Quick Travel: System Failure, Black Moonlight Scumbag Please Save Yourself

This is not a story where the heroine is a heartthrob and she completely abuses the man and dotes on the woman. It feels more like a story where both sides hate the sea and love the sky. The female protagonist is still a type who focuses on tasks and supplements her emotions with growth. I prefer this type. The various characters I write are also my xp. They look beautiful to me. It would be nice if they were more contradictory and forced to love them more.

I think Changxing should be witty, brave and powerful, and should not be used to highlight the male protagonist. There are long stars in each plane to constrain the male protagonist to lower his body to cater to him, as if it is just a foreshadowing to create a strong image of the male protagonist. Is the death of Changxing the greatest revenge for the male protagonist?

It's very beautiful. I felt sour when I watched it. I really liked the male protagonist's moist and airtight love. I like the character of the heroine, she is strong and independent, like a tenacious grass. It's a bit sadistic for the female protagonist, but even more sadistic for the male protagonist, sour and sweet. What I like most is the system. I like the relationship between the system and the heroine, especially when the original system died, I cried. I feel that the system and the heroine are companions beyond friendship [crying] [crying]

The abuse of the female protagonist was all a tragedy directed and performed by himself. While he felt that the heroine liked him because she was controlled by a spell, On the other hand: "Even if she doesn't love me, I will still pester her." He didn't listen to the heroine's personal words about liking it at all, and lived in his own logical closed loop. The one who tortures is the heroine, and the one who enjoys it is his own affectionate character. There's also the heroine, it's only in the last two pages that she realizes how powerful she is, and the first few pages look so aggrieved🙅 The reason for giving high marks is that the subject matter is novel and the length is not long, so you can follow it and read it.

It's very beautiful. I originally thought it was the same routine, but this one is really different. Each world will be more exciting and beautiful than the last one! And every world is related and connected. The author works harder!

It's very interesting. It would be better if the ending of each small world is happy and not the kind of detachment. It turns out that it was all the director's fault in the end. I hope the male and female protagonists will have more sweet side stories. In each of the previous small worlds, the male protagonist's possessiveness is really poignant. I felt my heart swell while watching it, and the female protagonist is also very good at coaxing him. Both of them are very sweet. System 999 is also a little boy with a rough life experience. He is very cute. And I think the setting of this novel is very novel. I have never read this kind of novel. Although there have been quick travel stories before, it is very different from this one. It would be better if the male and female protagonists can have more sweet scenes. I don't know why there is no way to reward this book because it doesn't seem to be updated on Tomato. I don't know if the author can see the comments. It is really good. I hope the author can write more and better books.

I finished reading it in one go, and overall it is quite interesting. Those who like to watch the heroine can just quit, and those who like to watch the domineering girl can come in and have a taste. However, the heroine is too abusive. Every plane is so miserable that it hurts to watch. It feels too pitiful... The ending seems a bit rushed. Well, in fact, the ending of each plane ends a bit abruptly, which makes people a little unfinished, but overall it is worth watching! Because it really breaks out of the routine, and I have read too many template novels. This one is really refreshing, and the main plot is also very novel. I support everyone to read it! [Full] [full] [full]

Looks great. The first two worlds involve a bit of abuse of women. In fact, it doesn't mean that the male protagonist will hurt the female protagonist from time to time. However, it is reasonable for the male protagonist to have hatred at this time. The length here is very short. In the next few worlds, there is a kind of cycle where the male protagonist is sliced ​​and ​​hateful. The latest world is a slice of the previous world. I came to find the heroine, but I ended up feeling jealous. It's very interesting. If you really don't like to accept the plot that hurts the heroine, you can start watching from the third world. It is not a fan-centered one, a micro-guide, but the male protagonist will conquer himself [shy] The pulling feeling is really strong, the author please give me more food, keep this level, I like it so much... In addition, the conversation between the heroine and the system is really funny

