Sex Change? but What Is an Extremely Evil City?

Good, good, good, good, good, good. Thank you to the author. After reading the text, I have lost entropy, demon body, origin stone disease, Pamish infection, rainstorm syndrome, vocal cord infection, collapse disease, abstraction, money infection, radiation infection, cyberpsychosis, fear gas inhalation, homesickness, urban disease, distortion, slow shock, zombie transformation, witch transformation, madness, Honkai disease, super Mortal loss of control, hypothermia, Karabacteria, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, cycle of grief, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life equation corrosion, and warp corruption. It's really beautiful. Can you update it quickly? [Crying] ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What does it mean? Ended suddenly? !

So far it looks pretty good, there are no major problems. The tags are mainly game aliens, military (single-soldier squad) plus transformation. The background setting is like a bit of GTA and Hitman. It's a bit like the protagonist going back in time to influence the past. However, the main line is still a bit unclear, and the article about the fourth natural disaster in the game also takes up a lot of space. Crime City is also a good idea. Of course, it depends on how the author will play it in the future. The article is rich in details of tactical actions, and also contains a lot of tactical knowledge, and although it makes trouble It's a joke about the 24-hour clock in the past o'clock direction, but the author later responded that he would let AI help review the manuscript, and he also gained a preliminary understanding of some tactical knowledge during the reading process. As for the transformation, it currently looks more like a single change, and there is no plot of violent emotional fluctuations due to the transformation. It can only be regarded as an embellishment, focusing on other content. However, the emotional issues of this kind of writing are indeed a bit troublesome. Generally speaking, you need to improve your skills or make choices. The plot has advanced a lot during this period, and the long third copy has finally ended (83~153). I will write a continuation review. The first is the dungeon, from 12-20-70. The time of the third dungeon really feels a bit long, and if the dungeon is just a pure special operations operation, it may not be that interesting. If possible, it is better to control the length of the dungeon. And I feel that the plot of this book is actually slow, or the information density is low, especially the description of combat details takes up a lot of space, and because it is a small-scale combat (there are street fighting plots), if you lack spatial familiarity like FPS experience, you may not be able to understand the plot very well. Of course, there is also a large part of the game with an alien theme, which is mainly about interaction with players. I personally think this part will be more interesting and comfortable to watch. Of course, since it involves players, the tension is lower, but the background is indeed quite similar to GTA. By the way, the author may borrow fans' names to help name it, and there are also fan suggestions and settings. When it comes to transformation... It's like changing into a single, a little bit more like Bai. The plot of Bai is mainly about the eldest daughter of the Public Security Bureau, but to be honest, the writing is relatively ordinary, and it feels a bit deja vu.

Good to read Good to watch Good to watch Good to watch Good to watch Good to watch Good to watch This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wu α for Dong Zhuo, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Other than that, I'm better than I particularly appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the character description is very good.

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, there are very few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and zero descriptions of female abortion. A very excellent fourth natural disaster-type transformation novel, with group portrait writing. The heroine can modify the plot of the past timeline and play different female characters to gain abilities. The multiple vest routines are very interesting, especially the description of the battle scenes is in place. The description of the Mukang battle is very comfortable, and it combines the Western concepts. Vice City is written very carefully, and it is worthy of being a happy mlj. Mukura Hits Every Day ~ The later plot is worth looking forward to. Is the game coming to reality or the fusion of two worlds? As a setting of a world without demons, the popularity of the heroine can form a very large organization, and the future is promising! Sit back and wait for updates.

It looks very good so far. The first person on the track. The setting of the tactical humanoid girl is quite cute.

The heroic appearance of the protagonist with plum blossom eyes and black hair really impressed me. The protagonist's behavior of actively gaining presence is also great (some NPC stories always wait for players to interact, which feels too boring). Maybe there may be some behind-the-scenes elements. In terms of the introduction and the description of the chapters so far, the tactics are also very well written and make it feel.

It looks great. After watching it for so long, I actually don't have much of a problem. The only small problem is that the bar uses P226 with a silencer. Even if there is a silencer, the sound will not drop many decibels. However, this is basically the case in the game, so it is not a bad point.

A top-notch transformation hard-core military novel. The protagonist is really handsome. All kinds of CQB are really fun to read. Why did I find out when this book is 500,000 words long? The author begs you to hate the city for the rest of your life. Oh Nei, if there is no Bai Ling, Watasi. Finally, I hope all book friends will recommend some works of the same type. The child has run out of food [crying] [crying] [crying]

It looks very good [Blowing Kiss], and the description of military themes is very exciting. However, the development of daily themes is a bit behind, but it is not a big problem and it is still worth watching. Regarding some military details, readers pointed out the errors and the author made corrections, which was very efficient. The most important thing is that the author is very active and easy to talk to. Touch [shy]

The author of this book has very solid military literacy, the description of the wall battle is very touching, the setting is perfect, and the overall plot design is also perfect. But, but, but... Why did you end it all of a sudden? ! ! ! ! ! ? [Cry][cry][cry] If you can't figure out the plot, you can ask the readers for their opinions. If it doesn't work, you can just ask the AI and then synthesize it yourself and then write it [crying][crying][crying][crying] What does ending mean [crying] My Ling! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

So far, I don't see any bad points. I read the book review and all the bad points that I had in the past have been revised. It's very good. The overall story line is also pretty good. I just want to see armed JK [laughing] (reminds me of the days when I wore JK to fight zombies in Rosewood). There is no tweaking after the transformation, and there is almost no psychological process, so if you want to see the gradual decline of the female after the transformation, you can consider giving up. However, if this theme is partly military fans and partly transformation literature lovers, it is recommended to watch Fu to see if it suits your taste. This book gives me the impression that it has the flavor of some of the novels I have read before, such as High-Risk Jobs, Starting from Swat, etc. It may be inferior in some aspects, but it is unique among the transformation novels. There is no lengthy introduction to tactical actions (the origins, actions, and advantages can all be found online), which is great but the word count is not worth it. The summary is that the number of words is still not enough to read, but the prospects are good. Although there are some minor flaws, the author points out that they can be improved. If there are any mistakes, just point them out and correct them.

