Delta: Demon King Protector? If You Don't Take the Lead, I'll Count My Carbine

I clicked on it many times and read the comments, but was persuaded to leave by the comments about the heroine. I ran out of books to read, clicked to open again, and exited again. Yesterday I got on the plane and ran out of books to read. I read it offline and finished it. The comments were a bit misleading. I don't know if it has been changed. From the looks of it, I feel that the proportion of female protagonists is quite low. The heroine in a wheelchair seems to have only one chapter in total, although the settings of these female protagonists are indeed a bit too classic. Putting aside these, whether it is live streaming, interaction, games, systems, and new game settings, they are all very good. Overall, it is a very good Delta novel. Can take off

It's so cool, funny and irritating. I've been watching Lao Feiyu's slices since I got into it. The author writes the funny jokes very interestingly. It's very funny and irritating. Come on, author, you're a little crazy. Please hurry up and update more.

After watching so many Delta live streams, this is the only one that has some personal characteristics. There is a heroine who is bitter and resentful. Couldn't she write it more relaxedly?

Come on, author, I personally feel that Delta has one of the best novels with a female protagonist. Don't listen to others who say they don't want a female lead. There are already many female leads in the label, and they've all told him what's in the dish. Should he still blame others if he doesn't like it?

I've almost finished watching it. The fighting is really fun. It's said to have multiple female protagonists, but in fact it's almost 200 chapters and I don't really recommend the emotional scenes. This depends on everyone. It's definitely okay for those who don't want to see the female protagonist, but for those who want to see the female protagonist, it feels like it's too slow. Then there are some Riddlers and some plots that feel fragmented, and I feel like the context is not connected. Overall, the writing is okay.

It's really nice, but too short! I had to get a little cool and show the author two ads.

Judging from my reading time, I have been catching up on it for several consecutive night shifts. Summary: Before the new season, the viewing experience was great, absolutely treasure level. After starting the new season, I suddenly felt that it was no longer the same as before, and the sense of fragmentation was very strong. Maybe I read more game articles without female protagonists or girls. I prefer Brother Xu and 78, Lao Yang to team up and interact together, or Brother Xu to use the nameless game to teach in solo queue, so I'm sorry, I have to read the book for a while and skipped this paragraph about the female protagonist. I also like Brother Xu very much, but I can't accept Brother Xu pretending to be a tang and having a girl [face covering] Um, the heroine still needs a few more chapters. I can't stand it anymore. I suggest changing the title of the book to "I'm pretending to be in a triangular basket and slapping her face to subdue a troubled beauty" [awkward laugh]

It's really the one that kept me reading out of all the Delta fanfics I've seen. I finished reading it all in one go. I wanted to go to sleep. I hate you, author. I just feel that the current female protagonists are in quite miserable situations, being PUAed by their roommates, and being abused by their mothers or sisters, I don't know [I'm almost crying]

I could have given this book five stars because the first half was really speechless. It was very cool. It felt like watching those Chen Ze Cup games. It felt so good to kill, especially the chapters of "I Finished Killing". It felt like it was at its peak. When I saw that, I recommended this book in various book circles in the Delta. It can be said that the author's action description of this kind of game screen is simply top-notch. But starting from the anchor peak game, the author began to A large number of various female characters, emotions, and story descriptions are very delicate, but this book originally drew us in because of the excitement of fighting. I have not wanted to read the updates in the past month. I used to follow them every day, but now I have more than ten chapters and I want to skip them all. Just like Ultraman or Armor Warrior, the real core is fighting, not fighting with a bunch of girls (original family does not Okay, there are those who are beautiful and rich but dare not talk about their feelings. There are also several very beautiful female internet celebrities, and now there is a childhood sweetheart who is seriously ill.) There are all kinds of entanglements. To be honest, even if there is only one female protagonist, I can accept it if she really falls in love and plays Delta every day. The protagonist is so well portrayed, and I don't know if the author can clean up this mess of emotional lines. I'm not tired of writing, I'm really tired of reading. Really, why don't you stop reading for a day and read it. The book you wrote is really good at the beginning, but then you lose the motivation to read it. We have other choices for love and youth books, but Fighting is fun. You wrote it very well. I got goosebumps when I read Xu Xiang's Seventeen Killers in Space. Even if you delete the files and start over, try to reduce the emotional drama, okay?