This book is indeed very well written and plotted, especially the part about the male protagonist's forced lovemaking. Everything is very good. Why is the score so low? I think it should be 9.0+, I'm really an old bookworm. The author has written this book very well. I am still looking forward to the future direction. Please update more soon ~ I will keep following you hahahaha

I like this book very much. After reading it, I sighed that the two protagonists finally had a happy ending. It was not easy. I used to like to read fast-travel stories with two male protagonists similar to this kind of plot, but I always couldn't stand it after halfway through? I have been reading this book carefully for a long time. I will take notes and underline the passages I like when I see them, and I am impressed by the author's delicate writing style. I'll come back to read it again in the future when I'm short of books. Maybe after two nights when I can't sleep, I'll read it again and listen to it hahahaha Looking forward to the author's next work

I have read it for a long time and I am basically not someone who writes any reviews, but for this novel, I think it is very good. The characters are very successful, the sense of substitution is strong, and the writing is relatively delicate and smooth.

This book is not bad, the structure is quite compact, but the ending feels a bit abrupt. I think one of the points of debate with such a low score may be about the issue of abusing the male protagonist or the female protagonist. I don't think the abuse of the female protagonist is miserable. It's not that I don't love women. It's mainly because of the background. It is true that the female protagonist has done very bad things. You can't expect the male protagonist to be a holy father. In my opinion, the male and female protagonists torture each other, but they are both happy. I can only say that one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Anyway, I think it's okay. The emotional portrayal is quite vivid. If you don't mind the male and female protagonists torturing each other, you can watch it. Although the two of them had misunderstandings, they ended up getting together, which is not considered a be. After seven hours of speedrunning, I actually became a true fan. Thank you for the love.

It's been a long time since I've seen a good article. I've read a lot of fast-moving articles, basically all genres, so many of the articles are more or less in conflict with each other. This one written by the author is pretty good, haha. The subject matter is very good and great. I can directly catch up with the latest chapter.

It's all be, it feels like I'm forcing myself to be

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, in line with my taste. The heroine found her former lover through clues. Later, the administration actually lied, making the heroine think that she was not in love with the same person. Fortunately, it ended up being beautiful. The male protagonist made me cry a bit when he was abandoned. The administration stinks.

More, please, goddess, just feed the chickens. You win, brother, you completely won this time. You broke my psychological defense. I completely broke my defense. In front of you, I am just a wild dog that has been soaked in heavy rain. At this moment, I understand that the real defense is broken and I can't even utter a rebuttal. It turns out that a moth that has never seen light in its life burns not its wings when it throws itself into the fire, but the only hope left in its heart. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll do it again in the future. Please, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll do it again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. I beg you.

The heroine is very smart and has a strong sense of life. The plot design is very novel and the plot is logical. I like how the heroine handles emotions so decisively in every world. The author writes very well ^ω^

It looks good, the writing is good, the plot is good, and the logic is good. Thinking about it carefully, the heroine is so miserable, nothing happened of her own free will. She obviously likes the hero, but he still doesn't believe her even though he is still ill. The administration also tries to trick her. The heroine dies in the original world and in those false worlds, all in extremely painful ways. And then they are not real worlds, they are all fake, and they are all lying to the heroine. Oh my God, I feel so sad.

It's pretty good. I like to read short stories like this. I don't have the patience to read long stories. I don't think it's sad. I think it's a normal story. The male protagonist has been in love and followed the female protagonist. The author's writing is very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. The ending is he. Although the ending of each plane is that the heroine is separated from the task, the finale is he. You can enter it. It's a good quick time story.

I can't help it, I really haven't seen enough. In conclusion, the male protagonist still feels insecure in his heart. He hopes that the female protagonist will love him. The female protagonist also follows her heart before knowing the truth. She inevitably falls in love with the male protagonist. It makes me cry! Really good-looking! !

