Beng Tie: Just Give Me an Order and Throw IX as a Spirit of Memory.

The progress of this book is visible to the naked eye. From the slight frustration at the beginning to the rapid iteration of the protagonist's combat power at the end, the character of the protagonist and the author's writing style are indeed constantly improving. More importantly, there are no lapses in the writing that should not be stuck, and it deserves five stars.

Overall, the viewing experience is improving. A little suggestion about the end of the if line. For example, the timeline changes at the end of 57, and Black Tower talks about redefining the denied protagonist. It feels absurdly abrupt. If you add an extra, such as a simple galactic news broadcast, using news to narrate the beginning and end of the war, and other characters' views on the protagonist, it will make the character image more three-dimensional, and it will also make the if line narrative more complete. Like, emmm, a small theater? I feel that the look and feel will be much better, the if line will not have an abrupt ending, and there will be a hook and so on. Flaws don't cover up strengths, come on, author

This book has mixed reviews, but I think it is very well written. First of all, the writing The author's way of shaping the role of the protagonist is amazing and completely breaks the In the past, the protagonist followed Jia Baoyu's advice. Jia Baoyu is no more In the past, I was always chatting and doing nothing with Thanos. Secondly, The description of Voldemort's battle with Xiangzi is three-pointed and vivid. Now, the image of Aiyin as weak and incompetent in our hearts has been completely changed. Like. Moreover, Voldemort was not like the original work, from the beginning he was right The white-headed man fell in love with him, but after witnessing Hai Mao's chaos and abandonment... Later, he secretly fell in love with her, and the logic of the plot became smoother. Incomparable. (The guy who came next door changed it [laughs crookedly])

At present, it should be a single female protagonist, The Dark Tower. The protagonist is very calm and the plot is relatively reasonable. The author basically stabilizes it with two chapters a day. Although it is quite comfortable to read, it is scary to assume the role of the protagonist. [Pause face] I can only say that the crazy man who collapses the iron fate is still too crazy [cover face] Overall, I like it very much. Come on, author.

It's very interesting to watch. It doesn't follow the plot, but struggles to survive in the doomed end. The writing is very real and there are no inexplicable OOC situations just because the characters like it. The emotional line is also very good, not too abrupt. The latest chapter really makes me happy. Yoyoyo, you are as important as the Milky Way. In this timeline, Master Heita confessed to her affectionately not long after we met, hahahahaha. The only drawback is that as a train crew cook, there are very few train scenes. Because Xianzhou set off the second universal insect plague, it is not very friendly to Xianzhou and Jingliu. Those who come for the train crew and Xianzhou can be withdrawn. But if you don't mind, it's really beautiful and worth a try

This book mainly expands and extends through several if lines of Ompharos. I highly recommend Kouga. The protagonist is an original prison character (he is the savior again, I have to ptsd about this word). There is a golden finger but it is very reasonable. It is not a cool novel, CP black tower, and the taste is quite good. There is basically no obvious OOC in the Mi You character in the book (after all, it is normal for the character selection in the if line to be different from the main world).

Write more, love to watch, the protagonist can be created, the existence of the audience is not a big deal for the main plot, and even a few points are added to it. Although some people did not like it due to their vicious tongue in the early stage, I think it is okay. As for the heroine, I can only say that Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Black Tower is extremely smart, and Ms. Black Tower is like a fish and a bird! Therefore, the author should not pay too much attention to other people's opinions, especially comments that do not correctly name the wrong ones, and continue to work hard.

A very good book that makes me delirious. Come on, brother who writes books! I gave it five stars because it looks comfortable. Is this a story full of "redemption"? (Although it's just my personal feeling?) Although I don't know what other basic settings the author has for the protagonist, I feel that being alone is too lonely. Love and love are not necessary. The epic protagonists are all loners, but it is too lonely. I may have watched too many loners, so I think the protagonist should have a like-minded partner. I hope that the Black Tower will also have some "memory", even a trivial "hint"? I believe that the wisdom of genius will discover everything from the clues in the "loopholes". Come on! The book is very nice. The road to salvation should not be lonely, this book kind of reminded me of some youth literature books. Of course, the author hasn't started using knives yet, and I hope there won't be any knives. But it turns out that tragedy is what makes people unforgettable. Those who work for everyone should not be killed in the wind and snow.