This book has advantages and disadvantages, but overall it can be considered a good book. First state the advantages. The protagonist of this book has a positive outlook on life, the overall narrative is smooth, the interaction with other anchors is moderate, and the ideas for interaction with fans are also relatively fresh. There is no cliche plot of pretending to be a cup and slap in the face, and the description of the battle scenes is also relatively detailed and in-depth. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The author's writing style is a bit immature. The thinking is a bit off-topic, and the writing skills are not able to connect perfectly, which will lead to a somewhat abrupt transition in reading. Moreover, there is no clear distinction between the characters' inner thoughts and their dialogues. Sometimes it's hard to tell whether this is the character's inner thoughts or what the character says. This situation will also occur when describing the barrages sent by the audience. These barrages are not clearly distinguished and will be mixed with the dialogues of the characters. In addition, some sentences without subjects often appear during the writing process. Although it does not affect reading, it will sound strange when listening to the book. Overall, this is a book worth reading. The current rating of 8.1 Is definitely underestimated. It may have something to do with the name. I hope the author can write better and better.

Writing about games is fun, but writing about women is almost fun. It's almost as real as this game, but there's no such thing as a tail, and there are no obvious minefields. I feel like it's better to not have many female protagonists, although I just wanted to see more female protagonists come in.

It's okay. It's really fun to watch. Although there are many female protagonists, there are many suspected female protagonists, but the female protagonists don't have any roles until now. How to deal with the multiple female protagonists? Anyway, fighting is pure fun. Fighting is really fun. It's so fun.

I want to say that there is a lot of real writing but nothing. This Delta is the most successful book I have ever read. I really don't like the multi-female protagonist part (because some parts are a bit abrupt and some settings I don't like very much), but other than that, the fighting and other plots are well written. The setting and sequelae of the red system safe are also very novel, and the update speed is very fast, so I beg you, the author, can you put a mark in front of the chapters where the female protagonist appears, I will skip it directly.ヽ(´¬`)ノ I'd better support it with five stars. I still quite like this book. I wish the author's book a success and many gifts. First of all, [Xu Gequan Miquan has gone crazy. And then there's the author, are you feeling your second spring now? Why are there so many plots with female protagonists? Forget about your heroine complex, why is your emotional line so stiff? And I came in just to watch the battles. What the hell is it that you let the protagonist play around with without any reason? And what about my threesome match? I'm really begging you, I'm a little bit tired of looking at it. But I still wonder if you give me a perfect score, will more people see you being more restrained? So it's still five stars.

It's good to watch. I love watching [shy][shy]. I just love watching more female protagonists. I feel so relieved by the author's arrangement. I should say it or not, but this book is very well written. What is the most important thing? The important thing is that I can see that the characters in this book are not doing something for the sake of something, such as giving for free. They all have their own thoughts and lives. They are more like real people than other books. This point deserves more praise. The low rating of this book is probably due to those who love no heroine or those who only love single heroine, but what I want to say is, multiple heroines are great. Author, I really hope this book can live a good life.

There are a lot of memes. They are all high-intensity live broadcast surfers. It's fun to watch. There are a few female characters whose scenes are superfluous, and a few are quite good. I don't know how to deal with the female characters in the future. Keep reading.

