Cultivation to Immortality: the Journey of Cultivating Immortality Starting from a Young Lolita

Generally speaking, the content is very bland (no feeling), and the writing style needs to be polished. At present, it seems that it is like a painting, where reality and reality are inseparable, stuck in the middle and unable to move up or down. It's a feeling of being able to understand what the author wrote but not being able to relate to it when expressing it. (It will be very tiring after reading for a long time. It is recommended to organize the outline again. Now it is a bit broad and simple, and some contents can be refined) 5⭐Encourage new authors