Travel Through Warhammer, Pick up Lorgar, and Become an Investor in the Original Body

A good one. From the beginning, the protagonist only invested in Luo Ba, but later regarded him as his son even though he was stubborn and unwilling to admit it. This plot is a classic between the cheap father and the expensive adoptive father of Fan Renhe Haihu. The future of Luo Ba will definitely be better than the original. I don't know where it went.

While reading this book, I felt like I was just trying to grab a bite to eat, but ended up running into a treasure restaurant hidden deep in an alley. So far it's pretty good, the writing is excellent and the plot is engaging. The protagonist understands Warhammer, believes in efficiency first but still has a human touch, kills Kor Phaeron, and also creates a Luojia who is completely different from the demon. There is also a reasonable explanation for how to travel through time. I hope more people can read this excellent Warhammer novel.

The unique plot of an expensive adoptive father in Warhammer fandom looks quite heartwarming, I hope I can continue to write as well as I can.

The writing is excellent and the plot is smooth. I won't comment on the farming part. I have never studied politics or history. The expensive adoptive father part unique to Warhammer is even better and easier to talk about.

The Emperor also felt that he was not worthy, and the Emperor also wanted humanity to fight for humanity itself. It's a pity that he is an individual after all, let alone a perfect person. Huang Pizi has many shortcomings and made many mistakes, so he deserves to be scolded. But in the same way, human beings are a race, with gods and men emerging one after another, and endless selfish desires and evil thoughts. Therefore, the emperor will give up or even kill some people, but he will never give up the "human" race. The Emperor killed many people and was tortured for thousands of years for humanity. Many humans betrayed and hated the Emperor, but there were also those who were loyal and devoted their lives to the Emperor for thousands of years. What a shameless mandarin duck [covering face].

In the book circle of Warhammer, this book is relatively consistent with the original work. Although there may be some changes to the plot in the original work, it is generally based on the original work. There are no fancy changes like other similar novels. Moreover, I think the creation of each character is very unique. On the basis of not deviating from the original character, the author's own opinions are added. A very interesting book. Makes people want to watch it. It's not the kind of writing created by AI, so I hope the author can work hard. Finally, I wish the author will return to the throne in the future [laughs]

It's so delicious... No, is this still a male video? Did I read the right book? ... It's so delicious... The author, you are this [like]... Although but... Good knock, this protagonist is so cute... Woohoo! What I want to see is this mouth and teeth!! So cool!!! A straight man sells me off, leaving me in pain for the rest of my life

A very good book! At present, I found the Warhammer NO.1 In my heart on Tomato. The writing is good, and the atmosphere of some scenes is well rendered. The protagonist outsmarts others and makes unparalleled moves. The overall plot rhythm is also very appropriate. The farming at the beginning was a bit tiring, and then it immediately moved to the next stage to bring new and interesting plot developments. The character descriptions of each original body are very realistic (Luojia was raised by his own hands, so it is considered a private design and not OOC). When I saw Khan, the dialogue between the characters, and the in-depth exchange of ideas, I felt that the author was writing with great care, and the writing was very exciting. The charm of both the protagonist and the originals was expressed very well.

It's a good book. It doesn't look so desperate and dark, and the plot is good. I personally prefer emotional expressions, but the main characters are boys and may be more reserved. Everything else is good.

Well written, above average among Warhammer fics AI article, a bunch of bad sentences and a plot that doesn't match the preface and the follow-up.

Zhou Beichen, a shrewd speculator, a worldly businessman who talks about profit. When he first traveled through time to raise Luo Jia, he was like a philistine businessman who only focused on profit. Most of the things he handed over to Luo Jia were weighing the pros and cons, and the motivation for doing things was to obtain greater benefits. He thought that he would always remain a shrewd businessman in this shithole universe. But it turns out that people's emotional contributions are beyond their control! He taught Lorgar Aurelion, who was as outstanding as the Golden Word Messenger in the Apocrypha, and he changed Magnus, known as the "One-eyed Red-skinned Ogryn". He calmly accepted the emperor's various calculations. In order to teach Coze, he almost sacrificed his nature as a time traveler and shouldered responsibilities and missions that a shrewd businessman should not bear. Zhou Beichen, at some point in the future, will you regret all the decisions you made that were not worth the investment and output? You have gradually become a life mentor from a "profiteer" (a compliment). Will you change the dark and desperate Warhammer 40k universe? Readers will wait and see. Come on, author, keep updated, we will be with you all the way!

It looks great, but I don't know why the traffic is so low. Maybe it's because the update time is not very fixed. I want to see the link between Luojia and the protagonist hahaha [Note] [Note] [Note] But the protagonist is linked to the Emperor. The two Sea Kings, the source of all evil, rush to the back of the Heresy and split. Horus is defeated and Luojia is incompetent. It's great to see the Heresy＼(^▽^)/! The two of them had a falling out, but little did they know that the emperor and the protagonist had negotiated it. This kind of ups and downs, but at the same time extremely sour and complicated emotions has its own flavor [laughs].

