The Iron Age: Starting with a Mobile Base

I can still see it now. It is a fast-paced and fast-paced article. It is a qualified and refreshing article. The five stars are not stingy. Suggestion: Regarding the heroine, people who watch the apocalypse nowadays generally don't like to have a heroine, but I think Noah can be developed. You know, anyway, it is not necessary to say that she is the heroine, a partner or something like that. Because now, if it is just the male protagonist who chops and chops and upgrades, reading too much will actually make readers tired (personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't criticize me, then you are right [salute])

Finally, I see a protagonist who can rely on technology to snowball. There is no need to consider the intrigues among survivors. Using the power of technology to develop in the end of the world is no more accurate, efficient, and usable than the weak body. I just hope that the protagonist will stop worrying about those broken melee weapons all day long.

Give yourself a good review and encourage me [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I started reading the novel from the beginning, and after reading it again, I found that some of the descriptions were awkward. I deleted some unnecessary descriptions and embarrassing lines, changed some, and re-edited the places that didn't go smoothly.

This book is not bad, it is a rare breath of fresh air in apocalyptic literature. The rhythm is more precise than the beat of a drum. It does not drag on when it should be fast, and it is not lazy where it should be done. It is as refreshing as a skewered candied haws, with just the right amount of sweet and sour flavor, and each bite does not irritate your teeth. The most rare thing is that it avoids the ancestral poisonous points of those apocalyptic novels: the protagonist is not blinded by the Virgin at the beginning, and the setting of the lone wolf protagonist hits the point. It saves a lot of troublesome scenes of "teammates holding back" and "the Virgin's heart is overflowing", and does not write down the hoarding of goods into a lengthy accounting book. There is no mercy when it is time to kill monsters, no ambiguity when it is time to upgrade, and even the supporting characters have a bit of normal human logic, unlike some novels where they are all tool men used to set off the protagonist. The author grasps the core of "survival in the apocalypse" very firmly, and is not led astray by heresy. He knows what readers want to read and what bothers them. This kind of writing that doesn't show off skills or fool around, among a bunch of apocalyptic articles that rely on poisonous points to attract attention, is like drinking ice soda in summer - refreshing, thirst-quenching, and exciting.

It is recommended to add more descriptions of the base vehicle. It looks good and is in line with the appetite. Good luck to the author. The more detailed the description of the base vehicle, the various equipment, and the living area facilities, the better. I prefer to read descriptions of farming in this aspect [laughs]

It's very interesting, but the author doesn't work hard enough and doesn't want to make progress at all [angry][angry][angry] Author, did you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you? Standing at thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle No confusion at forty: Only by updating forty chapters every day can we continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are the destiny, and the entire website praises you so much Sixty and fluent: When you can update 60 chapters a day, everyone including readers will hear what you say will be fluent. When you are seventy, do what you want without going beyond the rules: If you can read 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want [laughter][laughter][laughter]

It is a high-quality work of apocalyptic literature. The protagonist kills decisively and not indiscriminately. The panel loads a lot. I hope to recruit some people after the development is stable. I can follow the elite genre and build a large platform similar to the Hunter Guild. In addition, reproduction is the core of survival [I understand]

Very good. According to the current chapter 77, many controversial points have been modified. The current mode is a lone wolf plus two mechanical simulation human deputies, a drone, and a mechanical dog. All the intersecting plots are very suitable, with clear goals and no unnecessary explanations. The rescuer brother just goes with the flow, without any coercion in the plot, and meets by chance. That's all. The current first transaction and investment in the future eight-star boss are of course just investments.

It is a very interesting base car apocalypse novel. It has a rigorous content structure and reasonable setting. It has a stable development in the early stage and does not exceed the outline. There are no poisonous points. According to the current trend, it should be a series without a heroine. Those who like it can feel free to take it.

It looks good, with detailed details, rigorous data, and smooth logic. The protagonist is not a virgin but still has conscience, is wise but is courageous, is supreme in force but still has justice, is measured in doing things, and knows how to advance or retreat when in danger.