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There's no point in falling in love until you're invincible. If you're not invincible and you're not killing the world, then you don't have to fall in love. Love is a taboo for sword cultivators.
The heroine is Ma Xiaotao, which I didn't expect. Taken together, it's quite interesting, but the protagonist's power and sense of oppression are still not that strong. It looks just average and not satisfying enough.
The plot is okay, the writing is average, but the description is not very good at fighting. It is really not good. You can let the AI optimize it. The description of the battle is too simple. If you insist on not using AI, you can tell the scene to the AI and let it generate animations or videos. You can just describe the scene generated by the AI.
The writing is okay, but it's too fast. I feel like it'll be over with another 100,000 words.
Has the author decided to continue writing the follow-up article elsewhere? I still want to read it [crying]
The writing is very detailed and overall very good. Good luck to the author! ! !
In the early part, the jump is relatively fast.
Good, good, good, good
It's very good, but it's a pity that Douluo fans don't live long in Tomato. It would be better if they could switch platforms.
The writing is pretty good, you can keep reading it
There's no point in falling in love until you're invincible. If you're not invincible and you're not killing the world, then you don't have to fall in love. Love is a taboo for sword cultivators.
The heroine is Ma Xiaotao, which I didn't expect. Taken together, it's quite interesting, but the protagonist's power and sense of oppression are still not that strong. It looks just average and not satisfying enough.
The plot is okay, the writing is average, but the description is not very good at fighting. It is really not good. You can let the AI optimize it. The description of the battle is too simple. If you insist on not using AI, you can tell the scene to the AI and let it generate animations or videos. You can just describe the scene generated by the AI.
The writing is okay, but it's too fast. I feel like it'll be over with another 100,000 words.
Has the author decided to continue writing the follow-up article elsewhere? I still want to read it [crying]
The writing is very detailed and overall very good. Good luck to the author! ! !
In the early part, the jump is relatively fast.
Good, good, good, good
It's very good, but it's a pity that Douluo fans don't live long in Tomato. It would be better if they could switch platforms.
The writing is pretty good, you can keep reading it