Second brush lightning protection warning. The protagonist went crazy when the mid-term team was defending. Let the bugs kill people in front of the general, so all you righteous babies can give up. Also, this is a second-generation fanfic, and every character is OOC. As well as reinventing the world view, all those who are too strict can stop reading it. If you really want to watch it but feel something is wrong, please sit down and pour yourself a glass of water like me, and then you will remember that you are watching a second creation. The quality is very good, and it has its own story, but the protagonist is not a regretful person. In the first world line, the protagonist failed to save Ompharos. And this book is not invincible, the system does not mean it does not. And a lot of the plot is supplemented by the author's own imagination, so the original work can avoid lightning. I gave it four stars mainly because the protagonist is already crazy and has no sense of killing. .

It looks good, although it's a bit frustrating at the front, but it's actually pretty good. The main character behind the scenes is really charming. Respect the original character. But not completely ignoring yourself. After all, it can be reopened. An ideal, polite unscrupulousness [learned] It's getting better and better, but the black tower is not easy to deal with. It is very exciting, after all, I came here for the Black Tower. But it feels easy to collapse. [Understood][Thinking]

Next up for the kids are: The only Commander of "Nothingness", the Army of Destruction, the Commander of Preservation, the Commander of Joy, the Commander of Knowledge, Company P47, member of the Genius Club Elbowed Xianzhou and Iron Tomb three times, elbowed Foehn twice, elbowed Bo Shizun and Lan once, started the divine battle three times, stabbed Elbow Wood twice, killed Ruan Mei, one of the Genius Club, once, downloaded the 360 Guardians and Birds wallpaper for Iron Tomb, was watched by Aha, brought an end to the third timeline, the boyfriend of the Black Tower of the Genius Club, the savior of the four timelines, the "existence" star god shot - Jiang Jiu The barrage in the front is a bit confusing, but overall it's pretty good. The pitfalls of the barrage in the back have also been cleared up. Highly recommended.

The writing is very good. In my opinion, if more people read this book, it will have to get a minimum score of 8.5. It is excellent in all aspects. The barrage in the front is as crazy as it is in the back. In short, the logic is rigorous and the plot is smooth. After reading it today, I feel that I have started to follow the book.

The first 12 pictures were a bit frustrating, but in the latter part it was obvious that the writing was well done, the characters were well developed, and there was no OOC in the characters. The protagonist is not so much a savior, but a person who is constantly struggling, dealing with various timelines leading to the end, and trying to survive by preventing the ending from ending. The emotional line between the protagonist and the Black Tower is also good. When I watched it, I thought of "Sinner's Elegy" After reaching bad endings again and again, the protagonist becomes more and more upset, but that's right, there's no way he can be on the road to [salvation] without being upset. I think, regardless of how high the rating of this book is, it is at least a book with a rating of 8.5 Or above. In some plots, I listened to the music. The name of the music is "False Flag". If you like metal, you can listen to it. I feel that the melody is very suitable for the protagonist's subversion.

Nice! The emotional line is not obtrusive, the fighting scenes are just right, the dialogue is not stiff, and it is not the kind of dialogue that is nutritious. Jiang Jiu works as a savior and has a kind heart but is not a holy mother. At least the Three Views are not the kind of people who let themselves go completely as soon as they get the power. To be honest, I have seen too many heaven-defying content. This one is really worth savoring. In addition, the protagonist has a strong sense of responsibility. When people with a little bit of empathy see the early and middle stages of the film, they feel panicked because of the pressure that the identity of the savior brings to the protagonist. Before watching the movie, I was exhausted from watching it, because he jumped in countless timelines, and the feeling of frustration was always lingering in my heart, but when I watched the movie later, the feeling was released at once and it was very refreshing. Also, the protagonist is C from beginning to end, but it is not the kind of mindless upgrade. His growth line is very clear. To sum up, it is a very good book, not inferior to Bai Luan's.