There are traces of AI, but the subject matter and description are very good. I also watched the real AI.

Beautifully written. It should be given five stars, but the plot after the third dungeon was a bit exhausted at the end. There were many characters, frequent perspective switches, and the length of the story made my mind cluttered, so that when I read the new chapter later, all I could think about was why it wasn't over yet. Overall, it is highly recommended. I have also read the author's first two books, which are very interesting. Also, are there any novels similar to those that play with military firearms? The beautiful girl heroine is the best. I really liked the setting of the author's first novel, but it's a pity that there is no follow-up.

Really good, excellent product, keep it up. I hope there won't be that bit of blood between men and women, just something more passionate and exciting.

The subject matter is very novel, and the author's descriptions are also very good. If you can't accept too much content in the copy, you can directly watch the protagonist and the players talking. I think that's the best place to watch.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was about quick travel, but should this be considered an unlimited stream? It is much more beautiful than what is described in the introduction. If you want to run away after seeing the introduction, you can stay and read it. It is not a short story about robbery, but more like a real record of special forces missions. The author has solid military literacy knowledge and is thoughtful. It's not a mindless steel gun. It has a CQB link that I like to see. All in all, it's not bad and worth watching.

It's one of the best tactical articles of the same type, with less poison points. Although I really like HK416, and the protagonist is a bit superhuman (he can easily stop the bleeding after being shot in the torso), but the rest of it is pretty good.

It's so beautiful, and it opens up a new world. I feel like some of the stuff is very hardcore, and of course I like cool and logical writing!

Familiar author, familiar style, ah~Sbarasi (approval)

The settings are pretty good, but the latest copy is really too long! ! ! It is recommended to compress the copy a little bit. The first few are suitable. The main point is the interaction between the protagonist and the players [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I caught up with the latest progress in one go. The classic bulletproof board breaking ribs and the powerful impact of the bullet were a bit exaggerated at the beginning and looked a bit weird. It was pretty good except for the fact that it was a web article after all. It exceeded expectations. I personally can accept the change from single to hundreds, as long as I don't rely on changing to marry. It's really unacceptable. It looks like a bit of lily sticker is considered a seasoning, but there should be no clear emotional line after writing the change.

I don't understand it, but I'm very impressed. The bean-dipping process could be a little shorter. I'm tired of fighting all the time. Not only do I feel tired from watching it, but I'm also tired from writing it. There could be more daily posts from the protagonist or a show of holiness in front of the players. After the bean-dipping process, there still needs to be a moderately long period of upgrading, adding points, and installing x. It would be nice. 😋 But the added points now are actually quite effective. I feel like I'm not far away from being eaten alive. Meow

This is the first time I have read a novel of this type. It is very well written and has a lot of details and a strong sense of immersion. I feel that the rating is a bit low. To be honest, it may be because there are relatively few people who have read it and the ratings are not high. To be honest, there is nothing to pick. The only problem is that the update is too slow and it is not enough to read. I am a little curious to join later. Are there any women among the players of the game? The situation for women in this virtual background game is not very good. They are easily forced. Is there a button to force quit? I feel that some settings for the interaction between the virtual and real worlds are not perfect enough. The time difference is a problem although it is not reflected in the article.

It's a great novel. The plot is pretty good. The only small problem is that there are too many tactical details. Of course, this can't be considered a problem. After all, many people come to this kind of novels just to see the tactics. It's just a bit too much for people like me who are not very interested in military affairs.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, I like it so much, I stayed up late to finish it, I still have something to say, it's just a little bit short, woo woo woo, author brother, please, please give me more, I can do anything [crying]˶ˊᜊˋ˶

Not bad, not bad. It's the first time I've read this kind of subject matter. It's very attractive. After reading the latest chapter, I re-downloaded the exciting battlefield. Hahaha, please give me a boost from the author. I will keep following the updates [laughs]

It looks good. I like the character design of the protagonist. The battles are also rigorous. I like to watch it. In fact, there is not much water. Most of them are to explain some details and highlight the characters. Anyway, I like it. It is very real. Every battle has a feeling of being there. Anyway, keep going! ! ! (๑> <๑)

A hard-core firearms combat novel with excellent quality and full of details, worth reading. The only fly in the ointment is that as a book, you have 300 chapters, more than two hundred of which are battles. You don't want the main plot anymore. The original timeline of Chapter 300 has only been a few days. There are a lot of details in the battles, but it takes a little bit of nerve cells to read them, and most of them can be skipped. There is no impact at all if you don't read them. Save Liu: The book is a good book, but the storyline breaks the defense

It's a very novel subject matter. The author has quite a wealth of knowledge and excellent writing skills. The description of action combat is the most natural and vivid one I've read so far. The only drawback is that the daily plot description is slightly inferior to the combat plot (actually it's a bit nitpicky, it's already very good in Tomato), but as long as I can keep writing, I'm sure the future will be promising!

The plot is smooth, the writing is delicate, the characters are well depicted in all aspects, it's really nice to watch, meow.