[Ship Rule 1: You must return to the cabin before sunset, and you are not allowed to stay on the deck until dark.
[Ship Rule 2: If you hear a child crying in the cabin, do not respond, let alone look for the source of the sound.
[Article 3 of Ship Rules: Every day at three o'clock in the morning, there will be a food delivery boy knocking on the door. You can only receive food, you are not allowed to talk to the food delivery person, and you must finish your meal before 3:10.
[Ship Rules Article 4: There are no red doors on the ship. If you see a red door, stay away immediately and do not touch it.
[Ship Rule 5: Never trust yourself in the mirror. I heard that there is an ancient ship. Opening the hidden captain's notes can bring people back to death, or make people enjoy glory and wealth. Is it true or is it a conspiracy? Infinite loop, horror cruise ship effect, a ship stuck in the ocean, it is an ancient ship, but the lights are bright on it, why are there countless identical watches in the basement, but the rising sun has never come in my memory, and why is there no one in the huge ship, as if it was just built, and the cockpit is empty? So who is controlling the ship? Who is the person behind the banyan tree? Who gave the watch behind the door? Who is the strange figure? Why would my son say that the man outside looks a lot like his father? Only by breaking the cycle can he get out of this place... Shh, be silent...
Reader comments
The story is quite good, and it feels similar to a tomb robbery. The main reason is that the number of words is too dense at this stage. The author can divide the intervals into several paragraphs, which will make it more comfortable to read! ! ! ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡Then the author will update quickly
Remember to divide it into sections, otherwise it will be too tiring to watch. Then Chapter 6 can be used as the first chapter, which will be very attractive, and then on the ship, you can slowly explain why Chaoyang and the others are on the ship. You can chat with the people on the ship to alleviate the fear, and reveal why Chaoyang, Fatty, and Zhou Shen appeared on the ship. This will be more attractive, and the plot is also step-by-step. After all, the three golden chapters need to be grasped well to hook the readers. (Personal suggestion)
It's quite good-looking. It's updated early and has strong logic. However, the good-looking points are a little late. It's probably a little too late for you to start the climax in Chapter 6. It would be better if the foreshadowing in the front can attract people's eyes. Otherwise, others won't be able to see anything when they click in, and they won't be able to retain people.
The story is quite good, and it feels similar to a tomb robbery. The main reason is that the number of words is too dense at this stage. The author can divide the intervals into several paragraphs, which will make it more comfortable to read! ! ! ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡Then the author will update quickly
Remember to divide it into sections, otherwise it will be too tiring to watch. Then Chapter 6 can be used as the first chapter, which will be very attractive, and then on the ship, you can slowly explain why Chaoyang and the others are on the ship. You can chat with the people on the ship to alleviate the fear, and reveal why Chaoyang, Fatty, and Zhou Shen appeared on the ship. This will be more attractive, and the plot is also step-by-step. After all, the three golden chapters need to be grasped well to hook the readers. (Personal suggestion)
It's quite good-looking. It's updated early and has strong logic. However, the good-looking points are a little late. It's probably a little too late for you to start the climax in Chapter 6. It would be better if the foreshadowing in the front can attract people's eyes. Otherwise, others won't be able to see anything when they click in, and they won't be able to retain people.