Honkai: Star Rail: I Just Transmigrated! You Want Me to Save Herta?

The progress of this book is visible to the naked eye. From the slight frustration at the beginning to the rapid iteration of the protagonist's combat power at the end, the character of the protagonist and the author's writing style are indeed constantly improving. More importantly, there are no lapses in the writing that should not be stuck, and it deserves five stars.

Overall, the viewing experience is improving. A little suggestion about the end of the if line. For example, the timeline changes at the end of 57, and Black Tower talks about redefining the denied protagonist. It feels absurdly abrupt. If you add an extra, such as a simple galactic news broadcast, using news to narrate the beginning and end of the war, and other characters' views on the protagonist, it will make the character image more three-dimensional, and it will also make the if line narrative more complete. Like, emmm, a small theater? I feel that the look and feel will be much better, the if line will not have an abrupt ending, and there will be a hook and so on. Flaws don't cover up strengths, come on, author

This book has mixed reviews, but I think it is very well written. First of all, the writing The author's way of shaping the role of the protagonist is amazing and completely breaks the In the past, the protagonist followed Jia Baoyu's advice. Jia Baoyu is no more In the past, I was always chatting and doing nothing with Thanos. Secondly, The description of Voldemort's battle with Xiangzi is three-pointed and vivid. Now, the image of Aiyin as weak and incompetent in our hearts has been completely changed. Like. Moreover, Voldemort was not like the original work, from the beginning he was right The white-headed man fell in love with him, but after witnessing Hai Mao's chaos and abandonment... Later, he secretly fell in love with her, and the logic of the plot became smoother. Incomparable. (The guy who came next door changed it [laughs crookedly])

At present, it should be a single female protagonist, The Dark Tower. The protagonist is very calm and the plot is relatively reasonable. The author basically stabilizes it with two chapters a day. Although it is quite comfortable to read, it is scary to assume the role of the protagonist. [Pause face] I can only say that the crazy man who collapses the iron fate is still too crazy 🤦 Overall, I like it very much. Come on, author.

Next up for the kids are: The only Commander of "Nothingness", the Army of Destruction, the Commander of Preservation, the Commander of Joy, the Commander of Knowledge, Company P47, member of the Genius Club Elbowed Xianzhou and Iron Tomb three times, elbowed Foehn twice, elbowed Bo Shizun and Lan once, started the divine battle three times, stabbed Elbow Wood twice, killed Ruan Mei, one of the Genius Club, once, downloaded the 360 Guardians and Birds wallpaper for Iron Tomb, was watched by Aha, brought an end to the third timeline, the boyfriend of the Black Tower of the Genius Club, the savior of the four timelines, the "existence" star god shot - Jiang Jiu The barrage in the front is a bit confusing, but overall it's pretty good. The pitfalls of the barrage in the back have also been cleared up. Highly recommended.

It's very interesting to watch. It doesn't follow the plot, but struggles to survive in the doomed end. The writing is very real and there are no inexplicable OOC situations just because the characters like it. The emotional line is also very good, not too abrupt. The latest chapter really makes me happy. Yoyoyo, you are as important as the Milky Way. In this timeline, Master Heita confessed to her affectionately not long after we met, hahahahaha. The only drawback is that as a train crew cook, there are very few train scenes. Because Xianzhou set off the second universal insect plague, it is not very friendly to Xianzhou and Jingliu. Those who come for the train crew and Xianzhou can be withdrawn. But if you don't mind, it's really beautiful and worth a try

This book mainly expands and extends through several if lines of Ompharos. I highly recommend Kouga. The protagonist is an original prison character (he is the savior again, I have to ptsd about this word). There is a golden finger but it is very reasonable. It is not a cool novel, CP black tower, and the taste is quite good. There is basically no obvious OOC in the Mi You character in the book (after all, it is normal for the character selection in the if line to be different from the main world).

Write more, love to watch, the protagonist can be created, the existence of the audience is not a big deal for the main plot, and even a few points are added to it. Although some people did not like it due to their vicious tongue in the early stage, I think it is okay. As for the heroine, I can only say that Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Black Tower is extremely smart, and Ms. Black Tower is like a fish and a bird! Therefore, the author should not pay too much attention to other people's opinions, especially comments that do not correctly name the wrong ones, and continue to work hard.

A very good book that makes me delirious. Come on, brother who writes books! I gave it five stars because it looks comfortable. Is this a story full of "redemption"? (Although it's just my personal feeling?) Although I don't know what other basic settings the author has for the protagonist, I feel that being alone is too lonely. Love and love are not necessary. The epic protagonists are all loners, but it is too lonely. I may have watched too many loners, so I think the protagonist should have a like-minded partner. I hope that the Black Tower will also have some "memory", even a trivial "hint"? I believe that the wisdom of genius will discover everything from the clues in the "loopholes". Come on! The book is very nice. The road to salvation should not be lonely, this book kind of reminded me of some youth literature books. Of course, the author hasn't started using knives yet, and I hope there won't be any knives. But it turns out that tragedy is what makes people unforgettable. Those who work for everyone should not be killed in the wind and snow.

Second brush lightning protection warning. The protagonist went crazy when the mid-term team was defending. Let the bugs kill people in front of the general, so all you righteous babies can give up. Also, this is a second-generation fanfic, and every character is OOC. As well as reinventing the world view, all those who are too strict can stop reading it. If you really want to watch it but feel something is wrong, please sit down and pour yourself a glass of water like me, and then you will remember that you are watching a second creation. The quality is very good, and it has its own story, but the protagonist is not a regretful person. In the first world line, the protagonist failed to save Ompharos. And this book is not invincible, the system does not mean it does not. And a lot of the plot is supplemented by the author's own imagination, so the original work can avoid lightning. I gave it four stars mainly because the protagonist is already crazy and has no sense of killing. .