Please Don't Provoke That Black Heart Lotus Again

I don't understand why the rating is so low. The writing and characters are all very clear. The female protagonist is very stable and wants to solve the mystery of the entire story line. The male protagonist makes people want to know more. The author will greatly improve it.

The body spots on Nuannuan's corpse have faded a lot (bushi). I like the heroine's courage to confront the original heroine. I also like the hands-on scenes. She dares to speak and fight.

It's really super good-looking. Every character is flesh-and-blood and well-shaped. Whether it's the heroine, the hero, the original heroine, or other characters, every character is very good, and the author's writing is very good. This novel is really good to read.

The plot always makes people want to keep reading, but there are too many characters in the novel, such as the heroine's father, the original heroine, the heroine's father Bai Yueguang, etc. It makes people anxious after reading it, and they feel frustrated and frustrated. So this is not a book with a heroine, and it is not a pure and refreshing novel. I don't want to read this book about lightning protection that always makes me angry. I am still interested in the plot, and I will probably continue to watch it.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's much better than other similar articles that add settings halfway, and it has a beginning and an end. The highlight of the plot is the female protagonist, who has a very good and smart personality, while the male protagonist is a bit of a sideshow in the middle and later stages (this is my personal feeling), and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very cute. It's a pity that there are some pitfalls that have not been filled in. Qing Meng Yuan said that Qing Wu will marry Meng Sheng when he comes back. Later, it is said that the male protagonist is Qing Wu. Who Meng Sheng is is not explained. Qing Meng Yuan's line does not match up with the line of Xianjun written by the main writer later. In addition, if you are a strong female protagonist, you should be mentally prepared. There are a lot of unexpected troubles in the heroine's stall. The first half is a breast disaster. The father is extremely partial to the original heroine. The original heroine almost killed the heroine twice and then punished her lightly.

It's tied. This book is one of the few among the immortal novels that attracted me. The characters written by the author are very real. There are no bugs that force the plot to fit the characters. [Sending my heart] It's just that the chapters are too few and I can't read them. I don't like to read serials [crying] I don't know if I've seen a lot of cliche plots, but the heroine's perspective is like that of a reader. The heroine will also look at the cliched plot from her own perspective. In fact, the author's writing is not cliche, and the heroine's own plot is not cliché either. [Send my heart] It's really interesting and worth watching [Send my heart] It would be better if it can be more exciting [laughs]

It's very beautiful, the plot is very attractive, the more you read, the more addictive you become. Please update [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] quickly. The character setting is also very attractive. It's not brainless or love-minded. It's not like the kind of novel where you fall in love with the heroine for no reason.

The whole article is enjoyable to read, but sometimes the transition is not very good. I thought I skipped something, but overall it is still enjoyable to read. It is so interestingly written and really enjoyable! The characters are well-developed and three-dimensional, and the ending is so rushed that I really want to cry. I heard that there was a book that was immediately continued by another 100,000 words when the readers said they didn't have enough, and they immediately made them rich. Do you know this?

This book is highly recommended. You must read it. The ups and downs of the plot have a sense of reasoning, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very smooth. The supporting characters are all full of characters. Highly recommended! [Adoration]

I really like this book. Everyone's characters are flesh-and-blood, there is no absolute villain, right and wrong are determined by one's stance, there are stories of the older generation entangled in love and hate, and there are also stories of lovers getting married. Mu Yuansi likes Wen Ruo, so after being given a drug by the fallen immortal, Mu Yuansi fell in love with Shen Yuanxi, but Wen Ruo still didn't want to believe that he didn't like her anymore. I like the emotional line between the two of them very much. Although it is be, I think this ending is the best. But the ending was too hasty, and it was over before I could recover. Especially the extras, I can't understand them anymore. I hope I can practice this kind of thing more.

Why don't many people watch it? I'll go and write it well. The characters are very three-dimensional, but the ending makes me reluctant to let go. It's really unfinished. The female protagonist is very conscious at first to save her life, but she actually likes it without knowing it. The male protagonist gradually falls into decline. Oh, Juejue. Xianpinxianpin

I have read the entire book, and I feel that there are some holes that have not been filled in. Overall, it is good. There are no particularly shocking descriptions, but I still don't understand a bit (including the plot). If Qingwu is Su Yan, isn't his wife Meng Sheng? ? It's a pity that the heroine's maternal grandfather was not described after he ascended to the throne. There is also the heroine's second senior sister.

I think this book deserves more than a 7.6 Rating, absolutely. I really think it is very interesting. The characters are full-bodied and the author is very logical. The whole book is not a brainless sweet story. The readers will work with the heroine to cut through the fog. Will continue to look forward to subsequent developments. I am a person who likes to skip chapters and abandon books, but I read this book from beginning to end, except for the last few chapters. The plot of the story is reversed again and again, and the process is interesting and fulfilling. You can feel the progression of the feelings of the male and female protagonists. I also like the female protagonist and male protagonist very much, especially the female protagonist. The image is very plump and vivid. From this, I guess the author must be a free and uninhibited person. When I watched it, I could feel the heroine's bravery and astuteness in loving, daring, and hating. She is not a purely haloed heroine, nor is she a weak woman, but more like a bolder ordinary person, a person whose edges have not been erased. It's great to read, I really like it, and I sincerely thank the author for creating them and creating such a book. This book shouldn't be considered a pure novel, the kind that is exciting and dreamy all the way. But the article also has some cool points, and is more realistic overall. Maybe that's why some people don't like it. I don't think it's about abusing the heroine, because I didn't feel depressed at all when I read the book. Unlike some books that require forbearance to take revenge or a stupid counterattack, the heroine can fight back on the spot when she is hurt. Maybe it's just because there are no golden fingers, so revenge doesn't seem so satisfying or satisfying. But you will be shocked by such a skinny heroine, and admire her perseverance, boldness to escape, and courage to resist. I feel a bit like Nezha's experience. However, I still like it, this is a good book. There are indeed some loopholes, such as the ending and extras being a bit rushed, and one or two foreshadowings not being reflected. But it's already very good, it doesn't delay the reading experience at all, great

I don't understand why the rating is so low. I think it's well written. After reading this kind of fairy tale for so many years, I don't want to read it. This one has more elements, but I still like its setting. Su Yan is a little pitiful person. Slowly, the heroine also influenced him with love. Of course, she also went through a lot of processes. In fact, I feel that I have always had a hard time with the second male lead. They were childhood sweethearts, but unfortunately they fell under the infatuation curse. I don't like this setting. Overall, this book is highly recommended!

