Doomsday Train: the Carriage Built into a Daughter's Country

Give yourself a thumbs up. Emphasis, this book [multiple women + cool articles]. The protagonist has a stable character and is quick to act, not a virgin. It's a dick + a European emperor. The European Emperor was brought here by hanging, and he was not born with the aura of the protagonist. Dear friends, please give me a chance and read a few more chapters. If you have any questions, you can leave a comment. Every comment will be read~~~ At present, more than 10,000 people have read it, and 4 friends have clearly pointed out to me that the book has a lot of nonsense and is long-winded. Although there are only 4 people, I still want to give a unified explanation for this. Because this is a problem I was aware of when I was writing the book myself. In some plots, I also felt that I was verbose. But it won't do without being verbose. If you don't be verbose, someone will definitely think more than you, and they will argue with you, and point out that your logic is not rigorous and has loopholes. Personally, I would rather be criticized than criticized, saying that your logic is confusing and your writing is not thorough. In fact, subjectively I am not willing to do hydrology at all. In the current 100,000 words, the attribute panel only appears four times, the first two of which are in Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, showing the initial status of the train panel and the conductor panel respectively. The last two times were very different and were only briefly presented. I think this can be considered as evidence that I don't want to do hydrology, otherwise I could just write down panels every few chapters, even with the slightest changes! However, this long-winded problem mainly focuses on the early stage. In the early stage, the protagonist is relatively weak, and out of caution, he inevitably thinks too much. A little later, the protagonist becomes stronger and can push the platform world, and the thinking will naturally decrease. My writing has become more concise. In addition, whether this book is lengthy or not depends on your subjective feelings. Judging from the current situation where only 4 people have asked questions out of more than 10,000 people, there are still a small number of people who think it is long-winded. Friends, please give me a chance, read a few more chapters, and judge for yourself!

After watching "The Emperor of the Heart", it's okay and watchable. There's a bit too much nonsense in some places. So far, there's nothing special except for "The Emperor of the Heart". It's a fairly average story. The protagonist has a bit of a bottom line, but if there is, there's nothing too poisonous (it's also possible that Shennong ate too much poisonous weed and just crossed it without reacting). If you like survival and Liu Bei, you can check it out.

Small, yellow, well organized. And there is no life or death crisis. You are invincible in the car, which really makes you feel safe.

I have always had an idea about this kind of survival novel, and I have received help from many people like "Bai Xiaosheng" in the forum. Some of the ideas they provided, and some information that the protagonist did not know, all inspired the protagonist. If it were an ordinary survival article, his golden finger would be some improvement in combat power or other aspects, but the golden finger of the protagonist of this article is more in the intelligence collection system. I think you can still appropriately feed back those who have helped you, and provide some information on the forum that "I will know in the future, but I just tell you in advance, so that everyone can be less hurt."

It's not bad. The author knows how to use his strengths and avoid weaknesses. He can't write battles in just one move. It's fun to use all the upgrades.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

It's quite good, but there are too few female protagonists, which may be due to the small number of chapters. Also, the places I've been to so far are basically worlds where all living things are extinct, and I haven't been to a few living platforms. I should be able to go to living platforms as my level gets higher.

It's very interesting. When will Zhaojun become a real fighting force? There are too few updates and it's not enough to watch. I really want to feed you a three-color Higanbana flower and then lock you in a small dark room and feed you grass and wood Rongshen pills every day. I won't let you out until I finish writing.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up, nothing will be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel carelessly, without intending to finish it. But you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, only feelings can make a thousand things! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours.

Pure and refreshing writing, no vulgar plot, harem Liu Beiwen. Although the subject matter is a bit old-fashioned, the author has his own creative ideas. The only shortcoming is that the combat power system is too vague and the combat power is stretched a bit too hard. I feel like I'm going to collapse,

Okay, okay, the logic is relatively smooth, and it's not messy like other people say, nor does it have any inexplicable arrangements. It's an awesome villain. The only disadvantage is that there are too few. It is important to emphasize again that there are too few and it is not enough to watch.

