I Am the Son-In-Law of Tianlong, and I Will Take over Li Qingluo at the Beginning.

It is a very good novel idea to scientifically absorb the principles of martial arts and create your own martial arts. This is what a time traveler should do. Use a scientific way of thinking to absorb the mentality of transcending crushing. I hope that in the future, I will also ascend to the spiritual world and the fairy world in this way, and form my own sect to crush the natives.

I suggest you start writing from the beginning of Pangu [laughter]

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From the current point of view, the highlight of this book is the systematic combing of martial arts and the extremely creative dimensionality reduction and deconstruction of the martial arts system. The first 300,000 words use this idea to give readers a great experience. (Come on, author) But now I am extremely worried that if the book starts with an upgrade flow idea, the subsequent character portrayal and plot control will become cliche, tarnishing such a good idea at the beginning. I have a few concerns and suggestions about the subsequent plot. The subsequent characterization and plot deduction must not be too clichéd. Don't write it into a show-off, slap-in-the-face, crushing flow that collapses the combat power. That would be a shame for the classic creativity of the first 300,000 words of this book. We must build on the solid foundation of the original work, delve deeply into the love and hatred between the characters, and insist on focusing on dramatic conflicts and human conflicts. Please, please don't overturn and waste such a good creative start. The author must carefully consider the outline and carefully design the highlights of the plot and the spiral conflict of the drama. After all, upgrading alone cannot sustain a masterpiece. To truly become a masterpiece, you must have outstanding plot design and full exploration of the characters, as well as the particularly dazzling martial arts creativity you already have. I hope this book can become a god, good luck to the author.

It's good-looking. The plot and the psychology of the characters are well described. I like it. It's a rare novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it.

It was so poisonous that a 10-year-old bookworm thought it was okay! Come on, author!

The angle is good, but the theme is that Tian Xingjian, a gentleman, strives for self-improvement. In terms of details, the start is hellish.

The feelings are delicate, but the passion is missing! Like it was written by AI,

Chapter 41, when are you going to run away? I have been at Mandala Villa, and the progress is too slow.

The writing is too detailed, but I can still read it [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Are you a liberal arts major? The writing is pretty good. I watched it for a few hours. Although the storyline is bland, it is well written and has a bit of a bad taste.

This is a real time traveler's book, I look forward to the follow-up

It's still very good, but some chapters have some language problems and a bit of a stomachache. Then at the end, the world of Tianlong feels a bit small, and the mixed martial arts is the best.

I won't say anything else, just give it five stars. Although I'm a little confused, the author is really educated!

The writing is excellent and the characters are vivid. It is a rare masterpiece on Tomato. Update it quickly and keep you awake at night! !

Good, good, good

You can still raise it

The content is good and worth recommending. ,

Delicate emotions and rich expressions

Very good, scientific martial arts training, novel

Come on, the writing is exquisite.

The novel is so well written

Looks good, come on💪

There is a dragon in the abyss

Great, cyber martial arts.

Not bad, I feel very good

I want to travel through time and practice magic skills

Very powerful and beautiful

The boy passed by alone

Did he just ignore his wife's plot?