The narrative rhythm of this book is like breathing, neither fast nor slow but firm step by step. Characters grow through experiences, and emotions settle in the blank spaces. Five stars is not a reward, but a confirmation - some stories deserve to be read in their entirety, I love them so much

So pretty! The plot has ups and downs. The characters are well drawn, especially the heroine, as if such a character really existed, which made me want to stop 🫣The setting of the male protagonist is really good, and it made me stay up late for two or three days to finish reading [crying][crying][crying] I hope Su Yan and Wen Ruo will be happy forever.

It's really good to watch, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and you can see the relationship between the male and female protagonists gradually deepening. The text also reflects human problems in contemporary society.

[Crying] [Crying] I finished reading it in two days. It's so good. Every character is three-dimensional and full. There is no absolute bad guy or bad guy. The writing ideas are also very clear. It's so good. [Crying] [Crying] Can the author give two more extra chapters? I haven't read enough. I really want to continue watching their happy life.

It's so good. I'm trying to keep up with it. When will Shen Yuanxi be offline? And that fairy king. It makes me so uncomfortable. I feel so bad for the male and female protagonists. Especially when our male protagonist was a child. [Crying] It made me cry. I look forward to seeing the male and female protagonists kissing each other. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wanted to save up a bit after watching it, but it turned out that it was finished and I still had more to say. Why did it finish so quickly? I still want to watch it [crying] It was so good.

I really like this pairing! But I still feel a little bit upset. Mu Yuansi is not the original Mu Yuansi, but Wen Ruo is not the same Wen Ruo as before. So Mu Yuansi, who was forced to sleep for more than ten years, could not even express his feelings to his real senior sister when he was dying. It makes me sad when I think about this.

It's very good. I'm a picky reader and I really like this book. I really think it's good. I just ask you not to stop updating it. Keep the style and writing style and keep updating. It would be great if you can see the finale [Adoration][Adoration]

It's very interesting, but the score is too low. In my opinion, this book should be above 9. The character's actions are logical and consistent with the character's design, with no flaws. The author's narrative ability and writing style are very strong, and the suspense foreshadowing makes people want to put it down. Each chapter is full of real content, and there is no drag on the word count. The settings of the supporting characters and villains are also very charming. They are not simply tools to promote the plot. They are not group portraits, but more like group portraits. It would be a shame to miss this book because of the low score.

This is the first time I saw Chai Husband at the crematorium. Fortunately, the male protagonist is easy to coax. "Ignorant men are easy to coax." It's really good-looking. I like Ayan. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very exciting. A person who doesn't understand love insists on seeing the light, so he will be obsessed with the person who brings him light [send heart][send heart][send heart]

This book is really good. I searched for it for several days. It is different from those big heroines in the past. She is really a genius and has the capital to be proud. It allows me to see the real wanton behavior of a third generation cultivator in the world of immortality (not). Hahaha. I like it very much. The previous ones were all about five spiritual roots, and Little characters rise or are reborn, but they are all timid or unrealistic, which makes me feel that is not the true character of a character. People are all multi-sexual. I like the heroine very much. Some people may think she is not good, but I think the life of cultivating immortals in my fantasy is her life, hahaha

It's super good-looking, the plot has ups and downs, and the heroine is decisive, smart, and very good at thinking. The heroine's father's different treatment of her and the original heroine made me cry, and the heroine's mother's love and care for her also moved me. I feel that the male protagonist currently has feelings for the female protagonist. He is the kind of yandere and perverted younger brother with a smiling face. He thinks the female protagonist is interesting and detoxified her once. The female protagonist and the male protagonist are suspected of being a sweet couple (although it is superficial)

It's a good read, not a brainless piece of writing, the author's writing is very to the point. It does not say that villains are necessarily bad, and decent characters will always be good. There are plot twists, and characters can be flat or round. There is no saying that the character is absolutely perfect.

It's super good-looking. I look forward to the author's updates every day. However, in some of the latest plots, I feel that the presence of the male protagonist is very low and the plot feels weird. The male protagonist has no communication with the female protagonist. But overall, I still like it very much. I really hope the author will complete it.

The differences between each pair of lovers show that the men and women are matched differently. The most important thing is that he does not misunderstand you for the sake of the plot. It is very enjoyable and simple to watch. I also want a male partner like this hahahaha

It feels very good to watch. Every character has their own characteristics. Each character is full, multi-faceted and complex, just like human nature. The plot is also very interesting. I feel that the author has not finished writing the extras. I really want to watch the extras of the deputy CP, and Ji Cheng, who has been waiting for the heroine for a long time. Shu (Emperor of the Mortal Realm), I feel that they shouldn't end like this, but I still hope that those people will have their own beautiful and happy future in another world where I can't see [cry][cry][cry][cry][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, and the characters are vivid, but the ending is not acceptable to me personally. . . There were a few chapters that were so cruel that I didn't dare to read them, so I skipped them. But after reading them, I still had an indescribable feeling. It's a good read and recommended.