Card Master: Summon the Choir at the Beginning!

The pace is fast and the development is rapid. It looks like a short novel. The author's description of the card effects is very complicated, and it can be seen that he has put a lot of effort into it. The transition in stages 1-2 is a bit stiff, there are no events to fill it in, and it looks empty and lifeless. However, considering that this is the author's first book, I still encourage you! Comprehensive evaluation: Passed (you can consider filling in more plots and filling in some daily life and events in the specific development. The current writing speed is too fast and even a little utilitarian. The translation is to ask you to be more watery. The current book has no water, is too hard, and has no description of daily life) I have read to the beginning of Chapter 53. The suggestions I have made are only for the situation before Chapter 53. I have not read after Chapter 53.

Are day and night equal? ​​Are the righteous and the sinner equal? ​​If man is born weak, from which god should the weak find peace? O triple-faced soul, please listen to my question. If the power and wealth of the strong can cover up their crimes, who can judge them? If the strong supports the weak, it is indeed the foundation of paradise. Who leaves them to wail in the suffering world? If there are some chicks in this world who cannot fly throughout their lives, how can we say that the sky is their destination? Pinoconi, a wild place where the fittest survive, or a perfect paradise where everyone can be happy? There is only one thing I have to do, and that is to create a paradise that has no star gods, only order, can accommodate the dignity and happiness of all people, and belongs only to us humans. I will fly high into the sky and become the sun in the sky. All people will grow enthusiastically in my light, and all sins will have no escape. If there is no order, how can the weak do good? I command with flawless music to create paradise again. Now, I give you the power to look directly at the sun. If your paradise can save more people, then cut off the way forward for me with your own hands! People always forget that once, when the first bird flew into the sky, it was the whole world's expectation for it. From then on, no chicks fell to the earth anymore!

The author's writing is quite good. At least it's pretty good in tomatoes. Maybe a little watery. But overall it's pretty good. I really don't understand the bunch of negative reviews below. Or is it because MiHoYo has made some people anxious? The author doesn't care about the bad reviews. At least there are a lot of people who really like to watch it. There is no need to slow down your update efficiency for a bunch of creatures that don't know whether they are human [laughter]

Very nice, thank you to the author I hope the next one will be BOSS Sand Gold, and I also hope that the protagonist can give some summoning lines, such as Sand Gold's strong card, Slow Big, you're making me a little anxious, this kind of thing

I don't feel the bad comments below at all. Maybe they are fake. I suggest seeing is believing and seeing it for yourself [eating melon]

Not bad, but according to the text, God's Sunday should belong to the Order. Dominics belongs to the same league. The last thing is to conquer his own destiny. This kind of eating audience group. This book looks quite boring and the beginning is off-putting. And I thought it was the kind of slow upgrade flow, but it turned out to be Long Aotian in Long Aotian, and then it was deflated later, so I won't write about morning tea.

If it's not Sky Titan, but Dark Evil, the sense of enjoyment will continue. Then Ironwood will come later, and Aha will appear in about ten days. Go directly to Aha, and you can always look forward to it. Readers of the sense of enjoyment will continue to have more

The quality is average, and it's an enjoyable article that doesn't have any brain value [please update]

It looks very good and feels okay. I hope the next boss is Fei Xiao. Ask for the author. He was so handsome when he was fighting the boss.

There is a female protagonist, but now there is only one female protagonist. I don't know if it will be multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist.

The skill introduction is a bit long, but the super combat power makes up for it.

I like the author's setting very much, and the pace is moderate and not laggy. It looks good. I hope the author will update more.

It's a good book

Author, you almost drowned me Next time, can you just say the name of the skill, an introduction, etc., And put it in a paragraph?

The setting idea is quite good, but the writing level is still new, which can be regarded as a disadvantage of Mijia's second creation. Give me more points for...'S sake.

Very nice, thank you to the author

The theme idea is good, but the scene description really needs to be strengthened

Come on, come on, come on, no eunuchs

Great writing, good luck to the author

The beginning is good, but I don't know what happens next.

Not bad. I'll give it to you. You can bear it.

Okay, you can take a look

Not bad. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.

It would be better if there was some Honkai Impact III.

The writing is okay and interesting. Come on.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is too new.

Good looking. Love to see more.

If it is AI, this output is a bit too low.

Your rating is B The author is good, but the subject matter is too old