An excellent Bengtie fan, telling the story of a genuine savior who saves the world at the end of the line at all costs. The heroine is Black Tower, a single heroine. The author not only wrote the character of Heita who dares to love and hate, but also did not interfere too much with the development of the plot because he wanted to write this relationship well. This is rare. The plot in the article is very logical and complete, and the various emotions evoked are also very real, fascinating and thought-provoking. Most importantly, there is a very happy ending, which is what I loved most about it. All in all, this is a Bengtie fanfic that is worth reading and can be read carefully. [Solemn statement: Some of the poisonous points that appear in the front are actually foreshadowing for the rest. Don't abandon the book because of these poisonous points. Keep reading, you won't be disappointed]

A great book. To be honest, this is the only book I have finished reading this year (some are not finished yet, and some are too bad to read🌚). After reading it, I still feel a little melancholy. The book I have been chasing for a long time has also been finished, which is good. After all, stories always have to end. I feel that the character of the protagonist is very unique and charming, and he is also unique in Bengtie Circle. He is a savior, but he is not a savior. He slowly grows up from an ordinary person. There are confusions and confusions in the middle, but in the end he continues to persevere, just like Bentie Pinoconi's sentence "Why does life sleep? Everyone has a different answer." Why does life fall asleep? Because it is afraid of waking up from dreams---Liu Ying Why does life fall asleep? Because we have not yet welcomed a good death---Yellow Spring Why does life sleep? Because one day we will wake up from our dreams --- Pioneers Why does life sleep? Because one day I will wake up from my dream and welcome tomorrow again - Sunday Why does life fall asleep? The answer is not important at all---Hanabi "I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars."

Oh my God, God, this is definitely the most impressive book I have read recently. How can I express my love for this book❤️, those words are too samey-like. This book is definitely worth reading. The emotional and plot lines are wonderful. You don't need too much patience. You just need to be able to survive the first line. The more you read, the more comfortable you will be. 😋 No, I'm still unsatisfied after reading it. I feel that my whole person has been sublimated. This emotional and career line (probably) has a double harvest. The characters in it may make people feel uncomfortable, but I don't. It's fun to watch.

Looks good, loves to watch, watch more. Apart from the humiliation at the beginning, the protagonist regains his glory later on. Recommended recommended. I have been working on it for a few months and I finished it in one go. It's so short [crying][crying][crying]

To be honest, this is the book that I have grown the most from. In terms of content and writing, as well as the protagonist's state of mind and growth, this is the best fanfic I have ever seen. It is particularly worth mentioning that the author has very good control over the details of the characters. You can feel that the author is writing the book with all his heart. The writing style is very smooth. It is a work that you can fully understand the timeline sequence as long as you have played Bengtie! ! This is a work that is very worthy of five stars. I think a good fan fiction requires not only an understanding of the original text, but also the control of its own style. The author fully integrates these two points. Except for the first few chapters, which are a bit vague, it is basically a non-toxic fan fiction that combines fun and rigor.

The author writes very well. The first world-destroying line is relatively bland. When I saw the second world-destroying line, I was really excited. The barrage in the first dozen chapters is really poisonous, and the protagonist is also very stupid. But in the later chapters, I can directly kill the person who sent the barrage, which makes me feel very happy. Overall, the writing is really good. The author should update faster. These few chapters are enough for anyone to read.

It shows the many possibilities of the if line. The characters have no OOC and the possibilities of each character have reached a certain reasonable extension. It is reasonable for Ruan Mei to move towards the concept of life and become a god. It is reasonable to deal with the obsession of the Xianzhou if line. At the same time, it is reasonable to break the concept of if line hunting. Anyway, I am happy with it. The early barrage is a poisonous point, but it is also proof that Jiang Jiu is heading towards nothingness. It is a guess. The barrage and Ka Ma's voice are all means to protect Jiang Jiu from committing suicide.

It looks good, the male protagonist must be mad. [Love] It's hard to create a theme with the theme of the Destruction Order, but there is still no female protagonist. It's a rarity, the teacher must keep up the good work! [Crying] The last theme I read has been removed from the shelves... Come on, teacher! ! !

It's pretty good to watch, and a lot of fun. I'm just curious about how to write it in the later stage. After all, the combat power of Iron Tomb in the main line is so high. Ah, let me add to what the author didn't finish. He had concerns in the early stage, but the article was enjoyable in the middle stage. I didn't mention the later stage, because it was going crazy in the later stage [laughing evilly] Anyone who plays reincarnation is crazy.

