As a Girl, I Will Engage in Technology

I stayed up late to read two points. Objectively speaking, it scores 7-8 points. It is definitely not at the level of a 9-point novel, but it is very interesting. Let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of the current chapter. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The pacing of this article is not well controlled. The lithography machine is mentioned in dozens of chapters of the technology tree. Now I am planning to build my own supercomputer. Many places that should be paved are not paved, and the places that should be expanded are not expanded, resulting in some plots lacking basic rationality. In addition, the character design is erratic. The heroine graduated from college at the age of 18. In the first article, she is described as petite and delicate, and in the second article, she becomes 1.7 Meters tall and beautiful. It is too dramatic. Let's talk about the advantages. The concentration of refreshing points is the main reason why I watched it in the middle of the night. However, the over-repetition of refreshing points is also a problem. Let's see how the author will deal with it later. Then there is what I think is the biggest highlight of this article, regarding the character creation and interaction of the male and female protagonists. The male and female protagonists are both people with obvious shortcomings. The female protagonist is limited by gender recognition and family environment. She almost never solves emotional problems head-on. She likes to deal with things silently and has always been an evasive personality. The male protagonist is a stalker, controlling and love-minded young man. However, he has always carefully cared for the female protagonist's emotions, from being interested in the female protagonist to appreciating the female protagonist's side as a scientist, and then fully supporting the female protagonist to ensure the heroine's rear. The sublimation of this article is that in order to resist the pursuit of the male protagonist, the female protagonist poses a very profound problem to the male protagonist. The male protagonist has been in a state of putting aside other things in order to fall in love. This is also a common problem in many urban novels. There are all kinds of overlords with nothing to do in an endless stream. The female protagonist always says "You don't "Are you working?" The combination of punching and looking at the design drawings was originally intended to create a problem for the male protagonist to hold him back. The male protagonist actually set his mind to study and work hard, and while carefully taking care of the female protagonist to protect her rear, he wrote a "love letter" to the female protagonist without even a single word of love. From here, the female protagonist began to express her love for her. The male protagonist went from being completely closed off to really having a hint of acceptance, and taking the initiative to give the male protagonist a chance (I want to praise the female protagonist here, probably because she was a man in her previous life, so when she saw the male protagonist who was really trying to catch up with her, she did not hide aside to watch the show but really guided the male protagonist in secret). This section kills three birds with one stone. One is natural Ruran provides an opening for the transformation of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and avoids the embarrassing situation in many scientific and technological novels where the other half of the protagonist gradually becomes a tool because he cannot keep up with the protagonist. Thirdly, it coincides with the main line of scientific and technological novels of "first the country, then the small family". We can fall in love, but we must put the construction of the motherland first. It can be said that both the male and female protagonists have become better versions of themselves during this period of chasing each other. This is the ideal love.

Okay, I happen to watch both "Bian Miao" and "Technology", but the audience is too small, it's okay, not too toxic Uh 😓, it's too late, brother, I'm out of ideas. I just said that it's okay to read as a science and technology novel, but I thought it was a heroine novel where the heroine is originally a girl. However, it turns out that there are a lot of emotional descriptions in the back, and it's a bit aggrieved. The way of expression is not quite right. Okay, no more.

It's okay, especially the professional terms in it. However, if you choose the wrong track, there will definitely be no traffic and no commercial promotion value. However, if it is a hobby, then it is no problem. Just write according to your own ideas. Come on!

So far, it seems to be okay. There are definitely some shortcomings but they are not particularly toxic. There is a theme of marriage and the love line will definitely be developed. Those who don't want to see the love line can quit now. It is impossible to slowly appear a male protagonist after 200 chapters. At present, your book is better than other marriage-changing articles because you have a very long technological line to write about and the writing is pretty good. Come on. The author is too anxious and has already begun to forcibly reduce intelligence in some places in order to advance the emotional line.

Marriage Change, the writing is excellent, there is almost no description of women's bodies in women's clothing, and the description of female abduction is full. It has a time travel background and a parallel world setting. Because the memory of the original female body is not inherited, the process of adapting to the new body and female abortion at the beginning is written in detail, and the emotions are well drawn. From the straight man being played as a straight man to giving birth to triplets and milk babies, it is a very happy process. The technological power is interspersed with the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. The writing is very interesting, especially the professional knowledge. It is indeed an excellent marriage change novel. The only shortcoming is that the appearance description of the heroine and the description of female dressing are not included. Everything else is full ~ a writing worth collecting.

It's quite interesting. His theme is about transformation, and because I like to read romance, he married a boy, and the male protagonist got married and so on. I quite like watching this one, mainly because I don't like reading romance movies. Anyway, it's okay.

Not bad, but it may be too big and difficult to control. Please write [Adoration]

Keep writing, it's really good, I like it very much. [Shy] It must not be a mess, please. [Almost crying]

A patriotic author and a protagonist who loves the nation!

It's a very good book. It starts off very well. Although the emotional line in the middle is quite tangled, the ending is very good.

Looks good, the emotional scenes are good [shy]

It looks good. I love it. Come on.

Beautiful, but not enough

The plot is great! Worth recommending! 👍👍👍😸😸😸

Change of marriage, emotional progression, not abrupt

See how it performs in the future

I really like this book, but I don't know why the rating is so low!

A very healing book! Close to life.

The writing is good, link by link, very beautiful