A cataclysm of rules descends, turning the world into a playground for urban legends and zombies.
As survivors struggle to stay alive among the ruins and question why no gods have descended upon Huaxia, Lin Che awakens an S-rank ability: [Rule Writing].
Standing atop the ruins, he uses his finger as a pen and lays down the first rule:
[Rule One: Wherever the Five-Star Red Flag shines, the uncanny must stop, and all beings are equal!]
From then on, the “Revival” Safe Zone he runs becomes the only truth in the apocalypse.
Chosen ones from abroad command thunder and try to conquer it, only to be forced to their knees by the power of the rules before they reach the boundary sign. Its words are unmistakable:
[Rule __: Anyone entering this gate must carry a Huaxia ID card and loudly recite the Core Socialist Values.]
Lin Che looks down on the world from atop the high walls, with the lights of countless homes shining behind him. Facing the endless uncanny, he says softly:
“My rules are the last line of defense for civilization.”
It can only be said that the writing is very abstract, with very few important places and a lot of unimportant things, such as the life base and the so-and-so meeting. Many people from these two camps suggested deleting it, because what you wrote is about rules and ghost stories. Then you should increase the visibility of this category instead of adding any hostile human camps.
The story should have ups and downs and suspense. If not, it should be exciting. It should give me a sense of calm in a stagnant water.