat it. 2. The protagonist didn't show any merits and only suffered from anger (the protagonist also knew that he was useless), so the protagonist did not blame his aunt later. 3. My aunt said that newlyweds will have a child to take care of immediately. I want to point out that many people are not willing to take care of a child directly after newlyweds, and they must be mentally and physically prepared. But at the request of her husband, she still took care of the protagonist. 4. The protagonist ran away from home and his aunt did not care. I won't care until he gets stronger. The parents have raised the child for so many years, but the result is that the child can't do anything. He only gets angry, does housework, and is not very disadvantaged when he goes outside. What can he do? He is already a thinking little adult, and he ran away from home again. Come back to them when he encounters difficulties outside. What is the situation now? Someone wants to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist will really die. He no longer cares about the face of his elders, so he directly asks his family to save the protagonist. 5. Auntie's attitude when Wang Dadong and others came to the door. Isn't this normal? A child that I take care of is suddenly visited by someone on the Ko list. My first thought must be that something happened to the child and why they (gangsters) came to my door. Later I found out that they recognized the protagonist as their brother. I must have been stupid. Don't you know what's going on with your child? [Face covering] I can only say that the protagonist's experience is too magical. 6. There is nothing more I can say. I can only say that in the eyes of those who blame themselves. The person who takes care of you must be kind, don't beat or scold him, and only if he cares about you all day long can he be considered a family member. If not, then he is just a devil [vomit]

The plot is okay, and the protagonist's oppression is not too serious. I just feel that things are too simple. If you don't want to go too far, don't write too much about the villain's disgusting behavior. If you write too much, the protagonist will have to use methods that will prevent future troubles. TV dramas and online novels have different performance standards.

Objectively speaking, this book is pretty good. It can be regarded as a relatively good meal replacement article for ultimate fans. The combat power is not broken, and the protagonist's demonic body can be regarded as a point that promotes the development of the plot. I didn't think there was anything wrong with the relationship between Hua Fulong and Hua Fulong in the future. When I watched it, it reminded me a little bit of the confusion of Dongting's Love when I watched Finale 2, but the difference is... Compared to the forced separation in Final 2, Dadong didn't have time to say that sentence until he traveled back through time... This novel is a bit better, at least there is no scene where the protagonist is afraid of letting Hua Fulong down because of his demonic body, so he chooses to leave alone and bear the scenes alone. I think that's it, but when I posted this review, the author hasn't updated it for two days. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not give up. I hope this book will not explode to death [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

I thought it was system flow The first 10 or so pictures are okay, but it starts to get rough around chapter 15.

When did the author write that the pig's trotters returned to the home that insulted him, I want to see the blood flow like a river! ! !

I don't know what to say. This article is very smooth to read, and what surprises me the most is that he has his own ideas, from an ordinary person to using the plot to become a high-level psychic. The most amazing thing is that many other ultimate novels are divorced from the plot, and I don't know how to write, or just write the protagonist like a movie viewer, without any change at all. But this one is different, it has gone its own way, it's super good-looking, and if you like Ultimate, you really want to read it.

Not bad, not bad. It's rare to see Ultimate Class 1 fanfics. I didn't expect to find a well-written one. It's so good that I can't get enough of it. I recommend the author to add more. Oh, by the way, I would like to give the author some small suggestions. I hope that the emotional line will not be as messy as the original work, and make up for the regrets of book friends, such as Wang Dadong and Lei Ting, King Arthur and the Five Bears. I hope they will not be 🐂 anymore in the author's fan fiction [face covering] Super style is ringing in your ears, let's increase the combat power index together and see who is the No.1 On the KO list [cool]

Write about throwing Wang Dadong, Wang Arthur, Ding Xiaoyu, and Rex into the world of One Piece. Kaido teaches Wang Dadong how to match the Phantom Beast Seed Fruit, Shanks teaches King Arthur how to match the Phantom Beast Seed Fruit, Whitebeard teaches Ding Xiaoyu how to be superhuman, and Golden Lion teaches Rex how to voice Thunder. You can write back and forth between the two worlds, or you can return to your own world after defeating Im. How about this idea?

I'll give it a try for half a year and then I'll see. I still like those with demonic powers. As long as they find the right method, even real Muggles can practice demonized powers. It's just like cultivating immortals. If the right path doesn't work, you'll have to practice evil. As long as you're evil enough, you can practice.

This subject matter is very novel and worth a look!

Why is it that the saint and the devil always get the highest level of magic? The previous ones are okay, but the return to the golden time and space is obviously lagging, the personality is awkward, and the devilish nature is not obvious. Even if you kill a few, I don't think it's enough.

Not bad, it's pretty good-looking and has the ultimate flavor

It would be better to directly copy Tian Xin. With her personality, she should be able to help. Otherwise, based on the information about her brother, it will definitely be possible. Moreover, it is conceivable that if the talent of innate combat power of one million is strengthened... The most important thing is that there is no need to worry about becoming a demon. Maybe the physique is better than the innate holy body... I have come up with this method and that method now.

Very good looking very good

I think Crazy Dragon's talent is pretty good, and at least it has a reference to the Star-Swallowing Sky training system, unlike the Ultimate series where even the entire system is incomplete.

Yes, if you continue to maintain it, you can speed up the evolution of the holy body appropriately. Otherwise, you will always feel like you are going to die.

The idea is clear, ordinary people only have this method, come on

In fact, it should be three and a half stars. It's quite good so far, but it's a bit embarrassing for people watching emotional dramas.

This is the ultimate book and it's quite good.

So far, the plot is really good, and the book is worth reading.

I've read about ten or twenty chapters, and I think it's okay, but the update is too slow. I plan to keep it up, and the author must not stop updating, otherwise I'll congratulate you.

The plot is good and the plot setting is okay, mainly it's quite final.