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This kind of novel is a good one. It's quite funny. I read fan conspiracy theory novels every day. It's annoying to death. Some people know what the content is after reading the beginning of every chapter.

Not bad, a relaxed and happy type of fanfic [laughing and crying] There is not so much bitterness and deep hatred, and some regrets will be retained. Somewhat funny

The subject matter is very good, indeed very good. It would be nice if the sense of space and time could be clearer! There is also a need to control the weight of the narrative. Accelerate where it should be accelerated, focus where it should be focused, and don't rush the narrative too quickly. Otherwise, your brain will be muddy while reading, and readers will feel a headache while reading, and there is a high probability of abandoning the book.

Actually it's not bad, the score is on the low side, 8 points should be about right. The plot is lively and interesting, but the pace is too fast, lacks details, and tastes a bit dry. The writing style is joyful, but it only has its ups and downs, and you will easily get bored after watching it for a long time. This should be the main reason for the low score. I personally suggest that you can make the characters fuller and bury a few knives.

There are currently 62 chapters updated. After reading it, I feel pretty good. I saw some comments about middle school. Yes a little bit. It still feels interesting and quite relaxing. It is much better than those depressing articles written by young people.

It's good-looking, very joyful, it writes about daily life, and the combined jokes are not very prominent [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

It's good-looking. The protagonist is quite shameless, but I quite like it [snickering] [snickering] [snickering]. It's very interesting.

A different Naruto fan, I finally found a novel that is not purely about martial arts. It's good, I love reading it, and I will read more.

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The writing is still great, and the way it is presented is very relaxed and joyful [sending my heart]

It was still very beautiful in the front, but after the war it became just daily life and became dull.

It's pretty good, but I rarely see the protagonist take action, or I haven't seen it so far. There is only a description of strength without corresponding achievements. Generally speaking, it is more like a group portrait. Most of the protagonists only play a role in advancing the plot. I hope to see more highlights of the protagonist. Judging from the current plot, the protagonist may be more like a cover-up.

It's good, Naruto is born from a different perspective of Sunagakure.

Okay okay. It's a very good Naruto fanfic, and it's also the second one about Born in the Land of Wind. I personally read the 2nd one

It would have been nice to have more combat sequences. I feel like this could have been a table with Dave. I can't accept 6 stars as a Kazekage for Danzo. Please encourage me.

The plot looks very familiar, similar to the Bencao Ninja Village where I started. The writing is pretty good so far.

It's a very interesting and interesting Naruto story, but it looks like I'm going to die at any moment just by the amount of updates.

It's well written, funny and fun, the protagonist has a lovable personality and is a successor to socialism

Very much in line with expectations, satisfactory

It's okay, I think

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

It's interesting, keep up the good work, young man

It's so sad that the most exciting part of the book is gone. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

I have written more than 80 pictures of this now. I like the first 40 pictures, but the later ones are not to my taste. Of course, it's also well written.

Niu, it can be considered as innovative. Although there are shadows of the Country of Grass

It's so interesting. Those who are not well versed in reading can take a look.

It's very novel and interesting. Finally, it's not a conspiracy in Konoha. I don't dare to do this or that. It's great to develop power. I really can't jump out of those who write. I can't write if I jump out. Come on, author.

A different cool article about the ninja world, quite interesting, come on! ! !

The writing is quite interesting and has the feel of farming style

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