Although I know the rhythm of the sections, the narrative of the entire book is more like a slow pace. , A group portrait article, the protagonist brought changes to our country on the battlefield, giving the Astartes another way to live, and giving the people at the bottom another way to live. A way of living that is more like a human being, although there are relatively few words about the protagonist in the later period. There may be a lot of ink written on the people at the bottom or ordinary Astartes. Even the Chaos believers struggle and think. They are all alive and not a cold war machine. Angron can be a warm sun, and the Father of Steel can let go of his obsession. Let the steel also be full of warmth, the Warmaster does not need to be obsessed with his love for his father, "Eagle" is a very suitable bad friend, and Curze has changed from a dark and crazy big bat to a dark and middle-aged magical girl [like] Capital Gar. On the surface, it talks about capital interests, but in the end, the protagonist is more like a leader than a red piece [Sending Hearts]. He holds up the first torch called survival for everyone. Luojia takes it, Curze protects him, and then the torch turns into a blazing fire called the Kingdom of Heaven on Earth, [Sending Hearts] Attachment: I especially like, Merry Christmas Mr. Lawrence, this extra story made me cry so much qwq, I hope the fire in heaven on earth can continue to burn. Attachment: "On the ground" and "third" are homophones [sneaky laugh] It's hard not to imagine that this is the author's little ingenuity [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky laugh]

Worth a look, finally struck gold

Just do it in the early stage, it will look better after the Emperor finds Luojia. It should be the getting better type [laughing crookedly], and I like to watch the protagonists interact.

8.5 Points. The author is a Warhammer player. He is not particularly outrageous. The plot is quite interesting. It is a high-quality fan book.

Before reading this book, I originally wanted to make do with it, but unexpectedly I found a treasure. It is relatively good among Warhammer novels. The relationship with the shy people is well written, and it is not the kind of person who directly calls you brothers and sisters. Wrong typo, it should be with the primarchs.

It's very interesting, but I don't have a good impression of capitalists, and I know what Warhammer is like, a piece of shit, but at least the protagonist should be kind to me. Although she is just arrogant😄😄😄😄

I have seen Chapter 46 and came here to comment. This is not a cool story. The male protagonist is currently an ordinary person (I don't know if the author will arrange a cheat in the future). He adopts the original body and works together to create a world where ordinary people are not too desperate (at least the living environment for ordinary people is getting better and better). The author's outlook is quite good. Although the male protagonist has shortcomings, he also has a very charming human side. I can't stand it anymore. The title of the male protagonist and his son made me laugh to death. The original body calls him father, and the male protagonist calls the original body genetic father. Hahahahahahahahaha

In the Warhammer worldview, I'm afraid I can't directly name the four gods, have the same titles and related things, right? Except for those who are inherently powerful and do not trust the Chaos Evil God, they will not be affected. Others will be corrupted as long as they reveal information related to the Four Gods. This article seems a bit disturbing. Regardless of time travel or not, in the Warhammer world, no one dares to directly discuss the deeds of the four gods, otherwise they will be corrupted [laughing]

Teacher, there are really many people who like this novel. It is normal that the traffic is getting less and less. This is the case for many novels. If you update a novel for a long time, it will fall into a limited period, but as long as you get through this period, the traffic will be restored. Teacher, you can rest assured that even if there are fewer and fewer people supporting it, there will still be people who support it. We all really like this novel. Teacher, I hope you can stick to it!!!

So far, it looks like a very good article. The only problem is that the pace seems a bit slow.

This book really gets more and more interesting the more you read it. If you haven't read it for a long time, you will feel a bit raw, but if you bite a few pages, you will be attracted by the story in it. Although the protagonist has been screwed, cheated by friends or fucked by enemies, in fact, the protagonist has only met the top group of people, and it is normal to not be able to fuck. Moreover, all the characters are really three-dimensional and can be regarded as flesh and blood! Give it a good read, this book is well worth it.

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It's rare to find a good Warhammer fanfic. It would be better if there were more chapters.

It's good-looking, the male protagonist is really both a father and a mother, and there's also my favorite Shura field

There is not much content about Warhammer in the early stage. It can be read as a lord article. The development content is quite detailed and logical. There is no use of system cheats to force settings, which is a very good point. Warhammer's added systems are generally not that good.

The protagonist becomes Luo Jia's expensive adoptive father, who appears to be taking the capital road, but actually takes the red road. Highly recommended I still like this kind of primordial flow. The golden finger and the protagonist are just right.

[Punch Out] Another style of Warhammer fic, which is quite good

It's very comfortable and seems to have a kind of human brilliance. It's rare for me to see such a humane movie. Although I haven't finished watching it, the plot is very dry and the parallel imports are also mushy (bs). I am just a Yunzhui, so I read this book as a book about raising children and building socialism. The author is also great, the rhythm is steady every few days, and the cause and effect cycle is very compact. . . . . .