Progress 103, overall not bad, worth a look, some impressions: *The first impression of the book title Train and Jade Seal was that the painting style/system did not match, but after reading a few chapters, I felt it was okay and the logic was self-consistent; * There is no traditional European princess; a system environment that highly inhibits free trading; a strange but reasonable treasure chest mode *There is a supporting character of 'sublimation type' at the beginning, who is later completely refined by the protagonist *Chapter 29: There is a veteran player who wants to make friends with the main character, but does not benefit the main character and behaves inexplicably. *In Chapter 35, I ate the train AI elf, in Chapter 61, I ate the female zombie, in Chapter 72, I ate the human female player who was cheating on me, and then I ate the fox demon, etc. *Main abilities: Daily reminder (plug-in), European Emperor (Jade Seal), Time Domain (self-awakening), Demon Control Seal, Mechanical Dog, double rest, etc. *Cultivation seems fake, there is no sense of cultivation, it just improves the essence and spirit, and there is no sense of indicators similar to how the true energy forms a cyclone/lights up the stars. This is not as good as purely increasing the traditional four dimensions, even if it is tens of thousands or hundreds of millions. *No waste of materials, no waste.👃Feeling *Most consumables are regenerable and there is no sense of bloodletting. *New abilities/new materials/new characters keep appearing, but the expressiveness is about the same

Report! ! ! Shennong is here. A small amount of plot is found among a large number of thrashings. Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle.

It's okay. It feels a bit similar to what I read before. I forgot which book it is. It seems to be about trains or something, but overall it's good. It just disappears in a flash. It's too little. The author should update it more quickly.

I love reading it. It's a masterpiece of the same genre. I've found a treasure! The advantages are obvious! 1. There is no water word count in the chat channel. There are only forums in the book, and the protagonist only reads valuable forum posts, and there are no human-like chat records like those in other books. 2. Not hydrological. The intelligence system is affected by the protagonist's wishes and only provides valuable information. 3. The personal panel appears very rarely. The first two times appear in Chapters 1 and 2. One is the train panel and the other is the conductor panel. They are both necessary displays of the initial state. It's not until Chapter 17 that the third panel appears, and the panel changes a lot before it's shown. 4. Without a trading system, survivors can only rely on themselves. There will definitely be one later in the trading system, but it didn't appear in the early stages. There is no such thing as a little bit of water and food in exchange for valuable items. To summarize, it means to gather the essence of the same genre and discard the dregs. The protagonist is the European Emperor + a cheater. He has a very stable character and plans everything before taking action. This is my favorite type. Great update!

There are a lot of things that seem illogical, but I can barely explain them. For example, when it comes to recruiting girls, I always feel an inexplicable affinity. But this is not a problem. Every book has its own way of reading. Just like this one, I have read it as a pornographic article, and the others are no longer important.

I saw the latest one. The author knows how to avoid reading points. It's very refreshing. There are a lot of women. There is no emotion, only love. I understand everything. Good

It looks good, I love it, but it's not enough. More updates should be made in the early stage, more updates in the mid-term, and frequent updates in the later stage. If you want a harem, be decisive and don't procrastinate. Chapter 3 sets the tone, Chapter 5 is about family affairs, and Chapter 10 is about merging cars. Being an emperor means having a lot of influence. If you don't have many people, you don't have many talents, and you don't have many martial virtues, how can you be a heavenly king? [What][Like][Like]

In the early stage, the entrance of Jade Seal and Jiulong is okay, but in the later stage, it must be upgraded, from the Emperor's Jade Seal to the list of heaven and earth gods, from the dragon dance to the opening of the Nantianmen to the 33rd level of the Lingxiao Palace.

It's quite interesting, I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished (The author should be patient, he has been targeted, and he waited for a long time before Chapter 99 was released [laughter])

The quality is good, it makes people watch it, and it's not a brainless trick.

It's great. I love reading it. I hope there will be more. ㊗️The author's works are very popular. Please get more. I feel like the intelligence system, the treasure chest, and the upgrade train are interesting. You really screwed up the emotional line. I feel like you have written the protagonist into a waste with only desires. It's only been a few chapters, and I feel like the word count is too low. . .

It's so cool that you won't be disappointed. It has an upgrade flow, the protagonist is semi-invincible, and the train survival is well written. In the general environment, multiple female protagonists are not welcome The author can go to the harem post to recommend more books

The writing is very good and the plot is very reasonable. It is also my favorite multi-girl romance novel. Keep up the good work.

Xiao Huang writes well [like]

What a perfect yellow tomato (♡>𖥦<)/♥[smile][smile][smile]

A very interesting novel

Okay, this book is better than Yiling's Fire.

Not bad. If you write it down well, you can compare it with the book "Train Sublimation". .

Needless to say, the author writes in great detail, so write slowly, don't rush, and maintain quality.