It's a bit uncomfortable to see familiar people or forces die (it can only be said that development is very important in the original plot for no reason), and it has a bit of a dark and cruel flavor. Maybe this is the true state of Bengtieye's worldview? The plot explanation is quite restored, especially the characters of those geniuses. After that, it was so fun to pull the void into every divine battle, and the weakening and processing of the barrage and system were very good. In the early days, I was a bit annoyed when I saw the problems with the system and the barrage. It can be considered that among the batch of Bengtie fanfics I have read so far, I am at a higher level. Also, please be a little nicer to the protagonist. Sincerely, five stars.

Needless to say, this book is indeed well written. There are basically no OOC in the characters. There are tears, flashpoints, happiness, and sadness. Although the process of saving the timeline is very tortuous, it is these twists and turns that make this book better... Let me tell you my views on the plot. There is no doubt that the Xianzhou line is a highlight. The intersection of fertility, destruction, hunting, and protection combines multiple fates to create a huge scene. Although Xianzhou is too stubborn to be expected, it is an if line after all, which is understandable. Then there is mvp Aha, this is such a good buddy, watching us all the time, and accompanying us to the end... Finally, I wish the author can reach a higher level in the future [Love]

Advantages: The character's personality is very suitable for the game, the plot design is also excellent, the emotional output is relatively strong, and the pitfalls are basically filled. Overall, it is a top-notch masterpiece. Disadvantages (including my own subjective factors, don't criticize if you don't like it, you can discuss it, thank you): The protagonist's character is that of an ordinary person, but he is too much like an ordinary person. He is willing to destroy a timeline because of the death of the heroine (Black Tower), and he can also care about ordinary children as long as nothing happens to the heroine. So in my opinion this is a bit disconnected, after all, the protagonist himself is the savior. Secondly, what I like most about this book is the reflection on the star god and his destiny. Furthermore, because the book is centered around the fourth ending line, there is not much original plot, which also leads to the fact that there are no supporting characters independently shaped by the author. The protagonist is the only red flower

Ms. Black Tower, unparalleled in the world! Ms. Heita, you are extremely smart! Ms. Black Tower, the fish is gone! Ms. Heita is so talented! Ms. Black Tower, you are ashamed of your beauty! Ms. Black Tower, overwhelming the country! Ms. Black Tower, you have a wonderful plan! Ms. Heita, the country is beautiful and fragrant! Ms. Black Tower, beautiful and beautiful! Ms. Black Tower is so gorgeous! Ms. Black Tower, beautiful and smart! Ms. Black Tower, so charming! Ms. Heita, natural beauty! Ms. Heita, Huizhilanxin! Ms. Black Tower, you are so talented! Ms. Heita is so talented! Ms. Heita, you are extremely knowledgeable! Ms. Black Tower, well-read! Ms. Black Tower, through the past and present! Ms. Heita, learn and remember! Ms. Black Tower, wisdom about all things! Ms. Black Tower, outstanding!

Yes, from the initial frustration to the emptiness of the iron tomb, the perception continues to improve, the combat power also increases rapidly, and the inner growth of the protagonist can also be seen, it is beautiful.

Personally, I felt that it was a little boring in the early stages, but gradually improved in the later chapters when it became more capable. Mainly because it was the first time I read such a "brave" book and dared to directly write about the death of a character. Summary: The content is "very" novel, and the author's writing style is good. Personally, I have different opinions from the author on the use of destiny abilities and the characterization of character behavior and psychology, which makes me read this book a little bit... I can't understand it. However, this book is already superior to the entire Bentie Second Creation. I hope the author can understand the characters more deeply and achieve a more perfect plot [Please update] [Please update]

It is undoubtedly a masterpiece. The author's thinking is very clear. He does not respect the characters of the original work in the traditional way. He will move when necessary when the plot requires it. At the same time, mobilizing the characters in the plot will not make people disgusted. The whole story is very coherent and there is no simplistic part. The whole story is to promote the main line of the plot and serve it. I am really satisfied. When some viewers complain about the movie, we should actually reconsider who is more suitable to say these things. Some people complain about some very philosophical things, which is a bit OOC, such as Li Dazhen