It's actually okay. I read a lot of comments and almost told her to quit because the heroine was scolding me. Fortunately, after reading it, the author seems to have changed it, and I didn't see any very influential content. It is quite good-looking in Delta State. Keep up the good work, author

After reading it for two days, I personally think that the ups and downs of this book are very obvious. There are currently more than 600 chapters. The emotional scenes are really tiring to watch. It can be seen that the author wants to thin out the emotional lines of many female protagonists. However, the value given by the Delta Online game in the early stage is too high. After reading such a burning game, I continued to read the emotional scenes with low emotions, which caused quite a lot of emotional fluctuations. And the author didn't realize that the day before the protagonist's offline game was about to start, his childhood sweetheart came out to get into trouble. But I have to say that the first 500 chapters are very good. I decided to keep them for a while and come back to see them after all the girls have been taken in. Come on, author, hold on

Overall, it's very good. It's very high-quality. The ideas are clear and I can see the outline, but the pace is very slow. Although the author's writing is good and it's really good-looking, the cheating has been delayed for too long. I hope the author can control it well and have similar plots in the future to be a little faster [eating melon]

It's still good-looking. When writing about sadness, it's like Wen Quxing's coming to earth. When writing about all the heroines, it's not good. It's just 292-301. The first night when I was drunk and I said a few truths, the result was still the same. It's the same as whether I said it or not. Sometimes the protagonist is jealous and sometimes the heroine is jealous. It's really uncomfortable to watch, but the others are still highly recommended.

It's okay, it's quite funny, but I came here for Triangular Basket with Multiple Girls. 95% Of the plot is written about playing with other anchors. I hope there can be more plots about younger sisters, otherwise I might as well watch videos and live broadcasts.

It's currently five stars, although it's like some brainless cool articles. It gives some exclusive red item entries that belong to the protagonist, but they are only used as side dishes and not as the main course. The protagonist's character is also very hard-working. More of the content in the book is derived from the protagonist's personality. This main course is good. Game derivatives are easy to write because the world view is ready-made, and the characters of the supporting characters are also ready-made. The difficulty lies in how to write brilliantly. This book is pretty good so far 25.12.09

Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! There are so many jokes in it, it makes people think it's funny, and then it's paired with delta, good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It looks good, I love watching it, I give you 5 points so you won't be proud! I feel like there isn't much fighting content, it's all brushed off. The content is so quiet that I finished it without paying attention.

The brotherhood is well written, and has the flavor of true brothers that are rare in Delta. That's right, when you dig for gold in the yellow mud of tomatoes, you can't tell the difference between red and yellow. At present, apart from the short update, the taste is quite good. Look at the owl

The live broadcast and the fighting are very good, but the multiple female protagonists are a bit... I wonder how to deal with it. After reading 180 photos, I feel that it is not as good as writing a single female protagonist. The remaining leading roles are blunt, and there are not many in Dragon. Plus, the anchor is a public figure and has multiple female protagonists. It is difficult to explain reasonably. Then why is it still five stars? Because the battle is so exciting. Overall, I can watch it.

This is a good book. It is true that this kind of live broadcast is written. Not only the audience in the book is watching the live broadcast, in fact, those of us who are reading novels are also watching the live broadcast. The live broadcast content of this book is interesting and also makes people have pictures in their minds [Like] [Like]

Good-looking and good-looking, all depends on the support of peers, there are only a few good-looking ones in Triangle

I don't know why the rating is so low, but this is definitely a high-quality book. The author definitely has works on other platforms. He should be an old writer. The description and shaping are very good. I am very glad that I was not deceived by the rating. It is among the best-looking delta novels. I highly recommend it. It is a good read.

It feels pretty good, Dahong's unique attributes are very novel, and the plot is funny and joyful

Ok, it's over 400 chapters, so I'll give it an 8.9 For the time being. The points deducted are for the emotional scenes~ The rest of the writing is very good, the handsomeness of the oral demon, the second personality of Shushu, and the abstractness of the live broadcast are all in line with my taste (I prefer abstract and interesting ones), but the number of words is a bit small, and updates are slow~