It's very interesting. I saw reviews saying that it was very well written and should be rated at least 9 points, so I came here. The writing is indeed good. If it is of this quality, it must be at least 8.5 Or above. I don't understand why this rating is only over 6 points. Most of the book reviews I read are five-star reviews. Personal rating 9 points 2👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 It is currently down to 8.5 Points. I don't understand the reason why the heroine ended her plane? Just like the heroine in the first world wedding knew that she should leave in 10 days, I was a little confused when I saw this. Because for me, I felt like there was no foreshadowing. Doesn't it mean that the system failed? , And then without any explanation, they just said that they should leave in ten days. When it came to leaving on that day, the system still said that it was still not possible...? Why don't you ask me? The logic is not smooth. We can't advance the plot for the sake of advancing the plot, right? I still feel that the reason why the heroine ends her plane is unclear. Readers standing outside the book know when the heroine will leave (after the male and female protagonists reconcile and she abuses the male protagonist), but there is no logical line in it.

I finished reading it. It was very interesting and finished. I can finish it. In fact, when I was reading the first plane, there was a small point where I wanted to quit. But I couldn't find anything good to read because of the shortage of books, so I continued reading. Overall, it was very good-looking and the writing was good. I looked at the first plane again, and it was still thunder. I don't recommend watching it. You can watch the later ones.

It's quite tempting to watch. I want to know what's going on, whether the heroine can return to her own world, and what's going on with the medium and the heroine. [Chigua] I wonder if the heroine will die in the original world, and then the hero knows the ending and becomes a medium. He wants to resurrect the heroine. Please finish it as soon as possible!

The difference in strength between the male and female protagonists is huge... If you really want to complete the task after your emotions are cleared, you would normally want to cut through the mess with a quick knife... The female protagonist is left with a weak back-up. The overall feeling is that it is lucky that the heroine fell in love, otherwise the success rate of resistance would be 0. Some descriptions describe the hero having hallucinations of a domestic violence man. When the heroine was hurt, he felt distressed and couldn't bear it, so he began to forgive again.

I think this novel can definitely be rated as a high-scoring fast-travel novel. Every time a fast-travel plot is relatively dull, there will be a turning point, pushing the plot into another small climax, making people want to read on, and the heroine is also smart. Like 😻 I think the story is well written, but in the final finale, there is always a feeling that everything has not been said. For example, what is the bureau in charge of this director doing? The male protagonist stripped off his soul, summarized it in just one sentence, and then got together with the female protagonist. Is the male protagonist an immortal existence? What impact will this move have on him? Maybe I've read too many cool articles, but I always feel that the final ending should be clearer and clearer. In the end, the heroine and the hero live a very comfortable life anyway.

This book is very different, except that the first world is not that exciting, the following worlds are one after another, with new ideas [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] If you want to see the counter-routine, you can rush [Blow a kiss]

It seems that they are all ancient and have no current meaning. The mermaid is an animal that skips the unequal status of male and female protagonists and always reminds me of the aquarium inexplicably? Then the male protagonist seems to be a slice of the story. Has anyone finished watching it? The part about torturing men is pretty good and you can watch it. It's a bit sadistic. Actually, I don't think the female protagonist has much subjectivity. The female protagonist is forced to follow the plot in order to survive. After completing the plot, she is forced to love the male protagonist and falls in love with the male protagonist in the process. After falling in love with the male protagonist, there will be some hidden female competition plot. Later, the heroine misunderstood. The heroine was disappointed and the hero explained that he only loved her. The heroine coaxed him back. The plot of the hero misunderstanding the heroine was that the hero was angry, the hero did bad things, the heroine pleased the hero, the hero did not believe the heroine, and the heroine continued to please the heroine. Well, there are indeed too few dastardly male protagonists who don't abuse women.

It looks so good, I guarantee it with my almost ten years of book age! The author should be faster [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Wu Changxing×Ning Yao Warm words of love for the senior sister × Super unconfident and lack of love for the little wolf dog It has a beginning and an end, every pit has been filled, and I enjoyed every moment so much that I feel like I could write a novel. The combination of System 999 and the heroine is the king of comedy, and the comments like "Your mother is too" are particularly funny. In the whole text, there is only one bad guy: the director, Jie Jie Jie.

Is the male protagonist a slice? Author, can you please talk to me~ It hurts to see it