"Loli + self-love + half-body yin and yang swords"
Good news: I traveled through time and became a top-notch lolita with white hair, pink eyes, and a height of 1.4 Meters!
Bad news: You start in a trafficker's den.
Facing a group of drooling scavengers, I tilted my head cutely.
She's so cute, she took action.
The sword flashed, blood spattered three feet, and dozens of corpses instantly lay flat, dying peacefully.
Facing the bloody trophies, I squatted down with mysophobia.
She was so cute, she touched the body.
His movements are skillful and he uses his mental power to search accurately without staining even a drop of blood. He is so professional that he is outrageous.
Facing my smooth little feet, I poked them curiously.
She's so cute, she's starting to fuck herself.
(Hey, my legs, hey, so smooth and tender...)
Secret observer: "??? What is the background of this little girl who looks like an angel?!"
Yin Jian: "A monster wearing loli skin."
Yang Jian: "It's the cutest monster in the world!"
Reader comments
There are a lot of repetitive parts, but the rhythm is well grasped. It is a semi-invincible text rather than an invincible text, and the daily content is relatively large.
The issues I see so far:
1. In the section where Iron Fist guessed, two identical plots were repeated.
2. At least a month has passed since the protagonist bought snacks from the intelligence dealer to when he sold the iron equipment. Later, it was said that the intelligence dealer had only bought snacks a few days ago, and then immediately received a commission to sell iron equipment.
3. The protagonist asked the two swords to guard the house, but then the two swords talked to the protagonist again at the auction.
4. When the protagonist killed the man, both swords worked hard, but after returning, he said that they had been watching the house and asked the protagonist if everything was okay?
Oh, yes, let me add:
1. The level differentiation is not clear. There are three names for the same level.
2. The most basic world view is not explained. As mentioned before, the world where the protagonist is located is not the same as the earth. However, later it is said that the earth is the old era of this world.
3. Regarding the clip where Bai Jian said that the subject was playing with himself again, and then Black Jian explained it over and over again. If this paragraph has been repeated before, it can be considered to be funny, then in the subsequent plot, Bai Jian said "Oh, that's it, then don't bother her", which means that they actually only said it once, and the reason why it was repeated so many times was simply a repetition of the plot.
…(To be added)
It's ok so far, but there are a lot of repetitive parts
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There are a lot of repetitive parts, but the rhythm is well grasped. It is a semi-invincible text rather than an invincible text, and the daily content is relatively large.
The issues I see so far: 1. In the section where Iron Fist guessed, two identical plots were repeated. 2. At least a month has passed since the protagonist bought snacks from the intelligence dealer to when he sold the iron equipment. Later, it was said that the intelligence dealer had only bought snacks a few days ago, and then immediately received a commission to sell iron equipment. 3. The protagonist asked the two swords to guard the house, but then the two swords talked to the protagonist again at the auction. 4. When the protagonist killed the man, both swords worked hard, but after returning, he said that they had been watching the house and asked the protagonist if everything was okay? Oh, yes, let me add: 1. The level differentiation is not clear. There are three names for the same level. 2. The most basic world view is not explained. As mentioned before, the world where the protagonist is located is not the same as the earth. However, later it is said that the earth is the old era of this world. 3. Regarding the clip where Bai Jian said that the subject was playing with himself again, and then Black Jian explained it over and over again. If this paragraph has been repeated before, it can be considered to be funny, then in the subsequent plot, Bai Jian said "Oh, that's it, then don't bother her", which means that they actually only said it once, and the reason why it was repeated so many times was simply a repetition of the plot. …(To be added)
It's ok so far, but there are a lot of repetitive parts
Good-looking, love to watch [send heart][send heart][send heart] Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Looks good, cheers to the author [blowing kiss]