Naruto: Jiraiya, With All That Intel, Why Aren't You Scheming Yet?

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.

My piece of information, Jiraiya, is truly invincible 🤦

Four stars for seedlings that are currently non-toxic. The writing is good. However, when I encounter Obito in the comment section, he always talks about Kenji no matter what he does. It is too low-key. When I am about to discuss the plot and be touched by emotions, Kenji summarizes the plot and character in one sentence. It seems quite speechless, but the author writes well.

What's going on? It's actually Jiraiya who has the information. It's given to you. It's given to you.

Now the information is really coming from Jiraiya, he is so sinister, he has brains, and he is good-looking.

The writing is very good, the author's ideas are very clever, and the plot is also handled well. It breaks when it is necessary to make choices, and it is not merciless when it is necessary to kill. The design of the protagonist is also very good. Although he is a toad, his behavior is very clever. Minato's character is very consistent with my mind, and the third generation is also the same. Finally, it is not a brainless conspiracy theory. Overall, it looks very smooth. In the end, the information Jiraiya is not bad! [Note]

Here are some explanations. 1. The tone of this book: The tone of this book is about making up for regrets and having fun. 2. The problem of the title of the protagonist: The protagonist's name is Jiang Chen, and most of the characters in the book are called Toad Chen. The title will change depending on the character of each character, such as Orochimaru (Jiang Chenjun). 3: In the early stage of this book, Kakashi may be persecuted, but in the later stage, he will join forces with the determined Obito (who has not made a big mistake yet). 4 The Anbu of Death: There are many solutions, such as reincarnation, clone soul transfer, etc. 5. Problems with character design of each character: Because of the jokes, names such as Intelligence Jiraiya and Returning Home Minato will undergo slight changes in character design, which may result in some OOC. If you have any suggestions, please remind me, and I will make appropriate modifications based on the impact of the protagonist on the ninja world. Thank you all.

So far, very good Advantages: A lot of fun, but also logical The character creation is very good, deeper and more complex than the original work, without being OOC. For example, Minato not only wrote the "little sun" image of the original work, which is sunny and cheerful, powerful and makes people feel like spring breeze, but also wrote the ruthless and decisive nature of Hokage that was not reflected in the original work. There is also a very good portrayal of politics (the funny thing is that many Naruto fan authors write about political bean curds that are even more laughable than Kishimoto) The writing style is also very good. There are many side descriptions, but it is not boring. It does not look like the writing style of a new writer at all. Disadvantages: I really can't see any shortcomings at the moment. If I have to say it, the protagonist's presence is not very strong, but this can also be an advantage, because the protagonist is neither a bastard nor a system, it is more like a group drama, everyone has a role, and everyone's portrayal is very three-dimensional. Also, the main character's name is too weird, either Toad Chen or Chen. Minato's mouthing "Mr. Jiang Chen" is too weird.

Nice, the details are in place. The logic makes sense too. It's just that the golden flash holding Kakashi is a bit girly. Haven't seen any poisonous spots yet. Keep writing, bookmarked

Although I prefer Samsung in my mind, but in order for the author to continue writing, I can only say that some settings and details cannot be delved into. If you delve into this work, there is nothing interesting. It feels like entertainment and serious work. Ah, you are still playing tricks, you are still playing house, you are still playing around, this is not your daily writing, you are nervous and ready to start a war, and at the same time you are still playing house like that kind of child. Since you can't describe the main character anymore, why don't you write about other places? Wouldn't it be enough to just say that the cheating artifact was successfully researched secretly? Describe it in such detail? Ai this piece