Immortal Lord Experiences the World of Mortals, Something Is Wrong with These Worlds

Yes, the first story felt like it should be a male channel, but the second one is solid. It's definitely a male channel [face covering] [like] [like] Although it's ruthless and a little crazy, it's cool enough [like] [like] This is a male channel crossing over to a female channel [face covering] [like] [like] [like] I have read the fifth story. The author is stable, the writing is sophisticated, and the plot is well designed. When he should be angry, he kills everyone, and when he should be gentle, it is heartwarming and tear-jerking [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] The author has something [Like] This book is good, a rare masterpiece from Tomato

In fact, the first story is quite ordinary, not as exciting as a running story, but the second story is very surprising. I have watched the drama about the real and fake daughter and the real and fake young master countless times. The first time I watched it from the perspective of the father, and it was more exciting. It was very comfortable to watch. Generally speaking, the real and fake daughter is really fake. The young master's scenes are all about green tea, Bicha, and there are some who push him with force, but they don't have the toughness to deal with it as the head of the family. The wife and the son just talk nonsense, and the parents, the father-in-law, and the mud are just pushed away. The different angles are really interesting.

I have finished reading the Qingmei chapter. The fourth world and the third world are my favorite. It is very sweet. The fourth one is pretty good too. The first one jumped to watch it, but the second one didn't watch it at all, and was a bit angry. I prefer that kind of sweet text. Generally speaking, the writing is good, the author has writing style and life, and the characters are also three-dimensional. The rating is low, I don't know why. I can't watch the rest of it. You don't want to replace the original owner, you don't want to accept everything from the original owner, and you just practice and become subordinates when you get to the small world. Then why do you write about quick travel? If you have such an independent personality, why don't you just write fairy tales? If you don't want to accept everything from the original owner, if you meet the original owner's woman and it doesn't work, just show your cards and say you are a god! ! No, then why write about quick travel? Isn't watching quick time just about watching different worlds replace different people and follow different plots?

The first one was pretty good. The node I came over wasn't the best, but at least it was still at a point where everything I sent out could be recovered. And it seems to be in line with the original owner's wish. After all, although it was not stated explicitly, it was clearly implied that the fourth child would inherit from the three sisters and only the male would be regarded as the heir, and there was no attempt to force the heir apparent. After all, the thinking of the older generation is like that. If you don't forcefully reform it, others will never be able to adapt. Especially in the older generation, it's probably hard to live well for those years and not be able to see your grandchildren before you die. One thing is not bad, let the original person take revenge with his own hands

This book was written by the author after reading a short story. Dear readers, if you have any good comments and suggestions, please give them to the author. Thank you for your support! ! ! [Love][love][love]

It's so funny, and it's written with such a sense of humor that I feel it's much better than some dry books with a lot of old jokes. Don't know why there are so many bad reviews. Anyway, it suits my taste. It doesn't matter if the only emotion he experiences is marrying a wife and having children. I can accept it if he is not a eunuch I'm tired of reading Chapter 418. Some of the words used during the plot are quite interesting and funny. But the plot feels like it has always been like that from whichever world it started, cultivating forces and bringing them back. It made me very sleepy. It's watchable, at least it's not a fake protagonist that makes people feel frustrated. I also like the character. If you don't lick the dog, you'll still beat the woman for being mean. But in terms of plot, it feels like the same pattern. Repeat the same thing. The mood I felt when I first read this book is gone. Follow-up review 2Change⭐️⭐️ Just see this, don't talk about anything else, just go and see the world of the concubine in the General's Mansion and you'll understand

The rating will increase soon. A good book is worth sharing. The entry point is different from the usual routine of explaining the overall situation. It is innovative, has a sense of substitution, and allows readers to guess most of the plot. The writing is good. Come on, the author. I look forward to more good works.

I watched it after reading the comments. I can watch the first world, and then I watched the third and fourth worlds directly. These two are really good, but I didn't watch the rest. After all, the comments didn't mention that I was afraid of eating Ori, so I hid it [face covering] I'll give it four stars. Anyway, I picked it up based on the reviews. I didn't eat it because of Ouli [laughing]

Five stars for your support. The author's writing is good, and the plot is delicate and smooth. The shortcoming of the low rating is that the Golden Finger of the Small World is not strong enough. For fast travel, you need to be quick, accurate and ruthless. Referring to the Shen Yan Demon King in "The Black and White Lotus Forty Meter Sword", fast travel means being invincible. Don't be verbose, just click and kill indiscriminately. I've seen Chapter 417. In the later stage, people were lured to the fairy world to promote the plot, which made the content too dry. The most important thing is that it just doesn't make sense to just lure ordinary people to the fairy world. Normally, it's not possible to ascend to the fairy world after a life of nine deaths? Now the author has made up a reason of heaven to prevent the male protagonist from ascending to the Immortal Emperor, but there is no need to write a large number of people to attract people. In order to attract people, the content will be too empty and cannot stimulate the reading mood. It is better to come up with a panacea reason such as merit.

I really like the setting of Zhou Ling as a girl. She is naive and dedicated. The protagonist cannot be called a scumbag. She is just here to brush up her resume. Zhou Ling's reaction to returning to the fairy world is well written. It is a very good book. There are a few articles that are a bit mediocre. Overall, it is excellent. I give it a thumbs up.

Very exciting. . It's so high-spirited and feels so good to look at.

It is a rare novel with a plot that is divided into parts. The writing is humorous and the content is interesting without dragging out. It's a cool article but not completely brainless. It's enjoyable to write and even more enjoyable to read. This is my first book review on Tomato.

The twin brother is gone? Only the eldest son and twin daughters

Not bad, it makes me want to keep reading

Good-looking and relieving, recommended

Here, it feels pretty good

It's still good, come on

Yes, I'm very happy

Awesome, super good-looking

The score is really low

Damn, it made me laugh. The first story is really funny [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is great, interesting and understandable.

A book that satisfies all the bloody plots of short stories. It's good to read, I love to read, I want to read it.

There's no blood, it's fun to watch

Very good-looking, not too fake

Well written, Ollie.

It's very enjoyable, the Great Love Immortal [learned] [sneered smile] [shy] [cool] [note]

Seeing my daughter being a slave, it's quite easy to write a quick article!

What you can read is a good book, which is much better than those who pretend to be sheep and sell dogs.

The book is very good, please keep up the good work