Naruto: Isn't the Information Jiraiya Still Shady?

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.

My piece of information, Jiraiya, is truly invincible [face covering]

Four stars for seedlings that are currently non-toxic. The writing is good. However, when I encounter Obito in the comment section, he always talks about Kenji no matter what he does. It is too low-key. When I am about to discuss the plot and be touched by emotions, Kenji summarizes the plot and character in one sentence. It seems quite speechless, but the author writes well.

What's going on? It's actually Jiraiya who has the information. It's given to you. It's given to you.

Now the information is really coming from Jiraiya, he is so sinister, he has brains, and he is good-looking.

The writing is very good, the author's ideas are very clever, and the plot is also handled well. It breaks when it is necessary to make choices, and it is not merciless when it is necessary to kill. The design of the protagonist is also very good. Although he is a toad, his behavior is very clever. Minato's character is very consistent with my mind, and the third generation is also the same. Finally, it is not a brainless conspiracy theory. Overall, it looks very smooth. In the end, the information Jiraiya is not bad! [Note]

Here are some explanations. 1. The tone of this book: The tone of this book is about making up for regrets and having fun. 2. The problem of the title of the protagonist: The protagonist's name is Jiang Chen, and most of the characters in the book are called Toad Chen. The title will change depending on the character of each character, such as Orochimaru (Jiang Chenjun). 3: In the early stage of this book, Kakashi may be persecuted, but in the later stage, he will join forces with the determined Obito (who has not made a big mistake yet). 4 The Anbu of Death: There are many solutions, such as reincarnation, clone soul transfer, etc. 5. Problems with character design of each character: Because of the jokes, names such as Intelligence Jiraiya and Returning Home Minato will undergo slight changes in character design, which may result in some OOC. If you have any suggestions, please remind me, and I will make appropriate modifications based on the impact of the protagonist on the ninja world. Thank you all.

So far, very good Advantages: A lot of fun, but also logical The character creation is very good, deeper and more complex than the original work, without being OOC. For example, Minato not only wrote the "little sun" image of the original work, which is sunny and cheerful, powerful and makes people feel like spring breeze, but also wrote the ruthless and decisive nature of Hokage that was not reflected in the original work. There is also a very good portrayal of politics (the funny thing is that many Naruto fan authors write about political bean curds that are even more laughable than Kishimoto) The writing style is also very good. There are many side descriptions, but it is not boring. It does not look like the writing style of a new writer at all. Disadvantages: I really can't see any shortcomings at the moment. If I have to say it, the protagonist's presence is not very strong, but this can also be an advantage, because the protagonist is neither a bastard nor a system, it is more like a group drama, everyone has a role, and everyone's portrayal is very three-dimensional. Also, the main character's name is too weird, either Toad Chen or Chen. Minato's mouthing "Mr. Jiang Chen" is too weird.

Nice, the details are in place. The logic makes sense too. It's just that the golden flash holding Kakashi is a bit girly. Haven't seen any poisonous spots yet. Keep writing, bookmarked

Although I prefer Samsung in my mind, but in order for the author to continue writing, I can only say that some settings and details cannot be delved into. If you delve into this work, there is nothing interesting. It feels like entertainment and serious work. Ah, you are still playing tricks, you are still playing house, you are still playing around, this is not your daily writing, you are nervous and ready to start a war, and at the same time you are still playing house like that kind of child. Since you can't describe the main character anymore, why don't you write about other places? Wouldn't it be enough to just say that the cheating artifact was successfully researched secretly? Describe it in such detail? Ai this piece

The ninja world does have warmth and bonds, but it is undeniable that this world is a hell filled with war and pain, constantly causing pain to people. What I admire most about the author is this. He writes about the pain of the ninja world vividly. From what I can see, he has brought the entanglement and pain in Minato's heart to life. I can only say that I rarely see such writing in Naruto fan fiction. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you, don't let me down [Like]

Maybe it's because it just came out, so the score is relatively low. It's the first time I see Naruto from this perspective, and then the plot has also undergone some changes. Instead of following the steps and being reborn as a toad like some other games, the perspective is more interesting.

An unexpectedly good idea. I originally thought it was a novel based on the Naruto mobile game system, but I didn't expect this kind of plot development at all. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update more

Although the book is short, the content is good, the plot is well conceived, and there is nothing OOC or unreasonable. Naruto is a group portrait novel. The author wrote some of the main characters separately, and the secondary characters were basically written in one sentence or not written at all. Moreover, many details in the original text were not handled well. The characters that appeared in the front were inexplicably missing from the back. In the end, it felt like a plot kill. Overall it's okay, but it's too short and incomplete.

Looks good, makes up for the regrets

I finished reading it in one go, too short

Novel content third perspective

Apart from being small, there should be no shortcomings, right?

Nothing to say, the information Jiraiya is not bad at all. If Minato-sama wants to share the information, go get it from my place😋. All in all, it's highly recommended and good-looking [Adoration]

It's so good, please write a follow-up, please, the author.

Good review! Must praise! The author simply wrote something that touched my heart

It's well written, the writing style is very good

OK, although not perfect But I still recommend you to take a look

The book is very well written, and the author's idea is very clever. The toad from Mt. Myoboku is the main character, which is very novel, and the content is also very good.

There is nothing wrong with the rhythm and logic of the text, but the ending is a bit hasty. If it could be written more fully, the rating might be better [Chigua]

It's very good. I feel that the author's writing style is very delicate, a bit like a female video author.

Personally, I don't think it's toxic, and the character design is also very good. Although I don't like the sad feeling, I really like the overall content.

I'm not satisfied with my health

Not bad, not bad, pretty good-looking

Works to make up for regrets [crying]