After Her Black-Bellied Junior Brother Became Clingy

I don't understand why the rating is so low. The writing and characters are all very clear. The female protagonist is very stable and wants to solve the mystery of the entire story line. The male protagonist makes people want to know more. The author will greatly improve it.

The body spots on Nuannuan's corpse have faded a lot (bushi). I like the heroine's courage to confront the original heroine. I also like the hands-on scenes. She dares to speak and fight.

It's really super good-looking. Every character is flesh-and-blood and well-shaped. Whether it's the heroine, the hero, the original heroine, or other characters, every character is very good, and the author's writing is very good. This novel is really good to read.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's much better than other similar articles that add settings halfway, and it has a beginning and an end. The highlight of the plot is the female protagonist, who has a very good and smart personality, while the male protagonist is a bit of a sideshow in the middle and later stages (this is my personal feeling), and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very cute. It's a pity that there are some pitfalls that have not been filled in. Qing Meng Yuan said that Qing Wu will marry Meng Sheng when he comes back. Later, it is said that the male protagonist is Qing Wu. Who Meng Sheng is is not explained. Qing Meng Yuan's line does not match up with the line of Xianjun written by the main writer later. In addition, if you are a strong female protagonist, you should be mentally prepared. There are a lot of unexpected troubles in the heroine's stall. The first half is a breast disaster. The father is extremely partial to the original heroine. The original heroine almost killed the heroine twice and then punished her lightly.

The plot always makes people want to keep reading, but there are too many characters in the novel, such as the heroine's father, the original heroine, the heroine's father Bai Yueguang, etc. It makes people anxious after reading it, and they feel frustrated and frustrated. So this is not a book with a heroine, and it is not a pure and refreshing novel. I don't want to read this book about lightning protection that always makes me angry. I am still interested in the plot, and I will probably continue to watch it.

It's tied. This book is one of the few among the immortal novels that attracted me. The characters written by the author are very real. There are no bugs that force the plot to fit the characters. [Sending my heart] It's just that the chapters are too few and I can't read them. I don't like to read serials 😢 I don't know if I've seen a lot of cliche plots, but the heroine's perspective is like that of a reader. The heroine will also look at the cliched plot from her own perspective. In fact, the author's writing is not cliche, and the heroine's own plot is not cliché either. [Send my heart] It's really interesting and worth watching [Send my heart] It would be better if it can be more exciting [laughs]

It's very beautiful, the plot is very attractive, the more you read, the more addictive you become. Please update 🥰🥰🥰 quickly. The character setting is also very attractive. It's not brainless or love-minded. It's not like the kind of novel where you fall in love with the heroine for no reason.

The whole article is enjoyable to read, but sometimes the transition is not very good. I thought I skipped something, but overall it is still enjoyable to read. It is so interestingly written and really enjoyable! The characters are well-developed and three-dimensional, and the ending is so rushed that I really want to cry. I heard that there was a book that was immediately continued by another 100,000 words when the readers said they didn't have enough, and they immediately made them rich. Do you know this?

This book is highly recommended. You must read it. The ups and downs of the plot have a sense of reasoning, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very smooth. The supporting characters are all full of characters. Highly recommended! 🥰

I really like this book. Everyone's characters are flesh-and-blood, there is no absolute villain, right and wrong are determined by one's stance, there are stories of the older generation entangled in love and hate, and there are also stories of lovers getting married. Mu Yuansi likes Wen Ruo, so after being given a drug by the fallen immortal, Mu Yuansi fell in love with Shen Yuanxi, but Wen Ruo still didn't want to believe that he didn't like her anymore. I like the emotional line between the two of them very much. Although it is be, I think this ending is the best. But the ending was too hasty, and it was over before I could recover. Especially the extras, I can't understand them anymore. I hope I can practice this kind of thing more.